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Penname: purrfus [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 31 Jul 2007
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Reviews by purrfus
A Holiday Humour by Janne [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: Crossover with Torchwood, John Sheppard/Jack Harkness. John takes a vacation, meets some interesting people and learns some new tricks from Captain Jack.

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings, Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11323; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Jan 2008; Published: 09 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
11 Mar 2008
There may not have been much plot, but there was enough to take the story to all sorts of interesting and fun places. I laughed most of the way through.

All good, but the Rodney/John with food fun was extra yummy.

If you get a minute - fortnight isn't much used in contemporary American English - as in pretty much not at all.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: When Dr. Lizzy Dunham faints in a newly discovered off world lab it turns her life upside down. Visions haunt her sleep, and the expedition discover a new ancient culture. Do they dare learn more of this powerful race?

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Original Character, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Series, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7699; Completed: No
Updated: 11 Jan 2008; Published: 10 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
14 Jan 2008
Slow build up and then Bam! Made it extra intense.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
14 Jan 2008
You might want to check your spell / grammar checker. some of the words are real just not right for the context and some of the sentence structure is awkward. For example the last sentence of this chapter. Try reading the chapters out loud - can you picture the particular character saying the story lines? The grammar checker may like a particular version of a sentence better, but if it doesn't sound like the character it can really make a mess.
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
14 Jan 2008
Okay - its fan fic so almost anything can and does often go. But - it is supposed to follow basic TV logic when possible.

Teyla and Ronon are part of John's team. Why would Weir tell John to go investigate and not simply assume he would be taking his entire team? Team mindset - safty in numbers and its important to have the people you know and trust covering your six.

If there is a reason Weir might assume Teyla and or Ronon couldn't or shouldn't go its not clear in the story and should be explained. Otherwise the words are wasted and merely detract from the overall story.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I didn\'t even think about that, good catch, thank you very much.
Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Summary: The Goa'uld are gone, the world is at peace and the history of the SGC is known by every schoolchild. Or is it? A once trusted friend is now the enemy while those left fight to stay alive and search for way to be free again.

Updated: 21 May 2012; Published: 11 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
Okay - you promised evil and you delivered. Creepy scary.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
19 Jan 2008
So he can get the help he needs. Talk about adding insult to injury.

I wasn't sure about this, because even as AU it is tough to see one of the good guys as the villian. However the story is well done with thoughts and motivations from both sides. Can't wait to see more.
Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Summary: Torchwood/SGA crossover, future-fic set sometime post series 1 Torchwood and post season 4 SGA (slight AU as of SGA ep "Doppelganger"). Not part of the Beatles 'verse.
Ianto thinks he should remember, but Lorne can't tell him why.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 15504; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Jan 2008; Published: 13 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
Lovely cross. Your Lorne has an amazing amount of willpower / self-control.

Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad you liked it.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: The sex pollen takes a while to kick in, but it gets there in the end.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: First Time, Humour
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1291; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Jan 2008; Published: 13 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
Sometimes a scientist has just got to do what he has to.

Author's Response: Yes, indeed.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Ronon's tired of only being good at one thing. Fortunately, he's smarter than everyone gave him credit for.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Other, Slash Pairings > Zelenka/other
Characters: Radek Zelenka, Ronon Dex
Genres: Character Study, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1530; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jan 2008; Published: 17 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
17 Jan 2008
Nicely done. Ronon gets a new view, and everyone else is true.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. :)
Chapter 1: Quick Study

Summary: When Rodney gets taken over by an alien entity, he ends up doing something awful to John -- but John cares a hell of a lot more about what's happening to Rodney.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 715; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jan 2008; Published: 17 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
17 Jan 2008
Wonderful job given the constraints.

Now for the but - You can't just leave it like that. Who, how, why, and so forth.

Soon please?

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it. :)
Chapter 1: Protect Us Both From This

Summary: "It's one of those 'I'd tell you, but then I'd have to shoot you' things."

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Friendship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1570; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Jan 2008; Published: 19 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
19 Jan 2008
Amazing idea and wonderfully told.

I was a bit surprized at the idea of Rodney the Asgard being 600 years old but the story does mention he has lost of lot of his memories, so who knows how old he might really be - or not if he's just messing with John. Either way its fun.

Author's Response: I\'m a little late with this response: It wasn\'t intentional, I made Rodney a lot younger than he should have been. My mistake. (I like your suggestion of fixing it, though.) Thanks!
Chapter 1: What You See Is What You Get

Summary: M.R.M. writes a letter to Penthouse. P0rn, p0rn, and more p0rn, in the classic Penthouse tradition.

Updated: 19 Jan 2008; Published: 19 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
19 Jan 2008
I laughed all the way through. Which is a fairly typical reaction on my part to Penthouse letters - my partner and I have been know to amuse each other by reading them aloud. However, unlike Penthouse's usual contibutors your purpose was clearly humor. Incredibly well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! It\'s an unusual kind of fic for me and I felt a little ridiculous but also weirdly happy to be writing it, so it\'s very nice to know it was enjoyed. :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Colonel Sheppard so gets the wrong end of the proverbial stick, much to the delight of Teyla and Rodney. Meanwhile Major Lorne and Ronon have not turned up to breakfast, can anyone guess why?

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, Romance, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1856; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Jan 2008; Published: 19 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
Happy for Lorne and Ronon, but John blushing takes the cake in this story.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: McKay's shrill insistence that he was not a clone for goodness sakes, and he was not going to high school again, no matter what they'd managed to talk O'Neill's clone into doing—fell on deaf ears.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Steven Caldwell, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2001; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Jan 2008; Published: 19 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
20 Jan 2008
You have an amazing gift with words. Your description create such lush visuals. Rodney's cuteness, John's hair.

It is so good.

Author's Response: ::blush:: thank you!
Chapter 1: How John & Rodney Got Married
Nocturne by Archae_ology [NC-17]
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: With wide eyes he looked down at Ronon, at the man who had made him stumble and with boneless fingers he set his instrument down on the table top. Lorne/Dex. Thanks to scifinut for the beta!

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other, Slash Pairings > Ronon Dex/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Ronon Dex
Genres: First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 328; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 20 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
I didn't see the genre notes before I read so I was wondering if this was an established relationship because I think that as written it could go either way.

Once I saw the note about first times I decided Lorne being able to continue playing was just amazing.
Chapter 1: Nocturne

Summary: The first time Radek Zelenka kisses Evan Lorne it's Lieutenant Cadman's fault.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Zelenka, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka
Genres: First Time, Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1438; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 21 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
lets hear it for challenges because sometimes its a wild ride.

Tender, agnsty, sweet - its just good.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Welcome to Hell-shift at the C-Mart.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2267; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 21 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Jan 2008
Bizzaro opening and then it picks up steam. Loved it - especially the last bits.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "I mean, really, John," the smile was thoughtful as she looked out at the sun reflecting on the spires of the City, "Sheppard, Shepherd, how many times have you brought your faithful flock home?"

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Ronon Dex
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11265; Completed: Yes
Updated: 22 Jan 2008; Published: 22 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
22 Jan 2008
Excruciatingly painful to read - condolences for the pain it must have caused to write.

Author's Response: It was painful. But in a good way... And it ends with a lot of hope, so that was a plus.
Chapter 1: Do not be daunted by the enormity of the world's grief.
Tied by crazywriter10 [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: Could also be titled "How Major Lorne Lost His Kink and Then Found It Again". Contains: Ropes, Rabbit-Squirrels, and Evan/Ronon sex. (In that order.)

Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 22 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
24 Jan 2008
It started to get a bit scary, then the rescue. Really gotta be tough to be a macho officer and then be rescued by your love interest in that condition.

Tantalizing cliffie.

Author's Response: I tried. I wasn\'t sure if I exactly pulled it off or if I went a little out of character with Lorne, but thanks for reading and reviewing and I\'ll do my best to get part 2 up really fast. :]
Chapter 1: How It Was Lost

Summary: John's acting weird. Well, weirder than usual.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, First Time, Humour, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1396; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jan 2008; Published: 23 Jan 2008
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
24 Jan 2008
Fun way to introduce the AU. Would love to see more after the guys recover from the shock.

Author's Response: John\'s still in a bit of shock, but I\'m working on him.
Chapter 1: One Of These Things Is Not Like The Other