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Penname: flubber [Contact]
Real name: Sally LLoyd Member Since: 11 Jul 2006
Membership status: Member
I am 38 and have just come round to writing slash. I enjoy doing it. also love reading the stories on Wraithbait as they are really varied.
Beta-reader: No
Reviews by flubber

Summary: This is the only salvagable part of the first SGA story I wrote. I love shopping, so this combines two of my favorite things!

Categories: Ship Pairings > Zelenka/Other
Characters: Original Character, Radek Zelenka
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3072; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Mar 2008; Published: 28 Mar 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
30 Mar 2008
This was a lovely story that was well put together. I loved the way that the red dress became a character in its own right.

Ii also liked Radek's reaction to it. It made me smile.

I also liked the way that Radek and Lauren interacted as wee. The way that the story unfolded was very believable.

I also liked the way that you wrote the sex scene. Very romantic and fluffy.

Although this was part of a previous story, is there any chance that there could be a sequel because I would love to see this paring taken further.
Chapter 1: Radek and the Red Dress

Summary: It was not some unworldly force hurtling its way to the earth that would change John Sheppard's life forever, but one lone man, someone literally thrown at John's feet, tossed away like yesterday's rubbish, a man named Rodney McKay. Harlequin AU.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 39909; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Mar 2008; Published: 29 Mar 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
30 Mar 2008
loved the story. It was really well put together and the way that the characters are written worked well.

If I have one crit it is that the chapters are rather long. This made the story a bit difficult for me to read!!! I have eye probs!

Thank you for a good story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! \r\nAs this is really the longest thing I\'ve EVER written, I was unsure of how to divide the fic. I don\'t anticipate writing a 38,000 word anything in the near future, but if I do I\'ll take your suggestion for smaller chapters into consideration.\r\nAgain, thank you for the review!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: An offworld celebration leaves John playing wallflower while Rodney dances the night away; a conversation with a little old woman leads John to make a decision, but Rodney has his doubts.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2284; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Apr 2008; Published: 10 Apr 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
11 Apr 2008
That was wonderful. I loved dear clueless John!!

Does the last line mean that there is going to be a sequel?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: It took a broken water pipe, an Ancient device, pod people and an alien conspiracy to make this love story.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4459; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Apr 2008; Published: 25 Apr 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
26 Apr 2008
You have to do it!! You have to. You cant leave us like this and not do it!!

this was wonderful now please write the story where he asks him to marry him!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! But even with the wonderful picture prompts by Rainyd, it took me about a year to get this story finished and out the way I wanted it. Now, if someone were to provide some visual prompts......
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Apex by Siri Tachi [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Reading Harlequin books can fill your head with all sorts of silliness... [Beckett/Cadman]

Categories: Ship Pairings > Beckett/Other
Characters: Carson Beckett, Other
Genres: Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 695; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 May 2008; Published: 04 May 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
05 May 2008
Loved the story!!! thought it was really fun. Shame you had to stop though! Mind you that is what happens in most of those books!!LOL
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Sheppard really needs to figure out how his headset works. Sheppard/McKay, Sam/Keller, Lorne/Ronon/Teyla

Updated: 08 May 2008; Published: 08 May 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
09 May 2008
this was so funny especially as it looked like John was the last one to find out and Rodney still didn't understand even at the end!!

I really liked this story because you got the balance of the sex and fun spot on, Thanks for that it really made my day and will get read again!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! The balance wasn\'t easy to find, smut and comedy, but I\'m glad it worked! :D And yay, re-read! :D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The font of all love - Rodney finds John the perfect present.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2327; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Jun 2008; Published: 25 Jun 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
03 Jul 2008
I think that this is a lovely story.

I couldn't resist the font either. It's now a font on my Mac. LOL

Thanks for sharing

Author's Response: Thank you! Rodney\'s such a *good* boyfriend really and knows all of John\'s weaknesses. The font lives on my PC now, so maybe he knows mine, too.
Chapter 1: Four-letter Word

Summary: Once somebody starts spreading rumors that you worship Cthulhu it can be hard to dissuade them. Especially if you've been born and bred to do just that. Crossover with the Mythos.

Follow-up of "Sitting in a Tin Can", also on Wraithbait. Spoilers for late season four and early season five.

Updated: 08 Aug 2009; Published: 01 Aug 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
14 Aug 2008
The only thing I have to gripe about is that we didn't find out what was on the poster.

I love this story and it helps that I love the Cthullu mythos myself so this is a very interesting take on it.

I also like the way you have words having differing meanings in the Pegasus galaxy. I also love the way that you handled Rodney's reaction to what Ronon said and what Ronon did after it to make it right.

I'm now away to read the next chapter.
Chapter 2: Ronon Dex
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
14 Aug 2008
wow I really do like this and cant wait for the next chapter.
I loved Caldwell's reaction to. It was really good and believable and so was Woolsey's reaction as well.

Glad we got to know what was on the posters. Nice.

Thanks for sharing this story.

Author's Response: Woosley is far from his element and I plan on exploiting that. It\'ll be fun. \r\n \r\n The scientists seem too uptight for people who went to grad school and goofed off accordingly. They need more geeky goofing off. The posters merely provide. \r\n \r\n Thank you for reading, it\'s been fun.
Chapter 3: Steven Caldwell
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
01 Nov 2008
WOW WOW WOW. This is really good.

I feel sorry for Woolsey and sorry for everyone else to. I can see why Woolsey didn't want to let him go and I can see why everyone else didn't have much of a choice about letting him go.

I only hope that they haven't lost him forever.

HOWEVER I do hate you for leaving us on a cliff-hanger. How could you? ;-)

I can't wait to read the next installment. Just don't leave it so long next time. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Author's Response: Rodney is... around. I hope to be able to snarl, cheat, threaten, and scare up more computer time this month so I can actually write the things I need to. Should be two, maybe three weeks at the most. I\'m glad you like. :-)
Chapter 6: Atlantis

Summary: Daniel Jackson feels that John and Rodney need a gentle push...and pays a visit to Atlantis to help them along.

(I've listed the story as AU - simply because Oma appears at the end when she should be battling Anubis)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Daniel Jackson, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2763; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Aug 2008; Published: 12 Aug 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
14 Aug 2008
thank you for a wonderful story.

Avery nice take not only on how John and Rodney got together but also why Daniel decided to return the second time and why he was naked.

Thank you for filling my mind with wonderful thoughts. :-)

Author's Response: I\'m so thrilled you liked the story, and thankyou for letting me know. Hope the wonderful thoughts stay with you for a while!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney wasn't consciously avoiding John. It was just that lately Rodney couldn't even stand to look at him. *[This is a sequel to Right Here]

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3491; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Aug 2008; Published: 12 Aug 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
14 Aug 2008
I don't think that this story sucked at all.

I think the premise of the story was really good and I could really imaging Rodney being the kind of person that would need to be pushed to not only admit what he was feeling but to deal with it too.

I really don't know anything about BDSM either but I still felt that that part of the story came across and I loved the way that there was a loving ending to.

All in all a very well put together story that was well worth reading.

thank you.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
Recall Notice by Madison [PG-13]
[Reviews - 13]

Summary: He should have seen this coming. Spoilers thru season 5.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2123; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Aug 2008; Published: 22 Aug 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
24 Aug 2008
love this story and I do understand the sentiment behind it although as far as I'm concerned they will always be in the Pegasus galaxy doing their thing.

But that being said I did like the name of the ship and the idea of the guy going round all the different universes.

Thanks for the story. Although I have no regrets about the last 5 years and I hope that SGA fandom continues and that there will still be cons because no matter what comes next my heart will still be in the city of Atlantis with John, Rodney and the rest of the gang.

Author's Response: Oh, I think the fandom will continue. It will shrink some, get quieter, there will be less fresh ideas from which to draft a quick story. But 100 episodes is a respectible base from which to continue and just think, no more pesky jossing when canon takes you in a direction you don\'t want to go! ;-) I\'m so glad you liked the story though (it was just a little vent-fest). Thanks!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney and John learn to be careful what they wish for. Or maybe just that the Ancients have a wicked sense of humor.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Slash Pairings > Other Male Pairings
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4677; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Aug 2008; Published: 26 Aug 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
29 Aug 2008
Hello I loved this. So funny. It really made me laugh.

Any chance that there could be a follow up to see what happened with that last wish?
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Masaq' Orbital was famous for its unusually dangerous extreme sports, even compared to the rest of the Culture. Under normal circumstances Canda-Onteriasa Merdith Rodney M'Kay dam Tronto would never have anything to do with that sort of thing. Unfortunately, his partner John had other ideas. (Fusion with "Look to Windward" and the Culture series, no knowledge required.)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Crossovers > Slash Pairings, Slash Pairings > Lorne/Zelenka
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2206; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Aug 2008; Published: 31 Aug 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
01 Sep 2008
Ok. So this is a freaky coincidence, I have just finished reading that book and it was kool. And I remember reading that part and enjoying it.

As a result of this, I feel that you have really captured the spirit of the story and the writing style to. I also love the characterization and the fact that John could get off on this and want to get frisky.

The only question that I have is How did John get Rodney to do something like this? It doesn't really seem like something he would do.

Nice one and thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Heh, that\'s cool. As for how John convinced him - well, Rodney would probably tell you it involved deceit, treachery, and blackmail. You know, the usual.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: What was the Air Force thinking of when it went with short shorts?

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: A Man in Uniform

Word count: 1564; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Sep 2008; Published: 01 Sep 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
01 Sep 2008
Hey I went and looked at the Wiki page and I did note that you only saw the female in shorts so maybe the shorts for the men are short shorts. lol

Loved the story. It is another great addition to the series and thanks for sharing

Author's Response: LOL The only pictures we could find of men in the shorts were obscured but they did look shorter than the ones on the woman in the picture \r\n\r\nThanks!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "I love you, Jennifer." His voice is hoarse and slightly desperate and she isn't sure if he's trying to convince her or himself.



"I know you do," she keeps her voice soft and soothing, reassuring, "that doesn't change the fact that you loved him before you even knew my name."



Spoilers for The Last Man

Categories: Bitextual, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Ship Pairings > Keller/McKay
Characters: Jennifer Keller, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 697; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Sep 2008; Published: 11 Sep 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
20 Jan 2009
The only thing that I have a problem with was the fact that I have only just found this story.

It was lovely. I felt the pain and hurt as well. It was so gut wrenching that Rodney hadn't realised that John had loved him.

I am also a fan of the McKeller rel so thanks for treating it so well.

Thanks for sharing the story.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Choosing to stay in Pegasus wasn't complicated for the people of Atlantis. What happened next? That was where things got interesting.

Updated: 20 Jun 2011; Published: 01 Oct 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
21 Jul 2010
I am so loving this series. I have just read the whole lot in one sitting. Its brilliant.

I loved the way that you had Jack. So true to character.

I also love the way that you have written the interaction with the AI's. It adds to the story.

cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 12: Atlantis Chapter Six - Looking To The Future

Summary:

There once was a writer named Jae
Who wrote these dumb poems all day
All just for fun
And combined into one
So read them here now, okay?


Categories: General
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Elizabeth Weir, Other, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Humour, Poetry
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 172; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Oct 2008; Published: 06 Oct 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
23 Oct 2008
Lovely rhyming genius!!
Chapter 1: Rhyme Scheme

Summary: Lorne comes back to Cardiff, but he's got a surprise for Ianto.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other, Samantha Carter
Genres: Established Relationship, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Beatles 'verse

Word count: 4665; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Oct 2008; Published: 20 Oct 2008
Reviewer: flubber (Signed)
21 Oct 2008
I dont know why this pairing works but they do.

As I read this story I could hear all the characters speaking their parts.

I have loved all the stories in this series and this is a good addition to it.

Thank you for sharing

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1