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Penname: Raven [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 22 Jun 2007
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For my Ancients of the Cities story, I will try to update as reguarly as possible, and I will also be posting it to a blog made spefically for it.

http://ancientsofthecities.blogspot.com/

Reviews by Raven

Summary: Rodney McKay is a sentinel without a guide, but he's still the smartest man in Atlantis.

Updated: 15 Dec 2007; Published: 29 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
09 Nov 2007
Oh, wow. I love the banter between the two of them. So wonderful!
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
*shudders* Oh, wow. I need such a cold shower now. And maybe some new undies, too....
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
19 Nov 2007
Awwww! I love this so much! I totally love it how you put the episodes in here and everthing! Very nice.
Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
22 Nov 2007
Oh, man. I bet this isn't going to end good, huh?
Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
25 Nov 2007
haha.
hurrah for rodney molesting john!
lovely chapter as always.
Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
28 Nov 2007
I'm loving this!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Nov 2007
Haha. Man, I loved this! I can't wait for more!

"But your weapon is so impressive."
Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Dec 2007
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Oh, jeez!
I can't wait for more!
THIS IS FABULOUS!
Please tell me you're writing the next chapter right now!

Author's Response: It\'s done - in fact the whole thing is done and in the final stages of editing, more should be coming in the next few days, so glad you\'re still enjoying it :)
Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
06 Dec 2007
Aw. They made it! Stupid John, though, for doing that. :[
Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
06 Dec 2007
But.. But.. why did his dad lie to him? And what's going to happen with Col. Carter?!
Damnit! More, I say!

Author's Response: John\'s dad thinks sentinels and guides are freaks (I believe it was mentioned in one of the early chapters in a concersation with Rodney or Carson) so he didn\'t want to even take a chance that his son was one of them and managed to keep him from being tested. As for Sam... we\'ll see her again ;)\r\n\r\nWe\'re in the home stretch now, 3 more parts to go - they should be edited and posted over the next week - thanks for hanging with us!
Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
08 Dec 2007
Aw... Ok, I can't wait to hear why John's dad lied to him about getting tested, and I can't wait for their training to start!

Author's Response: Thanks and we may never know _why_ his dad lied, just that he did
Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Dec 2007
*giggles* Pepe Le Pew... ah, I remember watching that skunk in cartoons... Good times, good times.
Well, I understand about John's dad now.. but you have to update soon! Again! I comand it! :]]

Author's Response: ROFL By your command, we will... in the next few days ;)
Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
13 Dec 2007
Yes! Rodney told her off! :]
And John was promoted! Woohoo!

:]] cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Both of those made us very happy glad they did the same for you!
Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
15 Dec 2007
Awww!!! I love the ending!
Holy crap, this was amazing!!!!

:]]]

Author's Response: Thanks so much and for staying with us for the ride!
Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Summary: "All I know is that every time I get taken captive, it's the Wraith. Just once, I would like to be taken prisoner by the sexy alien."

Episode tag for Travelers

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1264; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Nov 2007; Published: 30 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Oct 2007
Oh. My. GOD. I had this EXACT same thought to try and write a story for what Rodney said - about wanting to be captured by the hot alien for once - and I could NOT have written this better! Thank you for putting my thoughts down into words that make sense!

Author's Response: Yay! I\'m so glad you liked. When the idea came to me, it was so easy to write because it was just *so* the boys, y\'know? And I wanted to get it posted *quick* before anyone else came up with the same idea. Good thing I did! LOL
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney never saw it coming. One minute he was complaining loudly about the early morning mission that sent him and Ronon to investigate M7P-922 while checking his scanner and the next he wasn't.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Ronon Dex
Characters: Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Episode Related, First Time, Humour, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4872; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Nov 2007; Published: 01 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
03 Nov 2007
Wow. I loved it! I'm so glad that Ronon decided to make Rodney's lil' wish come true.
Chapter 1: Getting What You Want

Summary: Sometimes being the center of attention means people see you as someone you're not. Sheppard tries to tell Lorne that he's not perfect.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne
Genres: Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 398; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Nov 2007; Published: 02 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
03 Nov 2007
Aw...! I love them together! So cute.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Eyelashes by Sandy [PG-13]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: John contemplates Rodney's eyelashes

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Pre-slash, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 329; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Nov 2007; Published: 02 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Nov 2007
Jeez, John needs to get a grip on his dirty little mind, doesn't he?

Author's Response: Nah, he just needs to get a grip on McKay. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney has to deal with a very deterimened John Sheppard after accidently revealing his feelings about the Air Force Colonel

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 937; Completed: No
Updated: 03 Nov 2007; Published: 02 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
03 Nov 2007
Ooooh.... Please continue! I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will continue, and it makes my heart sing that you appreciate\r\nthis story! ;)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney muses over his relationship with John and how others might percieve it.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Established Relationship, Vignette
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1089; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Nov 2007; Published: 04 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
04 Nov 2007
Wow. I totally love this. Just, wow. Fabulous and amazing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading :) ~H~
Chapter 1: Chapter 1