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Penname: Dementi [Contact]
Real name: Kelly Member Since: 08 Sep 2007
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Reviews by Dementi
Drip by Crownglass39 [NC-17]
[Reviews - 7]

Summary: Post sex, John is fascinated by some of the strangest things. Rodney is happy to be a focus of that fascination.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?, Romance
Warnings: May squick
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3069; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
hot, hot, hot....fan, shower...great fic!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad it worked for you! \r\nAlso, thanks for the FB, it is all hugged and snuggled and adored.\r\n
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Give me one good reason why we shouldn't have sex."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2814; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
lots and lots of cuddles...this was great little ficlit!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: See title.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4168; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
Love it! John McKay is priceless! Good Job.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "I'm not gay, all right?" John announced, dropping his tray on the table with a thud.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4854; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
woot for policy change and making John realize what has always been in front of him.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Verdant by thegrrrl [PG]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: Just like springtime.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 690; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
aww, so cute!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Everything by thegrrrl [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: "Come on me," John says.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2039; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
dirty, hmmm, yes...I very much like it!

Author's Response: Yay! I\'m so glad!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Incandescent by thegrrrl [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: "Colonel," Rodney says in a desperate whisper, "do you want another black mark on your record?"

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1463; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Oct 2007; Published: 16 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
16 Oct 2007
Love the conspiracy...only Rodney would see all of that as a sign.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Consistency is contrary to nature, contrary to life. The only completely consistent people are dead." Aldous Huxley

Categories: General
Characters: Aiden Ford, John Sheppard, Original Character, Other, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, Series
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: Death

Word count: 7784; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jun 2010; Published: 18 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Oct 2007
Very interesting. I like this POV, I hope that you write more from Deaths POV. He/She seems sensible and a bit of a comic.

Author's Response: Thank you. I have already started writing a little bit more from Death\'s POV already on 38 minutes.
Chapter 1: Death Rising

Summary: Wherein Rodney tries to search the Ancient database & the boys don't talk about feelings. (Epilogue to 'Still the thunder'.)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Thunder

Word count: 984; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Oct 2007; Published: 18 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
18 Oct 2007
LOL, Rodney is so cute and John just doesn't give up does he.

Author's Response: No, I don\'t think John will ever give up teasing Rodney! LOL Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it! :-)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John is awake in the middle of the night and finds there are pros and cons to every situation.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 843; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Oct 2007; Published: 19 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Oct 2007
lol, that was great. A nice little moment in the boys lives. Nicely done.
Chapter 1: Pros and Cons
Poetry by Fia Reynne [PG-13]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: John is a thirteen year old girl. Figuratively speaking.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 280; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Oct 2007; Published: 19 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
19 Oct 2007
lol...I had never thought of the line that way. Cute interpretation.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: When Rodney is lost in an offworld earthquake, John closes in on himself and it is up to Teyla to mount a recovery mission, against Carter's orders.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Drama, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2302; Completed: Yes
Updated: 19 Oct 2007; Published: 19 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
19 Oct 2007
Nicely written. I like how you told the story from the POV of Teyla. Very emotional for all. I love that he got ZPM, considering.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "But John had watched McKay for years, fixing everything - things that were impossible, hopeless, McKay could bring them back."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Character Study
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 764; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Oct 2007; Published: 19 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Oct 2007
I liked this fic. I like how you expressed how John felt and how he responded to Rodney and how they both came together.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I really enjoyed writing this, so I\'m glad you enjoyed reading it. *g*
Chapter 1: a line allows progress

Summary: Caldwell has something Sheppard needs, but Sheppard has to be willing to take it.
This is a Caldwell Sheppard story folks warts and all.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Steven Caldwell
Genres: Angst, First Time, Friendship, Pre-slash
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 8 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 26155; Completed: No
Updated: 16 Nov 2008; Published: 20 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
21 Oct 2007
Wow, that was very revealing. Where as some might not like that you have chosen Caldwell, I think that it works. I feel there is a lot more to his character and not all of it bad. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I love his character, I always have...he comes across as a purely military machine in a lot of ways, totally by the book but that isn\'t a flaw. We know so little about him he is pretty much a blank canvas and we can write emotions into him you never see on the screen. :)Thank you for taking the time to review my haggy madness and chapter 2 or at least half of it is with Leah to fix out all my mistakes
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
05 Nov 2007
Woot, two updates in the same day. So excited! Ack, poor SGA-7, hope that is nothing serious. Can't wait for more. Need to see what John figures out.

Author's Response: I think Leah said she was about a third of the way through chapter 3 when we were blethering last night. Um she does have an awfie lot to sort. She\'s reminded me again that full stops are my friend *chuckles* there really is something in not being able to teach and old dog new tricks --- or how to spell ;) Thanks for your lovely feedback ~H~
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
14 Nov 2007
A list...oh the possibilities. I can't wait for the next installment. I love this story...you rock Haggy!

Author's Response: A Looong list, gods that last lot of troops from the British side were at it like bunnies Thanks so much for reading ~H~
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
02 Dec 2007
Haggy, that quote was a stroke of brilliance, it brings everything together for Sheppard. The last sentence sent chills for me...as the story expands. Excellent chapter, hope there is more soon. Wish you had included the list...you have left me hanging.

Author's Response: Oh I think Stephen will possibly ask John why he didn\'t go to anyone else :) ~H~
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
31 Dec 2007
Ya Haggy, a new chapter and what a whopper it was! So much revelation and emotion. I love that you have Carson ascended and talking to Stephen, it makes for such a dynamic contrast to everything else that is going on. I can't wait for more. Go Haggy Go...a little encouragement. If you need more let me know! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, what can I say...the scot just can\'t let the scot go. Glad you think it worked. ~H~
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
11 Mar 2008
Wow Haggy that has been worth the wait. I really enjoyed how you showed John's internal struggle and that Caldwell, was able to see exactly what he was thinking and how he handled the situation. I got shivers with the last line. Hope that the next update comes soon...I really find this whole story very intriguing.

Author's Response: Sorry I know I write really slowly :( I kinda do everything in spurts I guess and I understand it could be quite offputing to read a story which takes so long to get anywhere. Thanks though for sticking with it. The reviews for this chapter have made me feel a little better about the whole thing. I was begining to worry no one like the idea of John subbing to Stephen.~H~
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
24 Apr 2008
YA HAGGY...your back! With a whopper...wow. That scene was intense. The way in which your wrote John being able to feel safe and how you wrote his interaction with Caldwell was great. It was full of sensitivity to the situation that worked well, and showed a depth to his character that might not other wise have been seen.

Patiently waiting for your nest installment.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read Haggy\'s madness :) ~H~
Chapter 7: Chapter 7