Wraithbait

Summary: A series of unconnected mini-fics written for various comment fic challenges. Some are funny, some are angsty, some are porny. Various pairings.

Oh yes!! I loved this chapter! I wish you'd show the action, though... *wink wink*

Author's Response: Heh. Sorry, it was a comment fic and so there wasn\'t a lot of room.

Summary: Two more times Lorne ended up in bed with Sheppard and Mitchell (or pressed up against an alley wall, as the case may be). Written for the most recent Porn Battle.

Loved this!

Hot as hell and delicious!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: John has difficulty adjusting to Earth after getting kicked out of Atlantis. Right now, Cameron Mitchell is the only good thing in his life. Problem: John likes Cam but Cam's not gay. Solution: Involuntary accidental sex change via alien technology! (Oh, those wacky Ancients.) Spoilers for "The Return, Part 1" and SG-1's "Memento Mori". Genderswitch.

I adored this fic!!

Definitely a favorite!

Well done!

Summary: John and Cam decide to spice up their sex life. Established relationship. Breathplay, explicit sex, strong language.

I love this fic!

Hot! And the characters were well written and the dialogue was great!

Summary: John and Cam didn't meet for the first time on Atlantis. And Cam is not happy with John. But then, John can be an idiot.

A most excellent fic!

I'd love to read the other fic you've got in mind!

Can't wait, in fact!

Summary: In which Cam falls for a fellow flyboy, and Cam (Senior) meddles with time.

I adored this!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: When Teyla and Ronon sample dessert at the SGC commissary, they are joined by an unexpected visitor.

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary: Teyla worries for John. She finds him on the pier and comforts him. Answer to a five minute challenge, so it's short.

Lovely. Well written and poetic.

We all know that Teyla would try to buy his soul back for him.

Well done. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, Domino. I believe you\'re right. I think Teyla would do everything she could to buy it back or to hold what\'s left together. Thanks for your time, I appreciate the kind words. - John

Summary: John Sheppard, Evan Lorne, and Cam Mitchell meet while training on the experimental F-302s.

Nicely written! I would have loved to see more interaction with Sheppard...

Author's Response: Sheppard will be in future stories. When those stories will be written ...

Summary: Cam worries every time Atlantis dials in unexpectedly. This time he has cause.

You had me worried there for a bit, but you really came through. What a great fic!! Thank you!

Author's Response: You left this ages ago and I just saw that I never responded! So thank you! I\'m really glad you liked it.

OMG! I can't tell you how much I adored this fic. So well written and a completely original idea.

Well done! Bravo!! LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m so glad you liked it!

Summary: Atlantis is alive, and She sees what others don't.

Nicely done.

Liked it.

Summary: *Mild SLASH* Tag to Common Ground. Minor Sheppard character study with Ronon/Lorne.

It wasn't that either of them were in love with Sheppard. Evan was fairly sure he wasn't and was almost as sure that Ronon wasn't. It was... something else, something deeper that made them want to protect Sheppard. A profound sense of duty, perhaps.

Dear God, how much I loved this. Well written and...unconditional love in its purist form.

Well done!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. =)\r\n\r\nYou definitely caught what I was trying to show--love and acceptance.

Summary: *Mild SLASH* Rodney McKay is determined to track down John Sheppard and have all the awesome gay sex he's entitled to. Rodney figures they're practically dating already.

I've told you before that I love this fic, but you surely must be thinking I'm biased by now as I adore almost all your fics! ;P

Ignore all that feedback by those people who think you're picking on "Poor Rodney". You write these fics as you see fit. Period. I don't believe John was a jerk for not telling Rodney at the beginning. John is a guy, a guy with issues and who clearly has difficulty talking about his personal life. That is canon. Plus, if he's in the closet, it has to be ingrained to never tell anyone and who wants to have that confrontation with their best friend, who may feel hurt? How you handled it felt natural.

I loved it. Bravo!!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I think it\'s totally okay to be biased... mostly because it benefits me. *grin* Yes! See! I can\'t think of a world where John just comes out and says \"I\"m in love\" to all his friends. It takes a while and it takes some prodding (no pun intended =). Cheers, Ace

Squeeee!! You did it! You wrote a John/Cam story! I just love you to death for this!!

Squeeee!!!!

PS: this is ninja007

Author's Response: Heh, yep. Wrote one, but what I meant before was that I was thinking of writing more of an actual one... not just a fly-by mention. =)\r\n\r\nI think being loved to death would be a good way to go. Lol.

Summary: *Mild SLASH* Sheppard/Mitchell.

John had so easily accepted McKay, even pursued him. It irked Cam a little because John wouldn't give him the time of day but there he was chasing McKay. For a while Cam had thought John had a crush on the other man. But now he was pretty sure that wasn't the case. Plus, Daniel had said there was nothing going on there and Cam believed him, for the most part.

The thing about John that made Cam wonder the most--he was pretty emotionless. Cam had seen maybe, maybe two smiles grace his lips. He'd never seen John laugh. He'd never seen John get angry. He'd really never seen John as anything other than perfectly restrained. To most he probably appeared laid-back and easy-going. To Cam he seemed permanently broken.

Lovely...beautifully written. Absolute prose.

I really adore you for writing this, as John/Cam (besides John/Connor) are my fav pairing.

*contented sigh*

Summary: Before leaving for Atlantis, John reads the dynamic between Jack and Daniel and can't help himself.

Woof! Very well written and HOT as hell! You left me wanting more. Well done!

Author's Response: Arf! I mean, thank you! ;)

Summary: Ronon knew Sheppard hadn't grown up in this galaxy and that he could never truly understand how people here felt about the Wraith. But when Sheppard made a decision that put Atlantis at risk, Ronon felt he had to finally speak up. (Spoilers for "Trinity", "Miller's Crossing", and "Be All My Sins Remember'd".)

Very, very well written. You've captured the essence of John and Ronon perfectly. Well done!!

Summary: Daniel/Vala: Vala summons Daniel with urgent news.

I loved this! I loved the little tidbits of Daniel (in discussing what his daughter was going in scientific terms) and Vala (just logical on what her child was doing).

I love Daniel/Vala stories and this one is tasty!

Author's Response: Thanks! :-D I was dismayed that I couldn\'t archive this at All Daniel Fic because of the Atlantis setting, and I\'m glad the story has a home here. It\'s always struck me as tragic that Daniel Jackson spent so little time in a city that must be the culmination of everything his education and experience are meant to discover.

Summary: After accidentally triggering an ancient device, John discovers a new secret hidden in his ATA genes that could help win the ongoing war against the Wraith, but they have a secret of their own. Has this groundbreaking discovery come too late?

I enjoyed this very much and I look forward to your next chapter! Please update soon!