Great story. I liked Carson's confused thoughts. You did a good job of showing how the illness had muddled his thinking, but yet still kept it clear enough that the story was easily followed. I liked John's part too, how he can't say what he's feeling, can't let go of the need to be in control, yet he got himself released from the mission early and that says it all really. Laura.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind fb! I'm glad you liked it. The prompt I had to write to was hard for me (ferret?) so I'm glad it worked as an actual story.
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