Penname: Ismene [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 08 Jun 2006
Membership status: Member
I'm utterly and completely boring. No, seriously, my personal life is irrelevant. That's why I write fiction.
Reviews by Ismene
Tainted by Madison [NC-17]
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Summary: What if the reverse feeding process by the Wraith was *addictive*? Another episode tag for 'Common Ground'.

Updated: 08 Dec 2007; Published: 08 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Ismene (Signed)
10 Dec 2007
Okay, I mean, this story was great and all, but really what got to me was TEYLA BEING AWESOME AND ALL-KNOWING. That cracked me up, right there - the condescending patting John on the cheek, the smirking, the "I know everything." And then Rodney looking for John's cheat sheet because John isn't articulate. Oh, man, I giggled for quite a while at that one.

That being said, I also kind of figured the reverse life-sucking had to be addictive. Like, the enzyme *must* get released in the process, right? I'm not sure your solution (the pain stuff) made any more sense scientifically than the enzyme itself does, but frankly I don't read fic for the scientific reality. I read it for the hot boysex, which you delivered in spades. :)

Author's Response: ok, your review had me bouncing up and down in my chair because I love it when someone enjoys a story--especially when they can point to something particular and say \'I really liked *that*\'. I\'m really glad the story worked for you--plotholes and all! Big smile here.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Spread yourself for me. Show me that hungry little hole of yours."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1373; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Dec 2007; Published: 09 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Ismene (Signed)
10 Dec 2007
Hot, like all your stuff, but you should know that the story itself is in the window twice - click on the story title and you'll see what random_lurker and I are talking about. Silly technology, messing with our porn.

Seriously, though, John begging is always hot like burning.

Author's Response: A ha! Fixed! Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1