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Penname: Raven [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 22 Jun 2007
Membership status: Member
For my Ancients of the Cities story, I will try to update as reguarly as possible, and I will also be posting it to a blog made spefically for it.

http://ancientsofthecities.blogspot.com/

Reviews by Raven

Summary: Rodney looked down in wonder at the bundle he was holding.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 572; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 24 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
aw.
that made me cry.
so beautifully sweet.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: When Elizabeth had said that General O'Neill was sending them some specialist help, John's first thought had been SEALs, or maybe the SAS. What he got was sheep.

Updated: 24 Nov 2007; Published: 24 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
24 Nov 2007
LMFAO

oh, wow.
that...
was funny.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Their love would endure forever.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1337; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Nov 2007; Published: 25 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
25 Nov 2007
*cackles insanely*

god, I kepy cringeing every time Elizabeth thought she and John were together! hahaha! that was brilliant!
Chapter 1: 1/1
Too Late by Kylia [PG-13]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: Ronon knows Rodney better than he thinks he does

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Ronon Dex
Characters: None
Genres: First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1519; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Nov 2007; Published: 25 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
26 Nov 2007
Aw... that's so cute! I love how Ronon knew exactly what Rodney was thinking about, like that. Very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you.\r\n\r\n Ronon doesn\'t say a lot, but I think he *sees* a lot.
Chapter 1: Too Late

Summary: "But if you really hold me tight / all the way home I'll be warm"

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > All Varieties
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1020; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Nov 2007; Published: 26 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
26 Nov 2007
Haha. That was cute.
Chapter 1: All The Way Home I'll Be Warm
By The Numbers by Sid [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: Puddlejumper!sex as John attempts to define some Earth terminology to Ronon.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Ronon Dex
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 787; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Nov 2007; Published: 27 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
27 Nov 2007
Haha.
What else could John try to teach Ronon?

Author's Response: I\'m wondering myself what Pegasus Galaxy tricks Ronon might have up HIS sleeve!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1
Cold by Haggy [G]
[Reviews - 10]

Summary: Do not go gentle into that good night.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 706; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Dec 2007; Published: 27 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Dec 2007
Even though you messed up when sending this out through the Wraitbait community through email, I liked it then, and I like it now.
:]

Author's Response: LOL yep indeed I did. Sorry about that again ;) ~H~
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Break a Leg by Ionaonie [PG-13]
[Reviews - 30]

Summary: Rodney breaks his ankle off-world. John looks after him.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 31291; Completed: No
Updated: 25 Dec 2007; Published: 28 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
07 Dec 2007
Wow. I feel so bad for them, with their childhoods like that and all.. But at least Rodney has his light switch!
:]
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
26 Dec 2007
Only Sheppard could interpret a 'more, more,' noise as 'get away from me you homo freak' noise.

I just about died laughing when I read this part.

One little edit note: on the last long paragraph of this chapter, it starts

The only problem Rodney could foresee was that he terrible at relationships...

shouldn't there be a "was" before the word "terrible"?

But otherwise, wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more!
Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Summary: John wasn't willing to give up the sky. Not even for the one thing that might make him whole. At least, not at first.

Updated: 29 Nov 2007; Published: 29 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Nov 2007
Oh... Please tell me you'll continue? I love this!
Chapter 1: The Unwilling Sentinel

Summary: Five sentences that John managed to complete wihle Rodney was ranting and one that left him speechless.

Written after Sam's arrival on Atlantis - and that Fruit basket thing (which was just mean!)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 835; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Nov 2007; Published: 29 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Nov 2007
Haha. Aw, that's sweet.
And the fruit basket thing was mean, I agree.

Author's Response: I was quite cross with John - what a meanie!\r\n\r\nThank you for reading and letting me know you liked it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The scientists always throw the best parties.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 379; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Nov 2007; Published: 30 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Nov 2007
Haha. Aw, that was cute! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Chapter 1:

Summary: Short ficlet, inspired by a news article on the death of Evel Knievel.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble, Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 484; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Dec 2007; Published: 30 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Dec 2007
Aw. That's cute.
:]
Chapter 1: Leap of Faith
SPROING by aesc [PG]
[Reviews - 10]

Summary: When John tells Keller to watch out for the rus wine at the Athosians' festival, he's speaking from experience.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1253; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Nov 2007; Published: 30 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Dec 2007
Haha. That youtube video made me laugh so hard!
And I loved this fic, too.
:]

SPROING!
Chapter 2: SPROING II

Summary: So where did Ronon get the suit? The Big, Tall & Satedan shop at Colorado Springs Mall?

Categories: General
Characters: Ronon Dex, Teal'c
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 363; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Dec 2007; Published: 30 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Dec 2007
Haha. That made me giggle.
:]

Author's Response: I am happy to brighten your day a bit! :D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
E-mail Tag by Fia Reynne [PG-13]
[Reviews - 18]

Summary: A story told through e-mail; After the events of "Miller's Crossing," Jeannie asks Rodney about Katie Brown and learns the truth behind the lack of progress in that particular relationship. From John, when Rodney shunts her off onto him.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1645; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Dec 2007; Published: 01 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Dec 2007
It defies every known law in the universe. Somewhere a planet is completely falling out of orbit and into a collision course with Earth. It's the end of the world as we know it.

That made me laugh so hard! I loved this! It was incredibly sweet and perfect and completely awesome!
:]]]
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Doing things the easy way, just wasn't them.

Updated: 02 Dec 2007; Published: 02 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Dec 2007
Wow.
I'm tottally liking this series of yours.
:]
Pleaes, continue.
Chapter 1: The Unexpected Pair
Inflated Frogs by Quasar [NC-17]
[Reviews - 9]

Summary: Why is the new scientist blackmailing Rodney? And why is Rodney letting him?

Updated: 04 Dec 2007; Published: 03 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
04 Dec 2007
Aw. That's cute.
At first, I thought Rodney might have been a tranny, but then it twisted AGAIN and I was lik... wow. Did NOT see that coming!

Nicely done.

Author's Response: Cool, I\'m glad to know it worked for you!
Chapter 1: Inflated Frogs

Summary: McKay has issues revolving around the effects of the Santa Hat Lorne was wearing. Potential sexual harassment cases abound. Beware, complete disregard for the existence

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/McKay
Characters: Major Lorne, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1476; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Dec 2007; Published: 04 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
04 Dec 2007
Ahaha... wow. I loved that. Thought it was funny. :]

Author's Response: Thanks, it is difficult to go any way but humorous when writing about a Mistletoe Santa hat.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John wasn't made to sit in meetings deep under the earth. He was meant to fly, unbounded by anything but the sky.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3146; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Dec 2007; Published: 05 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
05 Dec 2007
*shiver*
God. That was fabulous.
Loved it to pieces!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1