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Penname: Raven [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 22 Jun 2007
Membership status: Member
For my Ancients of the Cities story, I will try to update as reguarly as possible, and I will also be posting it to a blog made spefically for it.

http://ancientsofthecities.blogspot.com/

Reviews by Raven

Summary: "It was awful and wonderful and kinky and dirty, and best of all, they were doing this together." Rodney never thought that he could trust anyone with his most guarded secrets. He was wrong.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9547; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Nov 2007; Published: 05 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
^_^ Wow, that was just so hot. I love these two together. Wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you liked it!\r\n
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John and Rodney have a rare lazy morning together.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1595; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Nov 2007; Published: 05 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
Aw, the boys are just so cute together...

Author's Response: Aren\'t they just!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Tomorrow wasn't going to be 'just another day' ... but no one ever said it was going to be easy either. The back story continues with a short interlude while the boys get on the same page. (Lorne/Parrish)

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Original Character, Other
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Humour, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 36193; Completed: No
Updated: 29 Dec 2007; Published: 05 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
O.O You have to continue! Oh, wow! You have to!!

Author's Response: There is a bunch more to follow - one chapter at a time .... just like real life! :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
22 Nov 2007
Ok, wow! I'm sooo glad that you continued this and I cannot wait to read more! I love this pairing in your story! I really, really do and I soooo want to read more!
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Dec 2007
I haven't even finished with this chapter, but I have GOT to tell you that this part:

Lost in his memories, he hadn't even noticed Sgt. Tsosie's arrival. She had entered the room so silently he wasn't even aware she was there until she scared the shit out him by saluting him as he turned around. Oddly, his terror stricken reaction didn't seem to phase her in the least. He was beginning to understand now how she had ended up in Pegasus. Well, with the conflict with the Ori heating up back home, his choices were a bit limited.

By the time he realized he wasn't actually in heart failure Grant was walking in, David right behind him. Tsosie snapped sharply back to attention, saluting the RAF officer as he entered.

Grant did a double take at Tsosie, apparently assuming she was saluting Lorne and jumped to attention himself. "Major Lorne, sir. Flying Officer Thomas Grant reporting as ordered, sir." Oh brother. Lorne felt a headache coming on.


anddd this part:

She took the rifle from him very carefully but once released from his grip, that was the last he saw of it for five seconds as she snapped it around in her hands with lightning fast speed, quickly checking over moving parts Lorne didn't even know were on the damn thing with the efficient dexterity of a surgeon. "Yes, sir."

Made me laugh. Very hard. I think your broke my spleen.

Author's Response: Glad you liked that segment. I wrote it during some off time at work (not unlike Rodney, my laptop goes EVERYWHERE). A coworker started looking at me funny wondering what I was chuckling at. \'oooh, nothing ... nothing at all\' - save, close.\r\n\r\nsorry about the spleen
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Dec 2007
:] Ok, I finished the chapter. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Do I detect an unspoke \"now!\" in there somewhere?
Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Summary: And, hell, McKay's got a whole wall of degrees, maybe he does have a Masters of Cocksucking.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/McKay
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1580; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Nov 2007; Published: 06 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
06 Nov 2007
*is a liquid puddle of goo*

crap. i think you melted me permanentely.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: He wondered if this was supposed to be punishment, or a reward. With Sheppard you really couldn't tell sometimes.

Updated: 12 Nov 2007; Published: 08 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
12 Nov 2007
Wow. Really hot and really sweet at the same time. Very nice.

Author's Response: Why thank you.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "I think maybe I'm the one who is dead and you are the one who is alone" Sheppard has gone a little insane, trapped alone in a cell. Massive Sheppard Whump. Poor muffin.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 622; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 09 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
*sniff* that's so sad...

Author's Response: I know, I sort of feel guilty I put Sheppard through so much. heh.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: oh, Rodney's arm-writing. the first of what I am sure will be many, many drabbles and sonnets dedicated to it. Spoilers over Tabula Rasa.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Ship Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble, Episode Related, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 114; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 09 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Wow. Please keep going.

Author's Response: Trust me, it\'s unhealthy the amount of writing I\'ve done off of this. It\'s driven me insane. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: SheppardStackhouse. Some people need to learn to lock their doors.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Other
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 877; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 10 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Haha. Wow. That's nice.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Proof by rizzo [R]
[Reviews - 10]

Summary: "We should be having sex," John said conversationally.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1214; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 10 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Hahaha. Go, John!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Kolya has McKay tied to a chair, beaten and bloody, but does Weir give in to Kolya's demands, or does she leave Rodney to a dark fate? (This story's rating will increase as new authors make it as slashy or as dark as they want.)

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Original Character, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1528; Completed: No
Updated: 28 May 2009; Published: 10 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
05 Dec 2007
Yay! You posted it!
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Flyboys by cynatnite [NC-17]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: When Cameron Mitchell and John Sheppard met, they were going to fly planes. Little did they know how their lives would intersect over the years up to joining Stargate Command.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Mitchell/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill
Genres: Angst, Character Study
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7566; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
I love how these two interact. Lovely story. ^_^

Author's Response: They always had great chemistry in my head :) Thanks
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Thankless by Rusty Armour [PG-13]
[Reviews - 18]

Summary: While visiting Atlantis, O'Neill learns that respect is something that definitely has to be earned.

Categories: General
Characters: Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5962; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Man, that was really sweet. I love Uncle Mer. ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :-) It actually ended up being sweeter than I\'d anticipated, but once I threw in Uncle Mer there was no going back! *g*
Chapter 1: Part One of One

Summary: This could not possibly be happening. Not *again*.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes, May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 18642; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
"Being wooed, Rodney style."

I love Rodney style wooing. And poor, John, too, for having to go through Rodney dying so many times... Really good ending.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, poor John does need a psychiatrist on a lifetime retainer, doesn\'t he? Wonder if they\'ll replace Heightmeyer? Thanks for your review!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: He still couldn't believe that he'd actually taken his courage in both hands and kissed John.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6859; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Feb 2008; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
11 Nov 2007
Awww!! I LOVED THIS SO FREAKING MUCH!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The epic tale of how John and Rodney fell in love and fell out of bed.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Graphic Novel, Humour
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
12 Nov 2007
*snicker* Oh, wow. That was funny!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it.
Chapter 1: A Bed Too Small
pH by Crownglass39 [NC-17]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: Maybe Rodney should come with a disclaimer "Sex with Rodney McKay could be hazardous to your health".

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1782; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Nov 2007; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
12 Nov 2007
*cakcles madly* Oh, wow. I could NOT stop laughing. That was wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you! Real sex is rarely (for me anyway) perfect. I mean, more often than not someone gets a cramp or a leg falls asleep or something. I figured, why wouldn\'t fictional characters have the same problem?\r\n
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Home by rizzo [NC-17]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: John's never been too sure of his place in the universe to begin with...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Character Study, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1293; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Nov 2007; Published: 12 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
12 Nov 2007
Wow. I love these two and the way you have written them... simply fabulous.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1