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Penname: purrfus [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 31 Jul 2007
Membership status: Member

Reviews by purrfus

Summary: Duet AU.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8607; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Sep 2005; Published: 18 Sep 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
03 Feb 2008
Too Totally Amazing ;]

Would really like to see the show with this combo, but something tells me they would never use this script. Oh well, their loss.
Chapter 1: Neighboring Solitudes

Summary: "Colonel?" she asked instead, wondering how the heck John and his team went on a week long mission and ended up coming back with a baby who looked like her chief military advisor.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9340; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2005; Published: 16 Oct 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
26 Mar 2008
Very well done, and I would have prefered an adult canon character death.
Chapter 1: Innocence a Child

Summary: "You're telling me that I am in Atlantis. Atlantis, as in the mighty, mystical, wowzaa, sunken city! WTF?"
Clearly this was not Xander's day.

Slash Pairing: Xander Harris/Rodney McKay (BtVS/SGA)
Written for lj community crossovers100.

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, Pre-slash, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 606; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Oct 2005; Published: 27 Oct 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Fun. A lot of great dialog in a very short space. More would be good.
Chapter 1: Blue-skinned Vampires from Outer Space

Summary: Carson decides Rodney is a lucky bastard.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 636; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Oct 2005; Published: 27 Oct 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
03 Feb 2008
Oh so hot - Carson's POV was amazing.
Chapter 1: Lucky Bastard
Equilibrium by Lynda [NC-17]
[Reviews - 14]

Summary: It annoys Rodney a great deal at first, because with every new second they spend together he's begun thinking mine. It's irrational and stupid. But seriously, mine he thinks more than often.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3964; Completed: No
Updated: 05 Nov 2005; Published: 05 Nov 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
13 Feb 2008
Emotionally exhausting.

Very well put together, and well written.
Chapter 1: Equilibrium

Summary: McKay has a nightmare: he's Captain McKay, CO of the USS Atlantis and Q offers him to the Borg Queen as a replacement for Locutus (now Captain Sheppard of the USS Enterprise-D once again).

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 11 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 27628; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2006; Published: 05 Dec 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Couch snugglies - nice beginning.

The Holodeck sequence was lovely – the character voices were great.

Rodney, cake and Q, oh my. It's actually a pretty scary combination.

Author's Response: Thanks Purrfus :-)
Chapter 1: 1
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
First Rodney gets a present, then he is a present. Q's are weird and twisted – definitely to beware of.

Spelling / grammar errors stand out a little more in this chapter.

Author's Response: Sorry for the spelling /errors in this chapter. \r\nThank you very much for your fb.\r\n
Chapter 2: 2
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Visual mediums are wonderful, but the written word really lets the psycho in psychological motivations run free. Enjoyed the queen's musings and rantings if not her viewpoint.
Chapter 3: 3
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Pleasure – that sneaky, devious, B*tch. Poor Rodney.

Maybe it should be 'lets the psycho in psychopath run free'? Of course, being the Borg leader the anti-social aspects of psychopath don't really apply.

Taking his brain? That's it – no more late night snacking for Rodney.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your FB Purrfus :-)
Chapter 4: 4
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Queen's attitude about fear, pain, and ambition, made me start wondering – how much of each individual's ambition is generated in fear?

Then I start wondering if it's the Queen's twisted needs that dictate Rodney's change, or Rodney's subconscious desire for his version of perfection?

You are an evil author person making my brain work so hard when it's only a dream.

Author's Response: Yes you\'re right I\'m an evil author :-)\r\nThank you very much for your FB.
Chapter 5: 5
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Stupid, stupid Queen.
Chapter 6: 6
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
In a regular fan fic story some of the leaps of ill-logic would bother me, but since I know its Rodney's brain and his nightmare, its all fun.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your FB :-)
Chapter 7: 7
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
It's kinda a weird because with Rodney's food obsession you'd think fully functional would include the ability to a least taste and process food.

OMG - how self-centered can you get?

Author's Response: Ah food! Rodney\'s favorite thing in the world?\r\nThank you for your feedback Purrfus :-)
Chapter 8: 8
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
The sex is good, and the rest is zany, weird, fun

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your FB :-)
Chapter 9: 9

Summary: Harry would do anything to find Sirius. SGA/HP Crossover Harry(25)/Rodney

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings
Characters: Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9806; Completed: No
Updated: 05 Jan 2006; Published: 12 Dec 2005
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Don't know if I was expecting anything in particular, but I'm pretty sure this wasn't it. I haven't seen too many SGA/HP crosses and so far this is much better written than the majority.
Chapter 1: Harry and Remus
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Hope things work out for Daniel and Hermione.

Nice guns.
Chapter 2: Help from Dr. Jackson
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
15 Jan 2008
Lots of fun to read so far.

How much younger does Harry look? Because its out of character for Weir to talk down to people.

Author's Response: i didnt realize i had i thnk i was trying to potray more of a warrning as her trying to protect her people more then a talking down thing though now that i read back she is talking down to him and that is not how wanted that interacton to go i might have to go back and re word that part
Chapter 3: Welcome to Atlantis

Summary: [Lorne/Parrish] Parrish has been hurt (again) so Lorne escorts him to the infirmary. Written for emma_in_oz for the 2006 sga_santa challenge.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Challenge, Character Study, Drama, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2989; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2006; Published: 02 Jan 2006
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
21 Feb 2008
Going through some of the older stories and I got lucky with this one. The bits about Lorne are good, but the Parrish parts are excellent.

Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you for taking the time to comment on an older story. I really liked writing this one, and I\"m getting a kick out of the fact that it\'s still being read. Thanks.
Chapter 1: Lesser Homes and Gardens

Summary: Turnabout is fair play.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Challenge, Character Study, First Time
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 14263; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 May 2006; Published: 07 Jan 2006
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
18 Feb 2008
Since the Shark Trilogy inspired your work I did read it. It did help establish the mental space both characters where coming from. Does make you wonder how John passed the pre-expedition psych exams, but maybe they just really wanted that gene.

I do think you have written this is such a way, with lots of detail, that even without reading the trilogy your story would still standout as well done.
Chapter 1: Predator
Reviewer: purrfus (Signed)
18 Feb 2008
Its a head trip in so many ways, but the story is so well put together it takes a reader beyond the kink. It is truly a character study for both John and Rodney.
Chapter 3: Frenzy