20 Apr 2007
The Wraith are coming, and Rodney is trying to save them all.
Updated: 11 Apr 2005; Published: 11 Apr 2005
This is amazing! You write so damn freaking well! The twist at the end was so devistatingly sad, yet the story is still stunning. Good work. ^///^
There's this bet, see....
Updated: 01 May 2005; Published: 01 May 2005
This. Is. Awesome.
Clueless Rodney is so fun to watch. I love how Radek and Carson just started talking about it all and he was like - Ohmigod, no way! :] :] :] You write beautifully, and humorously. Two of the best parts in fanfiction. Keep up the awesome work! ^///^
Er. Um. Badfic. Slash. McKay, Sheppard. I really can't explain it better than that.
Updated: 05 May 2005; Published: 05 May 2005
Love the ending. Oh, the mortification. It's the type of which you want the ground to open up beneath you and swallow you whole, is it not? I love the bendy-straw remark, and the whole scene with the dildo.
Poor, poor Rodney. I was also fearing for John's sanity until Carson told him about the toxic plant.
But still - an awesome badfic, to say the least.
Rodney has a secret. He isn't the only one.
Updated: 13 Jun 2005; Published: 13 Jun 2005
Hillariously random. Floral? FLORAL? *Dies laughing* You know how to make one hell of a fic, m'dear.
Rodney has an owie. Luckily, Carson is a doctor.
Updated: 15 Jul 2005; Published: 15 Jul 2005
XD Carson/Rodney fluff. I love it.
Rodney is forced to deal with the fallout of Trinity at last. Will anyone be able to save him from himself this time?
Updated: 26 Aug 2005; Published: 26 Aug 2005
:] Nyawww. The ending was so sweet! I love CarsonxRodney fics, and this would have to be one of my favorites. Trinity was such a sad episode, as was its outcome, and the way poor Rodney was treated. I love the perspective you put into this. I adore this, and your writing. You characterised Rodney AND Carson greatly. I adore you. ^///^
Chapter 1: The Art of Dying
"On his worst nights, it isn't Wraith or bugs or Sumner that John dreams about, it's Rodney, hollow and broken, silently begging to be left behind."
Updated: 17 Dec 2005; Published: 16 Dec 2005
This is so sad... yet inspiring. I love the suspence, and the beautiful ending and the way irony works its way into this story.
Author's Response: I\'m glad the inspiration came through. Thanks for commenting
To reach a stage in our existence where a new beginning is possible, we must live in moments of true present. To do that we must first accept our points of origin.
Updated: 02 Feb 2006; Published: 23 Jan 2006
This is so... sad. I can't believe how harsh his mother was towards him. Poor Rodney, and poor Billy. This is truely touching, especially the first and last lines. Both begin and end the tale with drama and suspence looming between the lines. I love.
Author's Response: So sorry I\'m late in replying to your wonderful reviews. I couldn\'t believe someone took time to leave feedback to every single chapter, how utterly wonderfull, thank you! I\'m squeeful that you liked the first and last lines, I was aiming for high impact with them so yay!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Just a Cat
Again, an absolutely stunning, depressing chapter of this story. I love the backstories that people create for Rodney McKay, this one in particular is very creative and fits quite well. Again, I love the beginning and end line, which sums up the chapter so beautifully. I can't wait to see what happens from here or what else you come up with, so see you next chapter... ^^
Author's Response: Again, thank you. This backstory has more or less become my personal canon for the character so I\'m glad others liked it too.
Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Blind Spot
Ooh! Beautiful transition. And I was just starting to like Michael. Oh well, he got what he deserved. Snaps for Rodney, moving on like that. I think that poor guy needs a hug. The "It's time to move on" is perfectly placed and once again delivers the finale of a chapter well-written. This backstory is slowly becoming one of my favorites.
Author's Response: *blushes* Your feedback is fast becoming one of *my* favourites :) This was indeed very much a transition chapter, and the hardest to write as well because I wasn\'t sure until quite late into it whether Michale would turn out to be a bad guy or not.
Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Michael
"By the time Rodney is 34, he has learned that the universe is fucking huge and that he doesn't know half of the things he says he does. He keeps saying them anyway." Love it. Love it. Love it. The ulterior reason for his liking of Sam was done well and once again, with the conclusion of this chapter, I am feeling sorry for Rodney McKay. Great work.
Author's Response: I\'m so happy people liked my take on why Rodney was so keen on Sam, I always saw it that way rather than straightforwardly romantic (though that was a part of it). Thank you again!
Chapter 4: Chapter 4. Outside
And now Carson comes into it! I love the warmth of his character and their immediate chemistry. It was a very touching thing he did, show Rodney the papers, as he knew it was something he wanted more than anything. You are truely a talented writer.
Author's Response: omg, stop with the flattery! This chapter was an absolute joy to write so i\'m glad it comes through in the text.
Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Warmth Is a State of Mind
"One man's magic is another man's toaster." That makes me laugh, but the rest of it makes me feel like crying out of the awesomeness of it all. A lovely, lovely end. I adore how Rodney describes each member of the team and facility and his true perspective of all and, finally, how Carson is seen in his eyes. The best part about the finale to this is that they didn't suddenly fall in love like other stories. There is something there, but it has to develop. I respect that and I love this story. You are so talented with your writing.
Author's Response: I have no words for how amazing it has been to receive such detailed feedback for an old story. I\'m truly touched and flattered that you took the time and effort to do this. The fic was a true labour of love for me, and in many ways a very personal story to write. It was also very much a hybrid-story, mostly a character study, with only mild hints of mcbeck, so I thought it might be fall between audiences and be difficult to sell. I\'m a firm believer in letting things develop slowly which is why I felt it necessary to end the story at the beginning of a new story, one that can continue in the reader\'s mind. Again, thank you so, so much for the comments, you have no idea how happy they made me!
Chapter 6: Chapter 6. Moments of True Present
If Carson wanted to play it that way, then Rodney could give just as good as he was getting.
Updated: 26 Feb 2006; Published: 26 Feb 2006
:] Gorgeous fic-let. Love Rodney's desired kink, especially.
You, you could take over the world someday, my friend.
Rodney and Carson are almost caught in the act.
Updated: 01 Mar 2006; Published: 01 Mar 2006
"Major, is it wrong that I found that to be somewhat... arousing?" ROFLMFAO. Teyla's reply was perfect. I, personally, find it quite satisfactory as well.
Hugs for Rodney and Carson's relationship. This is really too cute to be true. Definitely on my favorites.
Rodney gave Carson a rather awkward come-hither stare over his shoulder. "Please Doctor Beckett, I have a swelling that needs your attention."
Updated: 02 Mar 2006; Published: 02 Mar 2006
The last line - hillarious. The fact that Elizabeth and Teyla were watching with interest made me giggle. This is so well done, that I just HAD to review. You write awesomely, my friend, and I can't wait to see more of your stuff. Especially if it's like this... ^///^
Rodney tries to cope with the fact that he's deaf. As does Carson. AU.
Updated: 28 Mar 2006; Published: 28 Mar 2006
Awe. This is so sad... I'm so glad he chose the right choice. The part about missing Carson's voice made me sniffle.
So cute. You write very well.
Rodney and Carson and... divorce?
Updated: 04 Jun 2006; Published: 04 Jun 2006
Rofl. Hillarious. Although, there wasn't much to spur the R rating. Except maybe the prostate exam and reference to make-up sex.
Author's Response: *laughs* Very true. I think I rated it before I started working on it, because you\'re right and it\'s more a PG type story than anything else. But I\'m glad you liked it!
"For the second time that day, diplomacy was failing Elizabeth horribly."
(Written for the Merry Month of Masturbation challenge)
Updated: 04 Jul 2006; Published: 04 Jul 2006
Hah! What a great response.
I love all the hinting and the lack of actual graphic-ness in this story. Its just so... well written, without all of the smut. You write excellently. I'm just going to HAVE to add this to my favorites. ElizabethRadek is just SO cute.
Chapter 1: A Bit of a Fix
"Are you kicking me out of my own room?"
Updated: 06 Jul 2006; Published: 06 Jul 2006
x] This is gorgeous. I'd smite Leela, but it was through her endevours that they got together in the first place. Good characterisation, though, and a great plot ('What plot?' Lol.). To sum it up, your writing rocks and horrah for seduction and McShep.