Wraithbait

This is wonderful. I'd say 'marry me' but I'm not much for commitment. So I'll just stare adoringly at your pen-name.

*lol* Atlantis, the obsessive girlfriend XD I wonder when she starts to block the gate when he wants to go out on a offworld mission, being pissed of at his 'boys nights' XD Great story Yours GB

ROFLMAO. That was great! The characterizations, the plot, the *city* being in love with John, and Rodney giving her advice. I loved Rodney and Dr. Z laughing at John. I also like the thought that John was a little resentful of the city for "rolling over for the Ancients". I would have to agree with that feeling. Thanks for sharing

Author's Response: Hah, thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Saving the robots for John's birthday! That is so funny! Loved this.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

This is hilarious! I especially enjoyed how Rodney is trying to help--giving the city dating advice that somehow resulted in a tree growing outside John's quarters! Please continue; I'd love to see the next stage. Will the city get hurt and then angry and vengeful? Are there robots? Inquiring minds want to know.

Author's Response: Hah, this makes me want to come up with something where they do find robots! One of my friends wrote a sequel here: http://apple-pi.livejournal.com/196604.html

ok, so this has to continue...it ended too soon. More please?

Author's Response: One of my lovely friends wrote a sequel here: http://apple-pi.livejournal.com/196604.html