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Reviewer: Maggie (Anonymous)
04 Dec 2006 2:37 am
lol. I love that it ends in a group hug. More fics should ends in group hugs.

Author's Response: lol. thanks.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
26 Nov 2006 7:43 pm
Over all this is a good fic with nice emotional scenes between John and Rodney and some hotness too. The ending threw me a little though. I just couldn't see Teyla saying that line, using Earth slang such as getting laid. I couldn't really see the group hug either, but those are two minor points and not too bad for a first attempt. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks for the points. I'll keep them in mind for next time. Glad you liked it overall.
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