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Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008 5:26 pm
Intriguing twists. Lots of potential - I'd like to see where it goes.
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Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008 5:23 pm
I really like the ideas. Nice group and the leave-taking was touching.

The story itself though isn't really a story yet. Rule of thumb - show not tell. The background detail is good, but for a story prologue it would be better to have the goodbyes, then deliver the background on why as part of a group conversation or later as explanations to the SGA team.
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Reviewer: Padme4000 (Signed)
15 Nov 2007 5:49 pm
i liked this
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Reviewer: Danie (Anonymous)
06 Jun 2007 3:33 pm
Areyou going to update soon i want to know what is happening and what is going to happen!!
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Reviewer: sheneya (Signed)
14 Feb 2007 1:43 am
I like your story, more please.
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Reviewer: Freaky (Anonymous)
07 Feb 2007 12:03 am
I love your story so far, it has an intriguing plot and I can't wait for the next update!!hint,hint!!
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Reviewer: storyscriber (Anonymous)
03 Feb 2007 8:39 pm
Just found this site -- squee!! Love where this is going more please -- puppy eyes 0_0
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Reviewer: Manic (Anonymous)
02 Nov 2006 6:09 am
Interesting start. I wonder what the connection is with Rodney. I guess I'll have to wait and find out ;)
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