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Penname: flubber [Contact]
Real name: Sally LLoyd Member Since: 11 Jul 2006
Membership status: Member
I am 38 and have just come round to writing slash. I enjoy doing it. also love reading the stories on Wraithbait as they are really varied.
Beta-reader: No
Reviews by flubber

Summary:

Episode tag for Spoils of War. John blames himself, Rodney makes him realise he can't take responsibility for anything.



Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2878; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Feb 2008; Published: 07 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
08 Feb 2008
Loved the story.

I liked the way that it was Rodney grounding John. This was a great story and very believable.

John has always come over as a character who keeps a lot inside and this captured it well.

The part where you said that John had trashed his room came over well too. For me this worked as I could imagine him doing this rather that talking to someone about it. It also added a nice dynamic to the realtionship that he had with Rodney because he made John promise to talk to him.

This was a well thought out, thought provoking story. Thanks very much.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
An Eventful Year by miera [PG-13]
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: Elizabeth and Cameron's Jane Austen-style romance. Yes, you read that right. An entire fic written like an Austen novel, focused on their romance. With John as Elizabeth's brother, Kate, Keller and Chuck as her other siblings and Lorne as Kate's suitor.

Categories: Crossovers > Ship Pairings
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 23528; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Feb 2008; Published: 07 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
08 Feb 2008
I really enjoyed this story.

Although I can't say that I am not too familiar with the works of Jane Austen (I have never watched Pride and Prdjudice!!)I feel that the style seemed to be right throughour! I found myself being able to see it in my imagination. I must admit the thought of Ben Browder as Cameron in the shirt and breeches did set my heart a flutter. ;o)

I also like the fact that you managed to get all the characters in in some way. I didn't think that there was too much Mike and Sam bashing. As you say, there has to be a few bad characters in it!!

If I have one criticsm of it, it was that it was too long. I had to read it in sections. I think it may have been easier to read if it had been in smaller chapter.

I just wish this could find it's way on to television. Jane Austen would never be the same again.

Thanks for an enjoyable read.
Chapter 1: An Eventful Year

Summary: Sam and McKay have an impossible-to-win contest and, surprisingly, one of them wins.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Carter/McKay
Characters: Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 357; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Feb 2008; Published: 08 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
09 Feb 2008
I thought this story was great.

I could imagine them still being competative even if they were in a relationship!!

I also loved the ending. It couldn't really have been anything else could it. After all it is the answer to life the universe and everything!!!

Nice one!!!

Author's Response: I\'m thrilled you enjoyed it! And yeah, they couldn\'t NOT be in competition! And hee, yes, 42 will definitely be the end. Count on it! ;-D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "It was the only costume they had in your size! It's not my fault that they've rented all the other costumes."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2045; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Feb 2008; Published: 10 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
10 Feb 2008
Loved this story. Just a shame that there isn't a picture of John as Tarzan anywhere. That would fuel more than a few dreams!!!!! ;o)

This made me laugh a lot and I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hurt by fififolle [PG]
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: Chuck is shown Kavanagh's message to Earth (Letters from Pegasus), and is upset by what he sees. It leads to an argument which takes a lot to patch up. Kavanagh/Chuck (estab.)

Categories: Slash Pairings > Other Male Pairings
Characters: Other
Genres: Angst, Episode Related, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3437; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Feb 2008; Published: 11 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
11 Feb 2008
This is a lovely story.

I have to say that I really don't like Kavanagh as portrayed in the series. BUT I find myself admitting that I really am warming to the guy as you portray him.

You have captured the Kavanagh that was in the series. The holier than though know it all really comes through. Then you find a way to make him a hero. I love the way that you manage to give him a compassionate side and make him think of others. Darn it you've really made like the guy!!!!!

I also like the way that you handle the relationship between Chuck and Will. It really comes over well.

I also like the way that Chuck is scared of meeting Wills mum. I found that quite funny.

Thank you for taking Kavanagh from a 2 dimensional person we like to hate to a fully rounded personality with redeeming qualities.

Author's Response: Hi there! Wow. What wonderful feedback :) Who could imagine Kavanagh could have this effect? ;) I really appreciate your kind feedback :D
Chapter 1: Hurt

Summary: Sleepy talking after returning from the planet

Spoilers for: Hide and Seek, The Storm/Eye, The Defiant One, Quarantine, Harmony



Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1304; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
13 Feb 2008
I loved this story. It was a really nice character piece.

The way John thinks of Rodney comes over well and kind of reflects the way that I think of the character.

I also think that the part where Rodney sees that John is scared comes over really well as all. I have often felt that John comes over as someone who does have insecurities. It makes sense that he would do all those things behind the scenes.

I also like the way that Rodney comes over in this story. Very nice.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A little bit of Culinary Genius and a whole lotta love... just a bit of Valentines fun.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Carter/McKay
Characters: Original Character, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: First Time, Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Valentines Fun

Word count: 2178; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Feb 2008; Published: 14 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
14 Feb 2008
I really loved this story.

I really liked the way that the story unfolded piece by piece. It was very funny.

I also liked the way that you ended the part with Sam and Rodney. Very appropriate for SGA. Giving you a pretty good idea of what is going to happen without showing it. I also liked the image of Sam running her hands over his naked torso!!! MMMM. ;-)

Any chance you could turn this in to a series by writing stories for some of the other parings? It could be real fun.

Thanks for a lovely valentines fluffy read!!!
Chapter 1: I love it when a plan comes together...
Pick-Up by fififolle [PG-13]
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: It's Valentine's Day, and time for Kavanagh to rate his success. Kavanagh/anyone you like.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Other Male Pairings
Characters: Other
Genres: Character Study, Humour, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 417; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Feb 2008; Published: 14 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
15 Feb 2008
This was a very interesting story that had me wondering who would respond to am argument with him in that kind of way.

I would be interested in finding out who sent each of the messages, especially the last one.

Any chance of a follow up to this? PLEASE!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, and glad you found it intriguing! I\'m afraid the purpose of this story is for you to decide who you would like Kavanagh to attract :) I would be hopeless at writing the actual sequel :D It wold be great though, wouldn\'t it? LOL. Maybe Bates, Simpson, Grodin, Chuck? Who knows...? I don\'t actually know :)
Chapter 1: Pick-Up

Summary: Teyla smiled and held the sticks behind her back. "You still hold on to the belief that you will one day beat me?" she gave a slight laugh.

"Always," John replied, giving a little shrug.
A little bit of Valentines Fun...

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Pre-relationship, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Valentines Fun

Word count: 2956; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Feb 2008; Published: 16 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
17 Feb 2008
This was a great story. I nice follow up.

I love your writing style. You give us enough details to fill in the blanks without going in to too much details.

I also liked the way that you had them stick fighting . It gave them a reason to be in the gym.

Thanks for a good read and can we have some more please.
Chapter 1: Down in the Gym...
Dearest by lavvyan [PG-13] Past Featured Story
[Reviews - 55]

Summary: 04-877-57-7G was sixteen when he was finally transferred to his owner.

Updated: 17 Feb 2008; Published: 17 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
17 Feb 2008
This was a lovely well written if heartbreaking story.

Such a shame that the time that John relises he was loved it the time ha can do nothing about it!

great story.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I guess that\'s life. *pets John*
Chapter 1: 1/1
Regret by Ionaonie [PG]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: John reflects on some of his regrets

Spoilers for Outcast



Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Episode Related, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4128; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2008; Published: 18 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
19 Feb 2008
I love the way that you describe how John feels about sharing personal things. This is how the character comes over in the series and I feel that you have managed to convey this very well.

I can also relate to the sentiments that John expresses about his father. It came across very well.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: This was a triumph. I'm making a note here: HUGE SUCCESS! It's hard to overstate my satisfaction. (Or, in which John turns on something unexpected. Vaguely John/Atlantis)

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Dramatic Exit

Word count: 1848; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jun 2008; Published: 18 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
19 Feb 2008
I love this story.

I like the way that you have written the computer. It makes it easy to follow the story.

I can't wait to see what happens with the Atlantis/John relationship goes. I am also intrigued as to what game Atlantis wants to play with our boys!!

Author's Response: Well, let\'s just say that since Atlantis lacks, you know... parts, she\'s going to be rather proactively encouraging certain games among its inhabitants.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Just A Postcard by Raven [PG-13]
[Reviews - 30]

Summary: Rodney wondered if anyone else got a postcard in their email.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Graphic Novel, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1077; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Apr 2008; Published: 19 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
30 Mar 2008
Wow that is SOOOOOO NOT FAIR!!

I have a pretty good idea of who it is too!! LOL :-)

Author's Response: Now, who ever said life was fair? :-P
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
No One by Raven [G]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: No one ever liked him.

Categories: General
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Drabble
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 360; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Feb 2008; Published: 23 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
24 Feb 2008
Please more. You can't leave our Rodney like this!!! So sad!!!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. I\'ll see what I can do about more, yeah?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Human Enough by Leah [PG-13]
[Reviews - 12]

Summary: The first time John Sheppard allowed himself to show anyone what he truly was, he was in the Pegasus galaxy, and he had just shot his commanding officer to keep him from getting his life sucked out by a Wraith. (Repost.)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, AU - Alternate Universe, Episode Related, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9997; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Feb 2008; Published: 23 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
23 Feb 2008
This was a wonderful story. I loved the imagery and could see John as a centaur. I also like the way that you him be able to hide it.

I also loved Rodney's reaction to John and how he cam round to having feelings for him in the end.

Please, please, please write some more of this. I would love to know how their relationship continues and I think that there is great scope for a series.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your comment! I\'ve had a few ideas for a possible sequel to this since I first wrote it in 2004, but so far nothing\'s stuck, I\'m afraid. But I\'ll keep thinking about it. :)
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: Chuck and Lorne are on a Valentine's Date.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: Established Relationship, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Valentines Fun

Word count: 1470; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Feb 2008; Published: 24 Feb 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
25 Feb 2008
Thank you, thank you thank you. A Chuck/Lorne story. So sweet!!

I also liked the fact that thee chocolates got the fish horny to!! Nice touch
Chapter 1: I'll prove it.

Summary: It felt almost like a sin, an indulgence of the highest order, the way Radek seemed to drink her in with those blue, blue eyes of his. 300 words.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Weir/Zelenka
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 297; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Mar 2008; Published: 01 Mar 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
02 Mar 2008
I love this story. it is a wonderful picture of the genesis of a relationship!!

thank you.
Chapter 1: Call to Worship

Summary: "Radek," Rodney said, "you never told me you had a son." (Implied Zelenka/OFC)

Categories: General
Characters: Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 710; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Mar 2008; Published: 03 Mar 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
04 Mar 2008
That is a great story but there has to be more!!

It cant be left like this!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do more!!!!
Chapter 1: Well He's a Mourning Star With a Champagne Heart
Snap by Archae_ology [PG-13]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: When Rod kissed Rodney. Written for beaniesheppard's Kissing Fest- Not!McShep edition. Betaed by slybrarian.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 225; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Mar 2008; Published: 03 Mar 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
04 Mar 2008
Loved this I want more. You can leave us like this!!!!

I second what Mystic said, TOTALLY HOT!!!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Peter took another one of the pills Carson had prescribed and leaned back in his chair, waiting for the painkiller to kick in so that the twinges of pain from his hand would subside. (Peter Grodin/Radek Zelenka)

Categories: Slash Pairings > Zelenka/other
Characters: Other, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Episode Related, Friendship, Humour, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 659; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Mar 2008; Published: 05 Mar 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
06 Mar 2008
Oh you have to more. You cant leave it like this!!

I loved the idea of the way that this unfolded ad I really loved the kiss.

I have never really thought of a Radek/Peter rel but it works!!

thank you
Chapter 1: Our Heroes And Martyrs Present Two Points of View