I thought this was a beautiful story, I love Ronon as a character and I think you really captured him here.
The story is so bittersweet, I mean he survived, the encounter made him turn the tide on the Wraith and hunt them back but no one knows about the attack.
Beautiful job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I was beginning to think this might have been too dark.
This story was inspired by the episode Michael and written before Sateda. I was really interested in the deep hatred Ronon has for the wraith. I mean, there just seemed so much more untold.
I'm really happy you thought the story was "bittersweet." That's what I was going for...I wanted to frame Ronon's desolation and despair in the context of the "family" he has now.
Thank you again for the feedback! It means a lot!
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Summary: John is engaged to Jeanne McKay, only to be drafted and fall in love with Rodney, unaware that his fiance and lover are brother and sister. McShep, Lorne/Beckett NOTE: In this Universe, Jeanne is kinda cruel
Please oh please update this again soon! I'm in love with it! Whump gets me everytime, especially to Rodney *pets Rodney*
Author's Response: Heh. Yeah, I\'m a whumpaholic too. *pets Rodney also* And don\'t worry, Rodney will get the best of care back home. Well, if he makes it back there in time. *whistles* -----}-@
Summary: The unplanned domestic life John never expected to have out in the middle of the Pegasus galaxy. Includes love, loss, grief, eventual acceptance and hope.
Beautiful story, you had me crying by the second 'current' part where John supposed to be packing. So I cried through nearly the entire thing but the end made me smile, just a truly beautiful story. Fantastic work.
Fantastic story so far! I'm a sucker for non-con because of the emotional aftermath. I'm an angst woman *laughs*
Anyway I can't wait to see more, I'm a huge LorneLover so despite the fact that you're breaking my Lorne heart my brain is loving the plot, so much Kavan and I can just see him acting *sighs*
Oh and as a technical thing, more Kavan than Lorne, he has blue eyes. If you want I run a photo site devoted to Lorne, I'll help if I can.