Wraithbait

Summary: The morning steals upon the night, melting the darkness.

I love this story. Not because of the pairing, perse, but because of how beautifully you wrote them together. I hope, as well, you write more!

This is the only Radek/John piece I like. So beautiful I had to read it again. :)

Summary: "Colonel John Sheppard knew, from the moment he first met Dr Rodney McKay, that the man would be trouble."

This novel-length story is set entirely in an AU where bisexuality and consensual BDSM are the cultural norm. It is a prequel to my story "General & Dr Sheppard" but you don't have to have read that to read this.

Mmmmm. Yummy. Happily took up much of my time for the last few days. :) I love how you intentionally left in bits we would recognize and didn't go all-out to change the premise and roles. Just sortof added another dimension to everyone's relationships. Can't wait to read the other story now!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m delighted you enjoyed it :-)

Summary: Evil!Sheppard in a parallel universe. Poor Dr. McKay with a family to feed.

Dr. Rodney McKay must balance his family life with his passionate and yet cold commander at Stargate Command, Colonel John Sheppard.

Het McKay/Brown and McKay/Carter. Non-consensual Sheppard/McKay, Lorne/Chuck, and mention of non-consensual Kowalski/Other male, Jackson/Other female, and O'Neill/Carter.

I agree with reviewer "M". I personally love plot, in the sense that I write the opposite of your style. I find it very difficult to do PWP. :) I hope that in some fashion, these questions will be answered! As for kink - hey, bring it on. So long as it serves the overall purpose of the story as I believed it to be in the beginning, I have no problem with it.

Author's Response: The muse has her fancies. The more she hangs around Ciar, the more kink she wants to write. The more I read your reviews, the more I want to buckle down and tell you all about how Rodney\'s kids are all smaller than the rest of their classmates because they weren\'t fed. Or how Chuck is fitted with an orthopedic -- no, saving that bit for a suprise. I am so very glad that you like the kink becuse I really, really wanted to write kink, and so often, I read great stories that leave something to be desired in that department. I wanted to fed you all a bit of my home-grown, country-fresh slave kink. Again, I am experiementing with this story, and letting all your suggestions entertain the muse.

Summary: Add together a few dozen Cliché's, mix and serve.

Bwhaaa! Such a sweet little cliche fic, too. Aw. Since it was so obviously poking fun at itself I see no reason to mention anything other than there are a few annoying spelling mistakes still there. Other than that - brilliant!!

Author's Response: Yep, it was poling fun at all t he cliches out there, but I enjoyed writting it and I know my betas do the best they can to catch all my mistakes. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thank you for the lovely feedback.

Summary: Rodney's in a relationship with John. Why was the fact that he's married never brought up before?

I got extremely confused here because I totally missed the part where we find out she has the ATA gene. How did they find that out? Since not even half the population has it, and sometimes it's recessive, I don't think you can just assume something like that. Even if Carson gave her the therapy (and again, why would they?) you can't just jump there. Just because she is Rodney's 'wife' it shouldn't be a 'gimme'. And I would also imagine it would take her a bit longer to learn how to pilot a jumper. Be careful you don't turn this woman into a Mary Sue. Someone else made that comment and I think it's a valid one.

Summary: When Teyla was a child, long-limbed and supple as the blades of the fishtam grass, she learned three truths. (Gen, but implied McKay/Sheppard)

I really enjoyed this - kept me up way past my bedtime since I found it rather late!
Nice use of elements from her mind to relate to what happens around her.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a great time writing this, and I\'m glad you enjoyed. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback!

Summary: John had never thought of Rodney as cruel before.

"May" be more?! Oh, no there is definately more. *eg* Totally singing the "Rodney as top" song to me. Awesome.

Author's Response: Hmmm I find it sings my \'John as bottom\' song. I\'m writing more but no idea what the ETA is :-)

Summary: "Don't think I remember the conditional of that verb," Ronon informed John flatly.

I really liked this! It was a bit strange jumping back-forth between John's head and the actual goings-on but it did smack so much of something we might actually see. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks for persevering through the jumping-back-and-forth!

Summary: Rodney got his new SX-7 two weeks after he'd ordered it. Him. It. Whatever.

In which John is a human.

Yay! Please keep posting, I was so bummed to see this was just a 'split them' posting. LOL I like both, the idea is equally cool, either way. Kudos to you for just taking on both at once!

Author's Response: Heh. Sorry, I probably should have waited until I had the next part finished,but I had no idea when that would be. And I just couldn\'t decide whichstoryline to pick, so in the end I went with both. *g*

Summary: "I'll take Absurd Alien Lifeforms for 200, Alex," Rodney whispered to Sheppard.

Pffft...hahahaha! I hadn't caught this one. ROFL! Almost made up for no new Male Enhancement chapters. ;)

Author's Response: Heh. Thanks, and sorry, I guess. ;p

Summary: "Not bad for a first contact." "Oh, now you've jinxed us. I've been waiting for something to go wrong since yesterday."

True, so true. :) It's a wonder why so many underlings are so enthralled to join the first-contact teams. :)

Author's Response: Seriously. If ever anything goes truly *well*, you know they have to be even more paranoid/suspicious than when things are going badly. SNAFU is their default setting.

Summary: "You want me to babysit your robots?" (A Companion story to Male Enhancement - The Soul and the Company Store Remix.)

yay! What a great companion story! I'm not sure what it would be, but if there is going to be more I would welcome it. The whole dynamic created by them being incarnated in this way is endlessly fascinating.

Summary: John didn't really believe the date was going to happen--Carter would come to her senses, or Rodney would chicken out, or--if worse came to worse--Atlantis itself would recognize it for the abomination it was and sink into the ocean.

Hahahaha! Love it. Yes, that plan did totally have "John-Sheppard-stupid-plan" written all over it! Thanks for the pick-me-up. :)

Author's Response: I\'m happy it was a pick-me-up for you. :D Thank you so much for commenting (that\'s *my* pick-me-up)! :D

Summary: Lorne's not exactly jolly and John wants to know why

*sniff* Very sad, but I feel a good job w/ characterization for John and Lorne, especially.

Author's Response: Thank you!!