Penname: lorrabme [Contact]
Real name: Louise Member Since: 14 Mar 2005
Membership status: Member
Crazy, fanfic addict, with occasional delusions of writerdom. Who can site all writers responsible for her downward spiral into co-dependance with ongoing slash pairings...
Reviews by lorrabme
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Summary: Carson Beckett encounters a piece of Ancient technology which changes his life in more ways than one. Pairing: McKay/Sheppard, Beckett/McKay/Sheppard

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, Established Relationship, First Time, Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 66040; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Nov 2005; Published: 15 Feb 2005
Reviewer: lorrabme (Signed)
14 Mar 2005
Hey, I just have to say I loved this piece. It was heart wrenching and funny, running smoothly through a series of varied emotions. And it really helped that the two cutest scientists in the Pegasus Galay were gettin' it on with a cute major.
Chapter 1: Prologue
No Greater Love by Adelle [NC-17]
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Summary: Everett was an outsider. He wouldn't understand what John's sacrifice would do to her people.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 26799; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Jul 2005; Published: 23 May 2005
Reviewer: lorrabme (Signed)
06 Jun 2005
Hi, I am really enjoying this story, and it's development so far. But I have one criticism cum plea- stop writing carson that way. His accent is appalling. I am a Glaswegian, and I can actually write in scots even, to an extent, but what you're writing would come out far more like a ned. I don't know where you're from, but a ned, here, is a brain dead moron who you should really congratulate for being able to pronounce there own names. In basics, neds are the dregs of Glasgow (chavs, for an english name) and to have Beckett, one of the very few cool, and cute Glaswegian characters portrayed this way makes me grind my teeth in pure agony. I do, genuinely love this story and the way you are portraying the character, but the language would be much better if you lightened the attempt at the accent. In most cases Glaswegians actually say the same words as anyone else, and even manage better english than the average englishman, it is all in the accent and attitude that makes it come out differently. I am loving the story and hope you will write more soon. thank you
Chapter 3: The Military Mind