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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
17 Nov 2006 9:32 pm
Nice background on Rodney and his family and the terrible conditions they've been living in. I'm having horrible visions of evil!John threatening them to get Rodney to sleep with him...guess I'll have to wait and see. Laura.

Author's Response: I should have to pay you for your endorsments. :) Thanks for ths awesome review. It helps me know what people like to read.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
17 Nov 2006 9:27 pm
That's certainly a great exit line from John *g*. Nice set up and background for this particular version of events. Laura.

Author's Response: Unfortunately, due the the graphic nature of this fanfiction, the moderators have (in their infinate wisdom) decided that this story is not appropriate to post to this site. If you wish to read further, I will post a link to where this story can be found in the future. In fact, given enough time, I may be able to write a far more mild story that may better fit wraithbait readers. Thank you so much for taking an interest in my story! Thanks to Alyse the fanfic goddess of chocolates. LONG LIVE THE MODERATORS!

Author's Response: Ammendment: Now that I have reread the mod's email to me, my un-canon depection of the characters was the problem in my story. I'll see how much I can resolve my problem, so that we can all continue to see how the story developes. Stay tuned, and thank your moderators.
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Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
16 Nov 2006 6:38 am
Your premise is interesting. The exposition is good, but marred by spelling errors. Interested to see more. Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your highly constructive comments. Would you be so kind as to tell me where the spelling errors are? I must admit that my only beta is Microsoft Word. These chapters are also my first drafts as I am to eager to have reviews than to have highly edited works. Thanks a million!
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Reviewer: Ariana (Anonymous)
15 Nov 2006 10:44 pm
This is very interesting. I am more than a little intrigued. I really hope you continue soon.

Author's Response: Don't you just hate that? The author builds you up for this great story with thier summary, and then you have to wait days for the really juicy stuff to be written. Why do author's do that? I am so frustrated with myself.
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Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous)
15 Nov 2006 9:08 pm
I like what you have so far. but I was kinda confused. Rodney talks about Seattle, but washington state university isn't in seattle. its in Pullman WA did you mean the university of washington?

Author's Response: Want to be my Beta? Was there anything else that was confusing. Everything is perfect in my head, but when I put it on paper, some ideas get lost.
Prologue