Wraithbait

Summary: Set shortly after "Trinity". Events begin to cast doubt over the state of the thing McKay values the most, his mind.

Your fic is so original! I love your concept of Atlantis trying to help McKay grieve the way she sees fit. It is so much like the Ancients themselves - seemingly having good intentions but at times off the mark. Excellent fic!

Summary: McKay and Sheppard are stranded during an away mission. John keeps Rodney alert after a head injury with some not so idle banter.

The dialogue was perfect! I loved McKay's you-think-I'm-dying panic! You represented their friendship quite well.

The dialogue was perfect! I loved McKay's you-think-I'm-dying panic! You represented their friendship quite well.

Summary: A tag for "The Pegasus Project." SG-1 clearly have no idea how to handle a scientist who's fragile and annoying as well as brilliant.

The dialogue was perfect! Great read!

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you enjoyed it! (and sorry I forot to check comments for so long...)

Summary: John and Rodney, post Arcturus. Can they get back what they had? Mild slash.

Shep really was awful toward McKay after "Trinity", and I enjoyed this fic on how they put the pieces back together. I can see how Shep made that turnabout, how he was so mad at McKay for almost dying on him that he shouted at him for almost getting them all killed and then blurted out his real fear about McKay dying on him to Weir in the briefing. I really liked this fic!

Summary: "In the center of the room, curled up on the floor, were four interwoven bodies." [I promise this is Gen]

You've created such a beautiful scene here - very teamy, to say the least. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

You've created such a beautiful scene here - very teamy, to say the least. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Why did John give Mitchell that lemon? The unfortunate aftermath to a bad decision. Episode tag for The Pegasus Project.

I'm glad that both Shep and Mitchell were brought to justice for their actions in Pegasus Project.

Summary: Sensitivity: awareness of the needs and emotions of others. Right. A shocking event finally makes John Sheppard see the error of his ways. Post Trinity drama,angst. R for language.

I love this fic! I've added it to my favourites and agree it's a shame you haven't received more reviews for it. You really understand McKay! I was so angry with Shep after "Trinity" as he and McKay's friendship was strained. I'd also like to know what happened to Shep to change his behaviour but think it's awesome that McKay was the only one who knew him well enough to know he wasn't acted like himself. How awesome is it that he askes if Shep's okay soon after he wakes up?

Summary: Ronon inadvertently has a conversation that helps Rodney snap out of it. Spoilers for the 3rd season episode Sunday.

I've found that Ronon can be really hard to write. You portrayed him quite well here. Ronon and McKay's dynamic is so complicated, and you were dead-on here. Great job!

I've found that Ronon can be really hard to write. You portrayed him quite well here. Ronon and McKay's dynamic is so complicated, and you were dead-on here. Great job!