Lily Finch [Contact
09 Jan 2007
I'm an American High school girl who has way too much free time on my hands and is nursing a very large Atlantis based obsession...yep, that about sums it up.
Rodney finds himself in a strange new world, the result of events not even he could control. The Atlanteans find themselves without a scientist and they want him back, but first he must survive the darkest days of time past.
Updated: 08 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Mar 2006
Wow! Finally we ge a glimpse at the Atlantis side of things. I had wondered how McKay had been captured and even though you haven't given the full story yet this tidbit was much appreciated. Chilling story, it shakes me to the core. I hope Teyla and Ronan find out where he was taken soon. Good work!!
Author's Response: Atlantis will be making more appearances and eventually all the pieces will fall into place. Thanks for all the reviews!
Horrific. How will Rodney survive with that back? And what about the creepy experiments? What exactly do they want with him? I'm saddened that Bankha and the others died. I really like him.
Author's Response: I liked Bankha too. I was kind of sad to see him go, but in the end it was necessary to further the tale. What about the creepy experiments? Those too serve a purpose. But, don't think this the last time we'll see Bankha; he'll be referenced again later on. He's still got things to do. :)
I know this has already been said, but please let them find him soon! Rodney isn't completely broken yet. Slightly disgusted by those two people's ignorant faith in 'bettering' their people. It hadn't occured to me that there might be people who didn't mind being there.
Author's Response: It's interesting that you interpretted the conversation between Rodney and them to mean that they didn't mind being there. If you think back to what was being tested on Rodney, I think it will put things in a different light.
Yay! They're getting closer! Go, Teyla, Go!!
Author's Response: LOL. ;)
Chapter 8: Splinter and Fray
They buried him!! Please don't let him die. You didn't have character death as one of the warnings so you can't let him die. Ha!
Author's Response: At this point it would be very cruel of me to say, "Yes, I don't have character death as a warning at the moment..." Of course, death is all in how a person defines it...
Chapter 9: Crack and Shatter
Noooo! Rodney has to remember! How did Ronan get into the work camp? How did Atlantis even find the planet in the first place? So, who was the uber nice guard? I NEED TO KNOW!
Author's Response: Goodness, you have left me a lot of reviews. I'll try to answer everything. Ronon getting into the camp will be explained in the next few chapters. The identity of the guard will also be explained, however, if you look back a few chapters (re-read chapter 8) I dropped a hint as to whom it could be.
Chapter 10: Be Sure to Find Me
Oops! It seems that I wasn't logged in when I reviewed chapter ten. Well, just plain 'Lily' is me. Now...WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON!! Can a government actually be that idiotic?! Or is the Prince purposefully playing the ignorant card? I don't know what's going on and I don't like it! Humph!! Hope the next chapter is coming soon, those last two were really exciting and I want to know what the Genii and Sheppard are up to. Okay, so I know a teensy bit, but chapter ten just left me with more questions. Can I assume that the Comm was either the Genii 'man' Weir mentioned or Sheppard? Also, what is going to happen to Rodney when the get him home? I don't know how Rodney is going to react to Carson since he thinks Carson sold him to the evil Nazi wannabes. And...personal request; make the evil interrogating Comm and the freaky brainwashing doctor guy suffer horrible, horrible deaths for what they did to our dear Rodney!
Chapter 11: Deals to Break
Circumstances, and Rodney's friends, won't allow him to keep his past a secret anymore. A veritable McKay Whumpathon!
Warning - Ridiculous ammounts of spoilers contained throughout.
Rated R - To be on the safe side because it contains themes of immoral human experimentation.
Characters: Carson Beckett
, Elizabeth Weir
, John Sheppard
, Original Character
, Radek Zelenka
, Rodney McKay
, Ronon Dex
, Steven Caldwell
, Teyla Emmagan
, Character Study
, Hurt Comfort
, SeriesWarnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents
Word count: 4664; Completed: No
Updated: 18 Apr 2006; Published: 17 Apr 2006
Wow, great start! I would love to know what happens next; like who where those 'department of education' people really? I noticed you haven't updated in a while, but I hope that this story will stockpile enough reviews to convince you to continue. PLEASE CONTINUE!
Sheppard's team is sent to investigate an Ancient research satellite, and find ZPMs. But then, McKay starts to act strangely...even violently. Friendship, hurt, comfort and angst.
Updated: 17 Jul 2008; Published: 03 Nov 2006
Interesting! I hope you review soon because I'm dying to know what Rodney is planning. And where did Lorne go? So was Beleris and ancient and why did the wraith think Rodney was him? TELL ME!!!!
sg_challenges Challenge #35 : Bones/Death
Updated: 21 Dec 2006; Published: 21 Dec 2006
Wow, chilly. I had the conflicting urge to laugh and shiver at the same time. Great story! I love your little oneshots, always very nice.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it! ^_^