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Penname: Hasver [Contact]
Real name: Ariel H.C. Member Since: 10 May 2007
Membership status: Member
I'm a huge sci-fi fan and Atlantis is one of my top ten shows ever. I've got some stories planned out, but they may never get finished. I'm too much of a perfectionist to make too much headway on them. I am happy to beta for anyone, just be prepared for your story to turn REALLY red at first.;)
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Hasver

Summary: Really, Rodney should know better than to open his mouth in front of Ronon. Written for the sga_flashfic Harlequin challenge.

Categories: General
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1892; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Apr 2008; Published: 16 Oct 2005
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
08 Apr 2008
Oh awesome sauce! Please write A "Rodney" explaination for Star Trek, 'cuase you write him so well.
Chapter 2: Epilogue

Summary: Have you ever wondered how all the folks in the Pegasus Galaxy keep from running out of clean clothes? Many thanks to Deirdre for beta and laughter in the right places.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/Zelenka
Characters: Carson Beckett, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 805; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Oct 2005; Published: 27 Oct 2005
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
20 Sep 2007
Does it remember to separate the red clothes too? I love the idea of the laundry robot popping out unexpectedly.

Author's Response: Yep, it separates reds. God forbid we should have an outbreak of pink among the medical staff...\r\n\r\nThanks! Glad you enjoy the story!
Chapter 1: One

Summary: "Well, yes General, but what about your clone?"

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Action/Adventure, Episode Related, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4739; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Nov 2005; Published: 03 Nov 2005
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
04 Jun 2007
Thank thank thank you so much for including Hawkeye and BJ. I realise you would want to make your own charecters, but they are my favorites. I always hope a story will include their zest and humour and I'm thrilled to find them in Atlantis, with John and Jack, dragging the still along with them.
Chapter 6: Rocks from Home

Summary: Tag for The Ark (season 3). Carson finds out that the boys didn't quite tell him everything.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1266; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Jan 2007; Published: 15 Jan 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
22 Jun 2007
Te he, that's what they get for not being honest! The way Tayla said she wanted to see the show was really well put; writing in her speach pattern is tough.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words! I\'m very happy to hear that you enjoyed it. :)
Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1
Foul Pleasure by James [NC-17]
[Reviews - 15]

Summary: The first clue they had that something was amiss was when they walked through the gate into the Atlantis control room and Ronon ran up the short ramp and stabbed John in the leg.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7659; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Mar 2007; Published: 26 Mar 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
22 Mar 2009
I read this one a while back; thinking about it recently, I relised that I loved the story but was seriously put off by the summery. It sounded like a dark story from the line about Ronon stabbing John. I still think Penguin!Carson is adorable.
Chapter 1: Foul Pleasure

Summary: Ronan asks John for a favor.

Categories: General
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5145; Completed: No
Updated: 05 Aug 2007; Published: 06 May 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
14 May 2007
I'm glad someone finally thought of how Ronan would feel about there being other Runners.

Author's Response: Thanks... and we may see some of those other runners....
Chapter 1: The Others

Summary: They really should have known that dating in Pegasus would be difficult. Lorne/Sheppard

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne
Genres: Humour, Romance, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Dramatic Exit

Word count: 3839; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Jun 2007; Published: 05 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
14 Jun 2007
I've had dates that seemed to go that way too. ;)

Author's Response: :D But your dates did not have Rodney McKay.
Chapter 1: It's Character Forming

Summary: "Since he wasn't going to be able to keep denying his losses, than it seemed more rational to bring about the crash in the most controlled way possible." [Spoilers for Season 3 upto and including Sunday]

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: John Sheppard, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Episode Related, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Pre-relationship
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4565; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jun 2007; Published: 21 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
25 Jun 2007
That's truly beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Chapter 1: Frozen Tundra
Encounters by Shayz [PG-13]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: Following his arrival at the city, Ronon meets a member of the Atlantis expedition and hates her immediately...it must be love.

Updated: 26 Jun 2007; Published: 26 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
28 Jun 2007
I applaud the way you've written the story from Ronon's perspective and really fleshed out his character. I especially liked the connection he made between red tape and duct tape. I hope to read more from this universe.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love Ronon, though I didn\'t think I would at first. And we didn\'t really get much reaction from him re: Earthlings etc in canon so I thought...WTH. It was fun introducing him to someone who should be but wasn\'t intimidated by him.\r\n\r\nI do hope you enjoy the sequels that stemmed from this fic. It wasn\'t originally intended to be a springboard for me, but I must admit, I fell for my OFC. She\'s spunky and crazy... fun to whump too. ;)
Chapter 14: Fourteen Smiles
Awakening by Athena [R]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: McKay found a room in Atlantis with unusual properties. Upon taking a reluctant Carson Beckett there, something occurs, which alters the lives of Carson, Rodney, and the rest of the people on Atlantis.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11555; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Jul 2007; Published: 29 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
02 Jul 2007
Please have a beta go over your story with you; the way you've written Zelanka's speach is awful. You have given him a mutilated German accent and even if he was it's way to heavy.

Author's Response: I appreciate the concern, but I dont have a beta. As for the speech, I tried my best and I write for the fun of sharing ideas. Sorry I upset you.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Inhaling deeply, he gave a low sigh that sounded almost like a purr.
"Do you know how long it has been," he moaned, "Since I have tasted chocolate?"

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/Zelenka
Characters: Carson Beckett, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Pre-relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1656; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jul 2007; Published: 14 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
15 Jul 2007
Mmmm, yummy. Chocolate and sex, at the same time no less!
Still, you might want to re-categorize this as PWP, instead of romance.

Author's Response: Good point. I\'m used to posting stuff on fanfic.net where there is no PWP category so I never consider putting it in that category elsewhere. I think I\'ll go do that now.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Almost Home by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 15]

Summary: A misconception by Carson has John and Rodney playing a role to help their friend and colleague regain his balance after a traumatic visit to an alternative universe. But just when things seem back to normal, the other universe continues to exert its influence...and this time it's John's turn to see how the other half lives.

Updated: 15 Jul 2007; Published: 15 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
15 Jul 2007
Most funny and awesome. The "amphibius" snark was hillarious.
One note, though; change the summeries for the stories. At first glance it looks like the same story posted three times with a different tittle. I almost didn't read this neat set of funness.

Author's Response: Thank you! That hadn\'t occurred to me...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Sometimes the trees are more important than the forest...

Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 189; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Jul 2007; Published: 15 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
15 Jul 2007
All I can say is, Indeed. (nod)

Author's Response: Never underestimate the power of soft science! *grin* ^_^ I\'m glad you liked it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Dawn is a time for breaking away from the night and beginning new things.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Ronon Dex
Characters: Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Episode Related, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Weekdays

Word count: 2027; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Aug 2007; Published: 13 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
05 Oct 2007
I love how you've written a caring side of Ronon, but haven't taken away any of his edge or strength, in both stories. I'd really like to see more; could this turn into a series?
Chapter 1: Sunrise

Summary: "It has come to my attention," Rodney said, "that I can be somewhat abrasive and short-tempered." Written for sticksandsnark, the 2007 Rodney/Teyla Thing-a-Thon, for the prompt "Teyla teaching Rodney meditation."

Categories: Ship Pairings > McKay/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3808; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Sep 2007; Published: 16 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
19 Sep 2007
I'm with Tayla, Space Pirates!lol
That's to awesome

Author's Response: Thank you! Space pirates FTW!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1

Summary: A mild injury leaves Rodney temporarily unable to use his hands. John's being surprisingly helpful ....

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Episode Related, First Time, Humour, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 12750; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Sep 2007; Published: 28 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
01 Oct 2007
Totally awesome! And I am very glad you made this NC17. Also Teyla's plan B of alien sex pollen! Gotta love those kind of details.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Chief Leiter returns; John smooths feathers. Part of the "Snacks" series.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Episode Related, Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Snacks

Word count: 612; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Oct 2007; Published: 02 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
02 Oct 2007
I missed these episode tags; you really give the scene normalcy and homeyness. Glad your back!

Author's Response: I really appreciate your response! It\'s reviews like this that keep me going. I hope to write more soon. Thanks again!\r\n\r\nMA
Chapter 1: The Eye

Summary: Detective John Sheppard starts his new life in suburbia and becomes steadily captivated by his neighbor, Dr. Rodney McKay, and his son Timothy. This fic started because I wondered why Rodney never got to be the tragic woobie widower in fics.

Updated: 09 Oct 2007; Published: 08 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
12 Oct 2007
Wow, just awesome.A really great family story with just incredible detail: snopping neighbors, Halloween traditions, obnoxius family, and odd pet owner quirks. My favorite was how Timmy met John. I'm a sucker for the guy in a dress joke; I'm also easily amused, but it's a great joke to use anyway. I'm hopping you wrie more. How about a sequel where John finds out where Uncle Radek is living and what he's working on? Hmmmmm?

Author's Response: I\'m happy you enjoyed it! I am working on some more in this universe, though so far haven\'t touched John learning about the Stargate project. John meeting Radek, yes! And John having sex in that dress too. :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Apparently McKay is not fond of costumes, masks or masquerades.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/McKay
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1897; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Oct 2007; Published: 24 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
25 Oct 2007
Wait what were the costumes? I wanted to know what McKay dressed as.

Author's Response: No, you were supposed to be so distracted by the sex that the fact I didn\'t have costumes thought up slipped right by. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John wasn't willing to give up the sky. Not even for the one thing that might make him whole. At least, not at first.

Updated: 29 Nov 2007; Published: 29 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
03 Dec 2007
Very cool Sentinel cross-over; I'm looking forward to more. I'm wondering, though, why this and the previous story are marked unfinished. Aren't they complete chapters?
Chapter 1: The Unwilling Sentinel