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Penname: Raven [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 22 Jun 2007
Membership status: Member
For my Ancients of the Cities story, I will try to update as reguarly as possible, and I will also be posting it to a blog made spefically for it.

http://ancientsofthecities.blogspot.com/

Reviews by Raven

Summary: John doesn't like to think about the fact that he was the one that started the whole birthday gift-giving thing in Atlantis.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1329; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Nov 2007; Published: 19 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
20 Nov 2007
Damn. I want to celebreate my birthday in Atlantis now.

Author's Response: With beautiful creatures like John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, and Lorne - just to name a few, because there are so many - I\'d be demanding a trip to Atlantis just for my birthday too! Thanks for the review!
Chapter 1: Practical and Physical Gift-Giving - 1/1

Summary: He didn't completely understand how it was possible to stand in the middle of a community of people and feel like he was the only person in the entire universe still standing.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 659; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Nov 2007; Published: 19 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
20 Nov 2007
Haha. Well, I'm glad that John's team is able to make him feel like he's a part of reality and humanity. Very nice. Very descriptive, too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad that you liked the story.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Why does he let Sheppard talk him into these things? He could be unifying gravity right now, but instead he's risking his extremely valuable life, not to mention brain, trying to fly a puddlejumper.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 26307; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Nov 2007; Published: 20 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
20 Nov 2007
Wow. Ok, that was seriously hot, wonderful and very fabulous. John was an idiot for not seeing that he can't not have Rodney how he should have him, but it all worked out in the end. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I don\'t think I could ask for a nicer review that \"hot, wonderful and very fabulous\" :) cep xxx
Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Summary: It's hard to find a gift in another galaxy. A short but hilarious ficlet ensues. Rated for one bad word.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 670; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Nov 2007; Published: 20 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
21 Nov 2007
*dies laughing*

I still find this so funny!

Author's Response: meh, I should never have written it. It totally ruins my reputation.
Chapter 1: The Baby Shower

Summary: "So here we are." Cadman sheds her backpack and the rest of her field gear, then flops back onto the bed to pull off her boots and socks and toss them on the floor. "Husband and wife. (Laura Cadman/Evan Lorne)

Categories: Ship Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: First Time, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2390; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Nov 2007; Published: 22 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
22 Nov 2007
Man, I loved this. Especially when she made Evan talk about his kinks. Very lovely.
Chapter 1: The Pegasus Galaxy Gift Registry

Summary: John and Rodney and Ronon in the gym, all hot and sweaty.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2239; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Nov 2007; Published: 22 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
22 Nov 2007
*guh*

Holy crap, I think you broke me with all that hotness.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Sheppard's a little... tied up, right now."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1230; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Nov 2007; Published: 22 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
22 Nov 2007
*shiver* Oh, that was delightful. I loved that so so so much. I love how you write them.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: This is my project for mini_nanowrimo 2007. It's a new fic, ficlet or drabble every day, all episode related, of the growing relationship between John and Rodney. Each day will be added as a new chapter. Ratings are G - NC-17 and will be noted in each chapter. Also, I think it's safe to say there are spoilers for all episodes.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Drabble, Episode Related, First Time, Humour, Pre-relationship, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 30 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 24994; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Dec 2007; Published: 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
23 Nov 2007
ok. wow.

seriously the best thing ever.

i loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much and thanks for reading. I appreciate your feedback.
Chapter 22: Day 22: Echoes - An Urgent Plan
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
25 Nov 2007
...what?
i'm confused about this one...

am i missing something?
Chapter 24: Day 24: The Game - Hackers
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
25 Nov 2007
oh - nvm.
i remember now.
:] i'm a dork.

Author's Response: \'s OK. I have been a little vague and off the wall with some of these.
Chapter 24: Day 24: The Game - Hackers
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
27 Nov 2007
Aw.
I feel so sad for the two of them.
:[
Chapter 26: Day 26: Submersion - The Last Barrier
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
28 Nov 2007
:] aw.
Chapter 27: Day 27: First Strike - Motivation is Key
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Dec 2007
*shiver*
Ugh.
So hot.

Author's Response: I\'m so late is responding here and I hope you\'ll forgive me. I really appreciate that you read these stories and hope you enjoyed them. I really enjoyed writing the series, although it was an exhausting 30 days.
Chapter 30: Day 30: Remembering

Summary: Just one easy mission in the morning, then back in time for the holiday dinner, he thought.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Friendship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3115; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Nov 2007; Published: 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
23 Nov 2007
Aw, I liked that. I love that John apologized for yelling at Rodney, even if Rodney didn't remember. So sweet.
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: It's Thanksgiving time only somebody's in the infirmary. It's Lorne/Sheppard and probably more fluff than anything else.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: Established Relationship, Friendship, Humour, Hurt Comfort, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Romance, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2670; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
Aw, that's so cute. I love the two of them.

Author's Response: Thank you. :]
Chapter 1: Thankful
UST by sonotgoingthere [NC-17]
[Reviews - 15]

Summary: "You, everyone loves you. Kirk of the Pegasus Galaxy, Kryptonite to Alien Priestesses everywhere".

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2077; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
aw.
that's so sad. i feel bad for john...
he does deserve to be loved!

Author's Response: He does. I posted to my LJ first and demands for a sequel have been issues. They request that Rodney buy a clue and make John all better... \r\n\r\nawwww..
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John turns forty. Most of his friends are less than helpful.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 604; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 24 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
^.^ Oh, I so love Evan for his gift.

Author's Response: So did John. Eventually. :D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The F-Word by Fia Reynne [PG-13]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: Rodney comes down with the Athosian flu and John nurses him back to health.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1081; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 24 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
Haha, aw, I like it.

Especially all those f-words.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: I'm not agreeing to any eternity that means giving up you.
(Not all the Ancients thought ascension was a good idea.)

Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 24 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
Ok, wow.

That was cool. I liked it. :]
Chapter 1: Before

Summary: Rodney looked down in wonder at the bundle he was holding.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 572; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 24 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
aw.
that made me cry.
so beautifully sweet.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1