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Penname: Raven [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Member Since: 22 Jun 2007
Membership status: Member
For my Ancients of the Cities story, I will try to update as reguarly as possible, and I will also be posting it to a blog made spefically for it.

http://ancientsofthecities.blogspot.com/

Reviews by Raven
26 by miera [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: 26 stories about sex, one for every letter of the alphabet. All kinds of pairings involved, het, slash, threesome, etc. One non-con fic, and a couple others with some consent issues. All stories are labeled with the pairing and any warnings.

Updated: 28 Dec 2007; Published: 28 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
28 Dec 2007
:D
I loved all 26 Stories.
Chapter 2: Letters N-Z
Hold Fast by Ciar [PG-13]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: A possible first kiss.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, First Time, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1163; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2007; Published: 28 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Dec 2007
:3
:3
:3
I love this.
It's too cute and adorable for words.

Author's Response: Wow my first ever review :) \r\nI\'m so glad you liked it, thanks for letting me know.
Chapter 1: Hold Fast
Anchored by Ionaonie [PG]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: Some fallout after Rodney calls Sheppard, John in Adrift/Lifeline. Just some angst and some fluff.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 700; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2007; Published: 29 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Dec 2007
:3 I love these two.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "You've got the refractory period of a seventeen-year-old," Rodney teased. "You gonna come when I'm inside you?"

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1721; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2007; Published: 29 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
29 Dec 2007
:D I love those kinks. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: This was written for the Sheppard_HC Secret Santa. There is Sheppard and McKay and sickness and Christmas. Ho, ho, ho...

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5660; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Dec 2007; Published: 29 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
31 Dec 2007
Aw. :3 I liked it.

Author's Response: That\'s always good to hear. Thanks.
Chapter 1: Family Traditions

Summary: John and Rodney spend the holidays on Earth, with Rodney's family. Each of them bonds with the Millers in their own way.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7487; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2007; Published: 29 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
Ok, these parts:


John radios Ellis and tells him they're ready. Well, more precisely, he tells him to lock onto their subcutaneous tracking chips and says, "Energize," leaving Mitchell looking at the empty space they used to occupy like he's never met geeks before.

~

"Oh, do you think?" Rodney asks dryly, dragging John to the guest room. The door is barely closed behind them when he hears Kaleb in the living room calling their names, but John is cracking up so hard that Rodney's genuinely concerned he might be hyperventilating. "Jesus, John. Jeannie's going to kill us."

~

"An ugly tie with an elf mooning Santa is a peace offering," Rodney repeats, blinking at his brother-in-law. "Are you sure Earth is your homeworld?"

~

"On the front of your face," John tells him. "If you can't keep it shut yourself, I'm fully authorized to shut it for you."

"Here, here," Kaleb says, raising his glass. He glances at his watch and announces, "Two minutes. Does anyone want to make a toast?"

"Authorized by whom?" Rodney demands.

"The United States government," John returns. "They may not approve of my methods, but the ends justify the means. Do I need to demonstrate?"

~ and this one

"So, uh, Colonel," Keller says finally, ushering them out of the gate room on Carter's order; everyone's been staring, but no one dares to ask. "Didn't you used to have eyebrows?"


made me laugh the hardest. you're amzing.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ficlets by lavvyan [R]
[Reviews - 16]

Summary: A collection of all the little snippets I keep leaving all over the place.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, First Time, Hurt Comfort, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 14 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9099; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Jul 2009; Published: 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
:D
I like John's way of distracting Rodney when all else fails.

Author's Response: *g* Thank you.
Chapter 1: Rivals
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
:3 Yay! Snapping!

Author's Response: :D
Chapter 2: Parentheses
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
Aw. :]

Author's Response: :D
Chapter 3: Sleepy Kissing
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
@:] Elvis approves.

Author's Response: *laughs* Good to know.
Chapter 4: Dictionary of Contemporary English
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
Poor John. At least Rodney was there, bitching away to keep his hopes up. :3

Author's Response: Exactly. *nods*
Chapter 5: Messages
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
:3 I liked all the little ficlets.

Author's Response: :D Yeah, I gathered! Thanks for commenting so dilligently.
Chapter 6: As Seen a Hundred Times Before

Summary: "I'll take Absurd Alien Lifeforms for 200, Alex," Rodney whispered to Sheppard.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 693; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Dec 2007; Published: 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
LMFAO.

You > GOD.

Author's Response: Such flattery! *g*
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: John and Rodney spend the night babysitting Madison

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 586; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Dec 2007; Published: 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
30 Dec 2007
Aww... Reading to Maddie. How sweet! :3

Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 1: Goodnight Moon

Summary: A shocking crime in Atlantis leads to Sam bringing in an expert from Earth. Sam Carter/Olivia Benson (Law & Order Special Victims Unit crossover)

Updated: 01 Jan 2008; Published: 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Jan 2008
:3 I liked it. Very good crossover.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Even I was kind of surprised how easy it was to blend the two worlds! :D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Season 4, missing scene for 'This Mortal Coil'. Radek's POV - he's worried about Rodney.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Angst, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 839; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Dec 2007; Published: 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
31 Dec 2007
Aw. Sadness.

Author's Response: Sad episode too, though good. Thanks.
Chapter 1: 1 of 1
The Temple by MF Luder [NC-17]
[Reviews - 12]

Summary: At his feet were three men dressed in short togas but with wreaths on their heads, gazing up adoringly. One was prostrate across the Scholar's feet, one had his hand on the Scholar's toga by his feet, and the third was actually on his knees behind the standing man, hands possessively clutching at the Scholar's thighs. A very strange, yet erotic bit of art.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 14474; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Jan 2008; Published: 01 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
01 Jan 2008
o.o Aw. Poor John. Poor Rodney, too.
Chapter 1: The Temple

Summary: Rodney, Evan, a Puddlejumper and a bag of tricks... what more could a girl want?? WARNING - Erotic Asphyxiation (Breath Play). If you don't like breathplay, don't read it.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/McKay
Characters: Major Lorne, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6592; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2008; Published: 01 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Jan 2008
:D
Yay! I love these two together.

Author's Response: I like the too! I didn\'t think there was enough really porny McLorne so I wrote some of my own!\r\n\r\nThanks for the review!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
03 May 2008
Oh, can't remember if I reviewed this before, but hot damn this was intense. Loved every line of it.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Poor Rodney is Stuck in the control room with an erection.

Warnings: Double Penetration

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/McKay
Characters: Major Lorne, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3041; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2008; Published: 02 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Raven (Signed)
02 Jan 2008
:3 Aw. I liked it. Nice Job. LOVED the double penetration.

Author's Response: Thanks, I felt rather inspired with that one!!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1