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Penname: Dementi [Contact]
Real name: Kelly Member Since: 08 Sep 2007
Membership status: Member

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Reviews by Dementi

Summary: Lorne teaches a traumatized young lieutenant the finer details of writing mission reports in Pegasus.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Major Lorne
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 444; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Sep 2007; Published: 22 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
23 Sep 2007
lol, just like vegas...oops already said too much!
well done.

Author's Response: I didn\'t see anything.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wraith Killers by Lady Ra [NC-17]
[Reviews - 38]

Summary: Atlantis ends up with some unexpected new residents

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Slash Pairings > Other Male Pairings
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 69907; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Sep 2007; Published: 23 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
23 Sep 2007
This was good. You had some great lines...love the whole sperm donation to Canada. The whole "wraith killer" evolution was well written. It is about time that the Ancients got something right.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Most of the time John didn't even know what they were arguing about.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5731; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Sep 2007; Published: 23 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
25 Sep 2007
Cute. McKay not talking...how interesting that could be.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney's injured & John isn't happy about it. Oh, and I have no idea where the sheep came from. Honestly.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 653; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Sep 2007; Published: 24 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
24 Sep 2007
The "sheep" were priceless. It made it the story. Great job, what is it with Rodney and arrows...

Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, those sheep just appeared as Rodney rambled on. I blame him totally! *g*
Chapter 1: Do astrophysicists dream of electric sheep?

Summary: It's the end of everything - they're lost at sea and they'll never come back.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 510; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Sep 2007; Published: 26 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
26 Sep 2007
Too funny, I thought the same, was trying to figure out who was gone and how Rodney was going to replace them...then "golf balls" my day is better already.

Author's Response: I\'m glad to be of service!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A story in which nothing is solved, people are still broken at the end, but there is maybe some hope.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Angst, Humour, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2783; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Sep 2007; Published: 26 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
26 Sep 2007
Interesting...I liked the way that you wrote this. So is his "first awkward" step going to be enough...I would really like to know.

Author's Response: Thanks. And Unofficially: Yes, it will be enough (because I want it that way). Officially: I have no comment.
Chapter 1: you're the place i wanted to go
Quota by Punk [PG]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Rodney's keeping track.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 235; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Sep 2007; Published: 26 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
27 Sep 2007
cute...milk spiders ewww...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney's had enough of the infirmary.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Recuperation

Word count: 678; Completed: Yes
Updated: 27 Sep 2007; Published: 27 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
27 Sep 2007
aww, that was good! nice and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! I do enjoy writing quiet moments for the boys. :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A mild injury leaves Rodney temporarily unable to use his hands. John's being surprisingly helpful ....

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Episode Related, First Time, Humour, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 12750; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Sep 2007; Published: 28 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
29 Sep 2007
Went and read your other story...loved them both...love chocolate too!
Chapter 1: 1/1
You're Welcome by sharkie [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Rodney talks all the time. He just never says anything that's important.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2462; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Sep 2007; Published: 28 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
28 Sep 2007
I liked that one, nicely written, with just the right amount of "hot"!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: When Rodney's in danger, John stops caring about his secret.

Updated: 28 Sep 2007; Published: 28 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
29 Sep 2007
This was good, went and read the first in the series and then this one! Well done, mice spin on things and yet maintaining probability within the story line.

Author's Response: Thanks. It\'s been interesting figuring out what would need to be different in this universe and what we could keep. If mental gymnastics was an Olympic sport, we\'d do well! ;)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John is injured in an explosion & Rodney is the only one there to help.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Thunder

Word count: 1497; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Sep 2007; Published: 29 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
29 Sep 2007
aww, so very cute...love the ramblings of McKay!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Speak to us, she says, and tell of your life before us.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes, Non-consensual
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8064; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Sep 2007; Published: 29 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
30 Sep 2007
This was well written. The pain that they all experienced at the hands of those that took Rodney and what they did. Emotionally it tugged in at all the right places. Nice job.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Often what is not said is as important.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Drabble
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 306; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Sep 2007; Published: 30 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
30 Sep 2007
Tender moments...so cute!
Chapter 1: Listening Between the Lines
In Other Words by lavvyan [NC-17]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: Who'd ever thought that Rodney had such a dirty mouth? That he'd drop his voice and lose his big words and say things that made you shiver with want?

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1232; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Sep 2007; Published: 30 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
30 Sep 2007
dirty and hot, nicely written!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Sheppard recalls all the times he failed to confess his love .

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Drabble
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 826; Completed: No
Updated: 30 Sep 2007; Published: 30 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
30 Sep 2007
I am depressed...John so needs to tell Rodney how he feels and he needs to do it soon! I would hate to see it be too late! SO very nicely written.
Chapter 1: 1,2,3,4 - Tell me that you love me more
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
01 Oct 2007
John so needs to say "I love you" out loud! Keep it coming!
Chapter 2: All the ways you thought I didn't notice you wanted to say you love me
Grammatology by aesc [PG]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: Lost words, lost time, lost city.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Challenge
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3413; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Oct 2007; Published: 03 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
03 Oct 2007
Wow, this is amazing! I love that you incorporated images into your story, the text and lines are woven so well. Poor Rodney and John, stranded so many years from home...I hope that there will be more even though it says it is completed...it deserves more.
Chapter 1: Grammatology

Summary: "What I want is a Zed-PM, a life-time supply of Kenyan coffee and Green & Black's, and a Scarlett Johansson look-alike with a PhD in astrophysics. What I'd settle for is staff with a modicum of common sense, a functioning power adaptor, and a refill," he holds his mug out in John's direction.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 16478; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Oct 2007; Published: 04 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
05 Oct 2007
Wow, nicely written. I liked how they found comfort and relationship formed.

Author's Response: Thank you -I\'m glad you enjoyed it!
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Babel by Freyja [G]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: After a meeting with an alien shaman, Rodney starts thinking and talking uncontrollably in various languages.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Pre-slash, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 466; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Oct 2007; Published: 04 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
06 Oct 2007
That was different, good thing I know at least one of the languages, babel fish helped with the rest! I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m glad that it worked for you :)
Chapter 1: Babel