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Penname: purrfus [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 31 Jul 2007
Membership status: Member

Reviews by purrfus

Summary: He still couldn't believe that he'd actually taken his courage in both hands and kissed John.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6859; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Feb 2008; Published: 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
12 Feb 2008
Lets hear it for winnings and wishes. Came out really well.

Can see you fighting with it because the first section is all about delaying the gratification. But that is one of the best things about your work its never just PWP, there is always something happening from different mental motivations to emotional and physical responses to location. Always exciting to see your name.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 2: The Proof is in Your Moves

Summary: There was just no way that he was a Guide. Really.

Updated: 21 Nov 2007; Published: 21 Nov 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
Well that is certainly an intriguing twist of events. Now I have to go see the others.
Chapter 1: The Unlikely Guide

Summary: How does John cope (or not cope) with being back in Atlantis after losing six months of his life? And what can Rodney do about it?

Categories: General
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 17105; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Nov 2007; Published: 28 Nov 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
23 Jan 2008
I thought it was wrong, but since there wasn't any way to really object I chalked it up to 'its in the script', and decided I had to let it go.

Wonderful portrayl of John's difficulty finding his balance.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
23 Jan 2008
John and Rodney - great conversation with some really amazing dialog. Especially Atlantis as a sulky teenager.

Easing back into the real world - well written and much more believable than the series treatment.
Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Summary: John wasn't willing to give up the sky. Not even for the one thing that might make him whole. At least, not at first.

Updated: 29 Nov 2007; Published: 29 Nov 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
The alternate viewpoint and John's history are excellent.
Chapter 1: The Unwilling Sentinel

Summary: Doing things the easy way, just wasn't them.

Updated: 02 Dec 2007; Published: 02 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
14 Feb 2008
Great installment in a fantastic series.

Getting everyone else POV and still keeping the episode framework as a focus - wonderful to read.
Chapter 1: The Unexpected Pair

Summary: Rodney's business trip is interrupted by visitors.

Updated: 11 Dec 2007; Published: 09 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
19 Jan 2008
Yummy.

I was going to ask if there was more, but I read a note that said there was so I am going to go find it.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, this is the third fic of the series. They\'re all under my name on the archive.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: What if the way to the Sagittarius sector took a detour through a rip in space and time and the Pern expedition landed in the Pegasus galaxy 2500 years ago? SGA/Dragonriders of Pern crossover.

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 31654; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Jan 2008; Published: 14 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
Now thats an introduction. Teyla's reaction was very interesting.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
19 Jan 2008
Fantastic description of dragon flight.

Evil cliffie.
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
Ruth in Atlantis and fire lizards (and a grumpy Caldwell) it just don't get any better.
Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
I've really enjoyed the story. The mix and match has been a lot of fun to read.

I have read the books, and I'm thinking 4 months is a little young for mating, but hey maybe something about Atlantis and or Stargates makes a difference.
Chapter 8: Epilogue
Dark Muse by ashtakra [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: Major Evan Lorne has been repaired, the Wraith are on the run and the future should look good. But the Ancient seer known as David Parrish left Lorne with more than just pleasant memories. A sequal to Atlantis Manifest.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 19622; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 14 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
Seems to be something missing between the end of chapter 2 and the beginning of chapter 3.
Chapter 3: Jumping at Shadows

Summary: Sheppard and Ronon finally talk – but not much. PWP Reunion tag. Third story in the Idiomatic series; follows Par for the Course and Making a Splash, but can be read alone.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Ronon Dex
Genres: Episode Related, First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Series
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Idiomatic

Word count: 2507; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Dec 2007; Published: 15 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Delicious.

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you enjoyed it!
Chapter 1: Shooting Straight

Summary: John worries that Rodney is going to break up with him and so has a little chat with Jeannie about what could have his boyfriend all in a tizz.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3148; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Dec 2007; Published: 18 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
23 Jan 2008
Amazing amount of emotion and physical detail in a realitivly short piece.

You took all three characters on an emotional ferris wheel ride while staying true to the character voices.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney wonders why it is that he hasn't started to anticipate this particular mission outcome yet. You'd think that after nigh on three years of living in Pegasus, he'd have started to recognise the trend. Because, with hindsight, it is blindingly obvious that they would get stranded on Planet Ice Age during a snow storm.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9933; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Dec 2007; Published: 19 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
09 Jan 2008
The cold and heat reality and metaphors were sensational.

Rodney's comparison of Sheppard's and Carter's relative attractions was so funny, and yet so true. Can't agree with the chocolate-chip flavored power pars, but I can see where it would hold a great deal of appeal for Rodney.

Cute and funny.

Author's Response: :) Thank you!! Ah, what would we do without Rodney and his fleece....?! cep xxx
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Getting to know each other can be interesting too.

Updated: 28 Dec 2007; Published: 27 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
14 Feb 2008
Yummy on so many different levels.

The obession and focus on bonding is wonderfully shown, while at the same time keeping both of them and all of us focused on the fact that this is Rodney and John and not just any bonding - its really well done.
Chapter 1: The Unknown Future
It's so easy by Ciar [NC-17]

Summary: FBI Agent John Sheppard accepts a bet that leads to a big change in his life.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Steven Caldwell, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 21 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 59262; Completed: No
Updated: 22 Feb 2010; Published: 29 Dec 2007
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
Thanks for thinking of us.

Loved the movie scene. I can so see Rodney doing it - you continue to hold the characters on course while telling a wonderful story.

Author's Response: You\'re welcome. I know what it\'s like to be following a story and to be waiting for updates, LOL. I\'m really pleased that you felt the movie scene worked and that you feel I\'m still getting the characterisation right. - thanks :)
Chapter 13: Cinema
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
07 Jan 2008
Evil, but fun.
Chapter 1: The Office Party
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
07 Jan 2008
So totally out of left field. This is going to get messy.

The AU is really working well - you've done a good job mixing the guys into their 'new' careers, while keeping the character voices on target.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind comments. It took me a while to try and sort out the character voices for this new AU (Rodney was particularly tricky for a while), so I\'m very glad you find it\'s working :D
Chapter 2: Getting To Know Meredith
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
07 Jan 2008
Thanks for all your hard work, because this is delicious.
Chapter 3: Things Click