03 Oct 2006
Gay man loving the emotional intensity of slash, writing my incredibly tiny and rubbishy pieces under the pen-name of Rose Grandam.
After a rescue mission gone wrong, the team is stranded on an alien planet. In race against time, John and Rodney struggle with physical and emotional injuries.
Updated: 29 Mar 2006; Published: 07 Jan 2005
A lot of spelling mistakes, and odd constructions make this difficult to read, so I gave up after three or four paragraphs. I've read other stuff by you and it's been fine, so I don't know what went wrong here. Did you rush it?
"I've seen hell and it's a three-foot naked alien trying to tango." Hermiod/Novak, Sheppard/McKay
Updated: 02 Jan 2006; Published: 02 Jan 2006
That was such a giggle, especially Novak's last words.
Quinn was like a younger less jaded version of John, only with freckles and more defined biceps and John wanted nothing more than to beat him bloody -- Written for kinkathon challenge on lj, features Jealous!John
Updated: 19 Mar 2006; Published: 19 Mar 2006
So nicely written. Lovely clear structure, well-executed progressions and a great turn of phrase made this a real pleasure to read.
Doppelganger fic. A Sheppard and McKay who might have been encounter the ones that are. Romance, action, and bickering.
Updated: 30 Mar 2006; Published: 30 Mar 2006
Beautiful. Your Rodney and John have been waiting for each other all their lives, and that's right. Some lovely phrases, of which "a grin that melted something in him Rodney didn’t even know was frozen" made me shout with pleasure.
Nice Rodney/Rodney bickering there. The possibility of Rodney and Rodney voyeuring as John and John make out is simply shiver-inducing and you lead the mind almost there quite tantalisingly.
Beautiful, again. It's just so obvious when someone has real talent like you. Particularly loved "a sad theme from a lonely childhood, a dark theme from a lonely adulthood", that just choked me up.
John and Rodney are stranded, and things start changing between them...
Updated: 18 Oct 2006; Published: 07 Apr 2006
Strongest chapter so far I think, very nicely done. So many things to like about it, particularly the internal echoes and reflections - like both Rodney and John describing themselves as shattering.
Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen
"You fell in love with each other *after* that. You are in love with each other now, and that’s not going to just disappear."
That was it, I just started cheering, thank god there was no one to hear me making such a fool of myself (specially with the little sobs being mixed in with the cheers).
Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty
"Vacation," John said, and Rodney had frowned at him as if he were speaking a foreign language.
Updated: 05 May 2006; Published: 05 May 2006
That must be one of the best descriptions of the pleasures of sucking cock that I've seen. Splendid!
Chapter 1: Mai Tais and Planter's Punch
Written for the "Cuff 'em, Kink 'em, or just make 'em Come already, Kink and Cliche Multi-fandom challenge!".
My challenges were 'Trust' and 'First time sex'.
Updated: 20 May 2006; Published: 20 May 2006
I've read marriage stories before but this is the first time I've seen it introduced by such an ingenious conceit. *So* clever in fact that I wouldn't be surprised if I, I mean *someone*, borrowed it :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I would rather people didn't 'borrow it' though :)
Just how do you define 'family'? McShep implied, character death
Updated: 31 May 2006; Published: 30 May 2006
Call me a quibbler, but I had no idea whether the "-McKay" bit had been added by John before he died or by Rodney afterwards, and it does make a huge difference. I assume (from the "crudely") that it wasn't part of the original stamping, at any rate. Nice idea, anyway.
Chapter 1: Defining Family 1/1
B:tVS, Stargate: Atlantis. John Sheppard finds a letter waiting for him on Earth. (Short ficlet series).
Updated: 04 Sep 2007; Published: 12 Jun 2006
Let me add my voice to the others: I started reading doubtful it would work, I finished feeling hot for more. I get the impression that there's a novel's worth of fic gestating, and I'm looking forward to reading it all.
Chapter 8: Fishing Expeditions
McKay gets captured on a mission, causing John and Rodney to come to terms with their feelings for each other. Main pairing McKay/Sheppard with mentions of other minor pairings.
Characters: Aiden Ford
, Carson Beckett
, Elizabeth Weir
, John Sheppard
, Major Lorne
, Radek Zelenka
, Rodney McKay
, Ronon Dex
, Steven Caldwell
, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
, First Time
, Hurt Comfort
, SeriesWarnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 17 [Table of Contents
Word count: 40625; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Jan 2007; Published: 15 Aug 2006
He could feel the remnants of dried come inside him.
Well I've never experienced that, or heard of it happening, not that I've been taken in the ass all that often. I asked a friend who's much more of a bunny rabbit than I am, and he's never heard of it either. It's very wet in there, and there's the full length of the colon for it to travel and dissipate into.
I'm curious now, does that happen with women, at the, erm, front? <Blush!>
Author's Response: If you fall asleep without cleaning up, you most definitely feel it the next morning. ;)
Missing scene for "Progeny," many spoilers. Dark, hurt-without-comfort, heed warnings. May become a series.
Updated: 15 Feb 2007; Published: 21 Aug 2006
"I'll send my puddlejumper right through your gate."
That really shouldn't be so funny but it was, god help me it was.
Author's Response: Yeah, funny in a sick kinda way. Good thing it wasn't real, right? Uh-huh.
A lovely example of John betraying himself:
"Come on, Rodney, you have to let me keep some secrets," John wheedled. Then he felt his face heat and fell back a step so Rodney wouldn't see.
Author's Response: And of course John's being oversensitive there, because Rodney's not sure if John's pass at him meant something about John's underlying desires or not!
"I'll send my puddlejumper right through your gate." - I laughed until I choked at that one, thank you so much!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! But is it John with the sick sense of humor, or Rodney? Or, well, probably it's the author.
Chapter 1: Hideous and Intimate
A take on what happened in McKay's simulation during the events of "Progeny"(season three) and how he and Sheppard deal with it.
Updated: 01 Sep 2006; Published: 01 Sep 2006
Did John perhaps have a 'semi' at the end of that hug? When will chapter two be ready?
Sex never looked good in real life, but you couldn't help but watch.
Updated: 03 Sep 2006; Published: 03 Sep 2006
A laugh a line, just about. You captured Z's viewpoint very nicely, his reactions, his slightly eccentric English. The caterpillar simile was perfect. I think we needed this to be - oh - about twice as long, but no less concentrated :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Chapter 1: Not A Pretty Sight
A genius, evil co-workers, a strip joint -- life just keeps happening to Rodney.
Updated: 20 Oct 2006; Published: 20 Oct 2006
Sweet. I like them happy. Loved this line: 'That shimmy should be illegal, and Rodney wanted to be the arresting officer.'
AU with some true romance.
Includes a decrepit mansion, madness, judicious amounts of fainting, frocks, mysterious servants, a gratuitous stable-boy, bad puns, off-stage swashbuckling, hidden passions, and a little nudity having more of an effect on innocent virgins than full-frontal would have in non-AUs.
Spela is to be blamed for making me re-insert something "small" and any mistakes in the smutty parts (as she claimed to have found none).
Updated: 25 Oct 2006; Published: 25 Oct 2006
Bravo! Great story. I particularly liked McKay as the butler.
Just a few typos:
declinations should be declensions;
reigns should be reins;
chaise lounge should be chaise longue.
Chapter 1: Master of the Manor