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Penname: Raven [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 22 Jun 2007
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For my Ancients of the Cities story, I will try to update as reguarly as possible, and I will also be posting it to a blog made spefically for it.

http://ancientsofthecities.blogspot.com/

Reviews by Raven

Summary: He's surprised he's not already dead. Or maybe he is dead. Maybe Rodney's little pockets of universes and multi-verses, which he talks about with such glee, all hold the ashes of a John Sheppard that didn't even make it this far.

Spoils season one.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Character Study
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1615; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Nov 2005; Published: 14 Nov 2005
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
15 Aug 2007
Woah. Seriously freaky when you think of it that way. I know that I lie awake at nights thinking about things like that, too.
Chapter 1: A Pocketful of Ashes

Summary: Rodney's got a question...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, Pre-slash, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 891; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Dec 2005; Published: 06 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
19 Aug 2007
*slow grin* Poor Rodney.
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: Alien mojo drugged fertility cave sex. Season 1.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, First Time, Humour, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Team
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6049; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jun 2007; Published: 09 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
13 Nov 2007
*snicker* Wow. I love John and Rodney so, so, soooo much. Especially like this. Perfectly fabulous.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: The Rules of Sex #3: "A Friend With Benefits" is never a good idea. Never.



Updated: 12 Jul 2012; Published: 12 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
Omigod. This is the same fic from adultfanfiction.com, yes? I was reading it on there and I didn't even think to look on here!

Author's Response: People still visit that site?! Thanks so much. I am a bit disappointed at the lack of good fics over at that site. I remember you reviewing a few of my other stories. Have you read Rising Above yet. That is way darker. More appropriate for adultfanficiton.com. For everyone\'s info: this is my primary posting site here at wraithbait.com. Hugs and cookies for the review!
Chapter 1: Chapter One
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
*gah* please, please, please post more!

Author's Response: I know. Sorry, I am currently writing for Rising Above. I really want to finish one of my stories some day.\r\n
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
20 Oct 2007
Aw... poor Rodney...

Author's Response: I appreciate your review. I highly respect you as a reviewer (and because you like my ork;)). Have you read \"Cardinal Directions\"? Its not mine.
Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Oct 2007
Hurray! You posted it! I'm sorry that I didn't e-mail you back sooner - I kinda dozed off. Anyway - I love this chapter because it let's us see how john and Rodney's relationship is strained and everything. Loves it.

Author's Response: Yeha, you guys are really pushing me to write outside my comfort zones. That is exactly what I asked for, but it doesn\'t make me feel any less dirty. I really need an idea to redeem Rodney and John. Something to give this dark story a happy ending.
Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Summary: Five ways in which John Sheppard doesn't keep it in his pants. Pairing: John/various

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1995; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2005; Published: 29 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Dec 2007
*giggles madly*
Ok, the part with Carson yelling at John about not getting his ears made me laugh so hard.
Wow. Priceless.
Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1

Summary: Rodney misses his cat and Carson has a remedy for that.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3567; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Jan 2006; Published: 03 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Awwwww!! I love these two! Very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 1: None
A Frolic by thegrrrl [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: No real point to this, other than three pretty men, naked together in bed, doing things to each other.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Vignette
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1283; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Jan 2006; Published: 30 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
26 Apr 2008
Don't know if I've reviewed this before, but damn. Amazing.
Chapter 1: A Frolic
Cacoėthes by Zoe Rayne [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: He wasn't sure how he'd let it go that far, but it had become a full-fledged fantasy over the last couple of weeks, one that starts with McKay calling him on the radio in the middle of the night.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 937; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Oct 2007; Published: 31 Jan 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Oct 2007
*whistles* I love John's fantasy. Very, very nice.
Chapter 1: Cacoƫthes

Summary: Collection of completely unrelated kink fics. Each one is a stand-alone, but I'm posting them together because they are, well, kink.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7890; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Dec 2007; Published: 17 Feb 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
Aw. :3

Author's Response: :D

Author's Response: :D
Chapter 1: Rising aka The One With The Tentacles
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
Teehee. So, I guess John likes screwing unconscious team mates?

Author's Response: Seems that way. ;)
Chapter 2: Shudder aka The One With The Sleepysex
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
LMFAO. Oh... oh, wow. Just.. wow.

Author's Response: Heh. Thank you!
Chapter 3: With a Little Help
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
:D Yay! Dresses!

Author's Response: Pretty!
Chapter 4: The Clothes That Make

Summary: Teyla looked affronted. "Of course none of you will become pregnant." She eyed them all in turn, spending an extra-long time on Ronon. "Unless of course, you want to."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1225; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Mar 2006; Published: 04 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Dec 2007
This part:
John realized they had to get out of there before one of the men started to give birth (don't think about how, he warned himself), and Ronon kidnapped the baby to raise as his own.

and this part:
"Not that I want one," Rodney said hurriedly, like he was worried that John was going to suddenly whip out a portable womb.

made me laugh so hard.
i loves it.
Chapter 1: 1/1
Doctor's Orders by Xanthe [NC-17]
[Reviews - 16]

Summary: "You are NOT the person you pretend to be, Carson Beckett!" This story was written for a kinkathon so it's kinky *g*. Contains light bondage, mild spanking etc - all very loving and consensual.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, First Time, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 20317; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Mar 2006; Published: 19 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Oh. My. God. I LOVE THIS.

Seriously. It is freaking amazing.

How do you come up with this?! I cannot stop reading this over and over again. It is fantastically amazing. I could only WISH that I could write something like this.

You are fabulous.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had such a blast writing this story and think of it so fondly - I\'m so pleased you enjoyed it too!
Chapter 1: None

Summary: Written for the LJ Atlantis kink challenge details are as follows: I'd like to see something involving bondage (collars/leashes in particular) with some light d/s, possessiveness, and some biting is a definite plus. If Sheppard is in it, dog tags are a welcome addition. With a happy ending, & no non-con. Pretty much would like McKay with Beckett and/or Sheppard and/or Zelenka.


Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 25676; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Apr 2008; Published: 17 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
06 Apr 2008
That was perfect.
It couldn't have been better. I loved it.
Completely.

Author's Response: *big smile* thank you!!
Chapter 1: chapter 1

Summary: Rodney McKay is brutalized in a mental institution. McKay/??? Mystery.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3118; Completed: No
Updated: 22 Apr 2006; Published: 20 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Man, I'm so confused! What the hell has happened to make Rodney need to be here and what the hell is with him not remembering anything?

Author's Response: God, I never should have posted that story until after I had written more for it. All it does is confuse people. EVENTUALLY, I will finish this story.
Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Summary: Designer Rodney McKay loses a model shortly before the launch of his next collection, and guess who he sees working on a construction site right outside his windows?

Updated: 27 Apr 2006; Published: 27 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
26 Feb 2008
I loved this.
Chapter 1: 1/1