Penname: spacepirate42 [Contact]
Real name: SpacePirate42 Member Since: 07 Mar 2007
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Real name: SpacePirate42 Member Since: 07 Mar 2007
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Secrets by mrssheppard [PG]
Summary: John and Elizabeth have a secret.
Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Elizabeth Weir
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None
Word count: 1093; Completed: Yes
Characters: Elizabeth Weir
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None
Word count: 1093; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Apr 2007; Published: 15 Apr 2007
Reviewer: spacepirate42 (Signed)
17 Apr 2007
It felt a little rushed throughout. You might have fleshed out the characters a bit more (given reasons behind John and Elizabeth's decision to marry in secret, for example) but I think you have a good general story going here! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try to expand the charactors back stories a little more next time. Hopefully my next story will be better.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try to expand the charactors back stories a little more next time. Hopefully my next story will be better.
Chapter 1: One
Sleepless (K)Nights by mrssheppard [PG]
Summary: This is a response to a challenge over at Command Dynamics. Elizabeth can't sleep.
Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None
Word count: 462; Completed: Yes
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None
Word count: 462; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Nov 2007; Published: 08 Nov 2007
Reviewer: spacepirate42 (Signed)
15 Mar 2009
I know it's been a while since this was posted, but since I reviewed your first story I wanted to do one for this one as well.
This was lovely. Great pacing with the dialogue and general storyline flow, an absolute improvement on your last story - which I felt was very rushed. It's a cute little snippet of their relationship and I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I know you reviewed my story awhile ago but I have only just logged back in. I was a little depressed about SGA ending so I\'ve kind of avoided everything to do with it. Plus I only got to see the final season in about August or September and it was hard to avoid spoilers. Anyway, thankyou for the review and I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
This was lovely. Great pacing with the dialogue and general storyline flow, an absolute improvement on your last story - which I felt was very rushed. It's a cute little snippet of their relationship and I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: I know you reviewed my story awhile ago but I have only just logged back in. I was a little depressed about SGA ending so I\'ve kind of avoided everything to do with it. Plus I only got to see the final season in about August or September and it was hard to avoid spoilers. Anyway, thankyou for the review and I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
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