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Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008 11:26 am
Intriguing twists. Lots of potential - I'd like to see where it goes.
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Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008 11:23 am
I really like the ideas. Nice group and the leave-taking was touching.

The story itself though isn't really a story yet. Rule of thumb - show not tell. The background detail is good, but for a story prologue it would be better to have the goodbyes, then deliver the background on why as part of a group conversation or later as explanations to the SGA team.
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Reviewer: Padme4000 (Signed)
15 Nov 2007 11:49 am
i liked this
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Reviewer: Danie (Anonymous)
06 Jun 2007 11:33 am
Areyou going to update soon i want to know what is happening and what is going to happen!!
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Reviewer: sheneya (Signed)
13 Feb 2007 7:43 pm
I like your story, more please.
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Reviewer: Freaky (Anonymous)
06 Feb 2007 6:03 pm
I love your story so far, it has an intriguing plot and I can't wait for the next update!!hint,hint!!
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Reviewer: storyscriber (Anonymous)
03 Feb 2007 2:39 pm
Just found this site -- squee!! Love where this is going more please -- puppy eyes 0_0
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Reviewer: Manic (Anonymous)
02 Nov 2006 12:09 am
Interesting start. I wonder what the connection is with Rodney. I guess I'll have to wait and find out ;)
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