08 Jun 2006
I'm utterly and completely boring. No, seriously, my personal life is irrelevant. That's why I write fiction.
What if the reverse feeding process by the Wraith was *addictive*? Another episode tag for 'Common Ground'.
Categories: Slash Pairings
Characters: Carson Beckett
, Elizabeth Weir
, John Sheppard
, Radek Zelenka
, Rodney McKay
, Ronon Dex
, Teyla Emmagan
, AU - Alternate Universe
, Character Study
, Episode Related
, First TimeWarnings: Adult themes
, May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents
Word count: 23084; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Dec 2007; Published: 08 Dec 2007
Okay, I mean, this story was great and all, but really what got to me was TEYLA BEING AWESOME AND ALL-KNOWING. That cracked me up, right there - the condescending patting John on the cheek, the smirking, the "I know everything." And then Rodney looking for John's cheat sheet because John isn't articulate. Oh, man, I giggled for quite a while at that one.
That being said, I also kind of figured the reverse life-sucking had to be addictive. Like, the enzyme *must* get released in the process, right? I'm not sure your solution (the pain stuff) made any more sense scientifically than the enzyme itself does, but frankly I don't read fic for the scientific reality. I read it for the hot boysex, which you delivered in spades. :)
Author's Response: ok, your review had me bouncing up and down in my chair because I love it when someone enjoys a story--especially when they can point to something particular and say \'I really liked *that*\'. I\'m really glad the story worked for you--plotholes and all! Big smile here.
"Spread yourself for me. Show me that hungry little hole of yours."
Updated: 09 Dec 2007; Published: 09 Dec 2007
Hot, like all your stuff, but you should know that the story itself is in the window twice - click on the story title and you'll see what random_lurker and I are talking about. Silly technology, messing with our porn.
Seriously, though, John begging is always hot like burning.
Author's Response: A ha! Fixed! Thank you!