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Penname: purrfus [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 01 Aug 2007
Membership status: Member

Reviews by purrfus

Summary: The first time Radek Zelenka kisses Evan Lorne it's Lieutenant Cadman's fault.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Zelenka, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka
Genres: First Time, Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1438; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 21 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
lets hear it for challenges because sometimes its a wild ride.

Tender, agnsty, sweet - its just good.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Welcome to Hell-shift at the C-Mart.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2267; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 21 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
Bizzaro opening and then it picks up steam. Loved it - especially the last bits.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "I mean, really, John," the smile was thoughtful as she looked out at the sun reflecting on the spires of the City, "Sheppard, Shepherd, how many times have you brought your faithful flock home?"

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Ronon Dex
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11265; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Jan 2008; Published: 22 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
23 Jan 2008
Excruciatingly painful to read - condolences for the pain it must have caused to write.

Author's Response: It was painful. But in a good way... And it ends with a lot of hope, so that was a plus.
Chapter 1: Do not be daunted by the enormity of the world's grief.
Tied by crazywriter10 [NC-17]
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Summary: Could also be titled "How Major Lorne Lost His Kink and Then Found It Again". Contains: Ropes, Rabbit-Squirrels, and Evan/Ronon sex. (In that order.)

Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 23 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
It started to get a bit scary, then the rescue. Really gotta be tough to be a macho officer and then be rescued by your love interest in that condition.

Tantalizing cliffie.

Author's Response: I tried. I wasn\'t sure if I exactly pulled it off or if I went a little out of character with Lorne, but thanks for reading and reviewing and I\'ll do my best to get part 2 up really fast. :]
Chapter 1: How It Was Lost

Summary: John's acting weird. Well, weirder than usual.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, First Time, Humour, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1396; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 24 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
Fun way to introduce the AU. Would love to see more after the guys recover from the shock.

Author's Response: John\'s still in a bit of shock, but I\'m working on him.
Chapter 1: One Of These Things Is Not Like The Other
Moving Fast by Fia Reynne [PG-13]
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Summary: John muses on a simple black box. Based on spoilers for Quarantine.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 532; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 24 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
24 Jan 2008
Wonderfully written.

Uncovers and then highlights the pain so well.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney catches a clue, courtesy Katie Brown, and realizes why it was he bought her a man's ring in the first place.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1933; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 24 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
24 Jan 2008
Not an on purpose sequel but it works really well as one. Loved the 'or else' aspect of the proposal. The character voices are so sharp.

How about an on purpose sequel. Would love to see how their relationship develops and how they deal with the changes caused by marriage and John's resignation.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Inspired by one too many stories referring to Carson repeatedly as "the Scotsman," I was forced to put him in a kilt for Rodney's entertainment. Well, Teyla's more than Rodney's, but he thought it was funny at first...

Categories: Ship Pairings > Beckett/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3037; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 24 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
24 Jan 2008
There's a radio station where I live that plays the song every Friday morning.

I choked on laughter almost all of the way through the story. It is funny, but its also sweet. Great job.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney doesn't know how to do this alone anymore.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Hurt Comfort, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash, Team
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4403; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jul 2010; Published: 25 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
I'm glad you decided to post this.

Real life is painful, and exploring isn't a cakewalk. Painful and well done.

Author's Response: thanks, :)
Chapter 1: Team equals Family (a.k.a. people Rodney would do anything for.)
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
29 Jan 2008
Like isn't really the kinda of word that can be applied to this story.

There is a part of me thinking about how well done this is. Its put together and told to get the most emotionally from the reader, and it works.

I hate it - and want more. please. soon.

Author's Response: *blushes* thanks, :)
Chapter 2: Madness is in the eye of the beholder

Summary: John makes a fumbling attempt to correspond with Jeannie about her brother, and starts an email volley that intensifies with every missive.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Friendship, Humour, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7801; Completed: No
Updated: 16 Nov 2012; Published: 25 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
John's thought process and then the ending...Absolutely fantastic.

As a sibling I know I do and say things to my siblings that I would hurt other people for doing or saying. But I still wanted to smack her.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m an only child, but I still feel Jeannie went a little too far at times. Even with your loved ones you can just cross a line you didn\'t mean to. And sorry for the delay in responding! I\'m a goober. :)
Chapter 1: Best Interests
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
12 Apr 2008
Thrilled to see this continue.

A couple of really great emails, and the rest is good too!

Poor John - its so obvious he doesn't have a clue. Are you going to let him figure it out on his own or have someone point it out to him?

Author's Response: I\'m not sure how he and Rodney are going to get it together. I have the feeling this is all going to go to a weird place ... and who knows, Jeannie might even make another appearance in Atlantis! ;) Thanks for the lovely feedback.
Chapter 2: Best Intentions
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Summary: Two months after That Sunday, Rodney confronts his truth. (Sunday spoilers, AU)

Updated: 25 Jan 2008; Published: 25 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
25 Jan 2008
The emotional issues were presented in a realistic manner. As much as I wanted everyone to be happy happy, I am so glad you took the time to work through the process with the characters.

Author's Response: Thank you -- I couldn\'t see a way to do the story without trying to resolve some emotional issues, and I think it was a much stronger story for taking the time to work through them. A death like that is going to leave repercussions no matter how much we all want our woobie boys to be happy in the end. But I\'m definitely a lover of (at least potentially) happy endings!
Chapter 1: The Burning of Your Sorrow

Summary: On Atlantis, 'eccentric' is contagious. In fact it's enough to drive even the strongest man to the brink of naked rain dancing.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Zelenka
Characters: Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka
Genres: Humour, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3226; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Jan 2008; Published: 25 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Feb 2008
This is one of the first Zelenka/Lorne stories I ever read, and one of the most fun. I suppose thats why I keep coming back and re-reading it.

Evan's musings are great. I had a crush on Gil and hated Twiki - I could understand why they didn't ditch him for the second season, but I guess he was popular with some folks.

Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad you enjoyed it so much that you reread it. I still have fond memories of Buck Rogers, even with the expanses of white lycra ::g::
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Not Ready by Argosy [G]
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Summary: "Oh my God," Rodney says the next day. "I cannot believe you drank all my Labatt Blue." (Tag for "Quarantine")

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Friendship, Humour, Pre-slash, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 774; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Jan 2008; Published: 26 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
27 Jan 2008
How does it go... There are none so blind...

Wonderfully done - sand and funny at the same time.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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Summary: M.R.M. writes a sequel to his previous Penthouse letter. P0rn, p0rn, and more p0rn.

Updated: 26 Jan 2008; Published: 26 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
27 Jan 2008
It is hot. But I was laughing so hard I couldn't finish it.

I'm going to try again later.

Author's Response: It\'s great to make people laugh! I hope you make it through next time. *g*
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Tag to Quarantine. John's been acting strangely, and Rodney wants to know why. Everyone else already does; except John, of course.

Categories: Ship Pairings > McKay/Other, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Episode Related, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6218; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Jan 2008; Published: 26 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
27 Jan 2008
Its a crazy, sad, sweet ride. Good job.
Chapter 1: Schadenfreude Pie

Summary: John, Rodney and Ronon spend some quality sharing time together.

Updated: 27 Jan 2008; Published: 26 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
27 Jan 2008
Threesomes can be tough to balance. Sexual this works. Can it long term? Only the author knows.

Author's Response: The author is hopeful on the threesome\'s behalf! :D More seriously, thanks so much for reading!
Chapter 1: Knocking Down The Walls
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Summary: It's just a machine, like any hundreds of others the Ancients had left lying around, but he can't get it out of his mind.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Pre-relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3306; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Jan 2008; Published: 27 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
28 Jan 2008
In this particular case does it really qualify as pre-slash?

I read a few gender benders and while some of them have been well written this one is that plus it makes sense from the character perspective.

I would like to see more of this.

Author's Response: Whoops. I very deliberately selected \"pre-relationship\" for just this reason, but it just so happens that the option for \"pre-slash\" is directly below it and I accidentally selected both.\r\n\r\nGlad you liked, and I\'m starting to think I\'m going to have no choice but to write more of this at some point. Perhaps. Someday. Maybe.
Chapter 1: pt 1 of 1
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Summary: Rodney is a cat who talks and wears boots. John inherits him and - well, you know the story!

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/Zelenka, Ship Pairings > Ronon Dex/Teyla Emmagan, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2239; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Jan 2008; Published: 27 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
29 Jan 2008
Please - no apologies are necessary.

I just about fell out of the chair laughing. Rodney as puss is wonderful, and you kept him so Rodney.

I asked for and got the Christopher Walken puss-n-boots musical on DVD for Christmas. Now when I watch it I will be see this.

Author's Response: Thanks for that - sorry about any bruises incurred!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1