Reviews For Rising Above

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Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
16 Nov 2006 6:38 am
Your premise is interesting. The exposition is good, but marred by spelling errors. Interested to see more. Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your highly constructive comments. Would you be so kind as to tell me where the spelling errors are? I must admit that my only beta is Microsoft Word. These chapters are also my first drafts as I am to eager to have reviews than to have highly edited works. Thanks a million!
Chapter One
Reviewer: Ariana (Anonymous)
15 Nov 2006 10:44 pm
This is very interesting. I am more than a little intrigued. I really hope you continue soon.

Author's Response: Don't you just hate that? The author builds you up for this great story with thier summary, and then you have to wait days for the really juicy stuff to be written. Why do author's do that? I am so frustrated with myself.
Chapter One
Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous)
15 Nov 2006 9:08 pm
I like what you have so far. but I was kinda confused. Rodney talks about Seattle, but washington state university isn't in seattle. its in Pullman WA did you mean the university of washington?

Author's Response: Want to be my Beta? Was there anything else that was confusing. Everything is perfect in my head, but when I put it on paper, some ideas get lost.