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Penname: Dementi [Contact]
Real name: Kelly Member Since: 08 Sep 2007
Membership status: Member

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Reviews by Dementi

Summary: AU from the end of Conversion. Sheppard doesn't get immediately cured and even when he does, still has some of the abilities he had acquired. He's also still blue. How does this impact Atlantis and the events that follow?

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 32965; Completed: No
Updated: 03 Apr 2008; Published: 30 Jun 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
04 Nov 2007
Poor Sheppard, but I feel even worse for Rodney. You have to continue and soon. It was forever waiting for this chapter and I really love this story and can't wait to see what happens and how it all works. I personally think that the stasis chamber was a good idea.
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
05 Jan 2008
Another great chapter...I have already mentioned several times my love for this fic. It is written so well, and I really like all the emotions that I feel while reading it. Keep it up and I wish your muse a speed boost...so we can read more soon.
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
04 Apr 2008
ACK! You can't leave it like this for months...I demand that your muse become over-productive for the next bit so we can see what happens. This is such a great story and the complexity of the issue and how everyone reacts is so well written.

Go Muse Go!
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Blindsided by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 17]

Summary: A serious off-world accident has John facing a medical discharge and his team scrambling to find a way for him to stay in Atlantis.

Updated: 09 Jan 2008; Published: 09 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
13 Jan 2008
Hmm, I have read this a couple of times, could have sworn that I left a note of heartfelt thanks for a wonderful fic! Oh well, what a great fic...I can read it over and over again!

Author's Response: Thank you! It\'s been a while since I checked the reviews on this one and I am surprised and pleased at how many people have left such great feedback!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: As punishment for breaking a cultural taboo, Rodney is sentenced to death in a virtual reality of his own making. Can John help him find his way back to reality before it's too late?

Updated: 09 Jan 2008; Published: 18 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
14 Jan 2008
What a great fic. I can see why it won...it had all the aspects needed to make one fall in love with it! The VR world that you created was intricate in that you were able to weave all aspects into it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this one and I\'m glad that you enjoyed it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John Sheppard's the easiest person in two galaxies. Or is he?

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Original Character, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 19870; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jul 2007; Published: 18 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
03 Nov 2007
What a great story. The whole back and forth and John can be so blind. I love the explosion between them in Weirs office and how she leaves that had me in stitches. Another great fic.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney thinks it's time he got married. While Katie Brown is the obvious candidate.....

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, First Time, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3391; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Jul 2007; Published: 22 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
25 Sep 2007
This was great! Love the last line!
Chapter 1: Marry-Go-Round
Enigma by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 20]

Summary: During an off-world mission, a piece of Ancient technology transports Rodney and John on a one-way trip to a deserted airfield. Working together to get back, it takes a vivid dream to make Rodney realize what's been in front of him all along.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 33029; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Jul 2007; Published: 25 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
13 Nov 2007
Love the story for many reasons. John and Rodney, love anything to do with WWII and of all aircraft ever built, while inherently know to blow due to fuel tank placement...the Spitfires are truly loved...currently one being restored at base. This story is very nice piece of history. Great job, both of you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really got involved in the research on this one and was appalled at my lack of understanding the sacrifices that were made during this time. It really helped too to have a detailed oriented beta to supply the place names and squadron details for the finishing touches. I\'m so glad you enjoyed it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Sheppard. John. Please wake up."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 896; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Jul 2007; Published: 29 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
09 Sep 2007
This reads as tidbits of headlines, giving us enough to follow, but not enough that we need the whole background. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! Every now and then, I\'m feeling experimental. :)
Chapter 1: 1/1
Our City by 2ndAlto [NC-17]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Rodney feels a loss, John makes it better. A Tao of McKay episode tag.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Slash Pairings > McKay/Other, Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, Episode Related, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 767; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Aug 2007; Published: 06 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
07 Oct 2007
That was great. A different twist on how the city responds to her favorites.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
All I Ask Of You by Raven [NC-17]
[Reviews - 19]

Summary: Rodney's in a relationship with John. Why was the fact that he's married never brought up before?

Categories: Bitextual, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Ship Pairings > Zelenka/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 9 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 10888; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Sep 2007; Published: 07 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
10 Sep 2007
You had some great lines in this! What an interesting relationship they have.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
30 Sep 2007
hehe, so cute! Radek and Rachel...that could make for some interesting side stories. Ya, John and Rodney!
Chapter 9: Chapter 9
The Quietness by Raven [NC-17]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: It was the quietness that got to him.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble, Established Relationship
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 365; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Aug 2007; Published: 07 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
10 Sep 2007
Silence, always leaves room to wonder. However, in the case of McKay and Sheppard it says everything that they don't. On the funny side, I never thought McKay to go with the silence...I mean he is always talking.

Author's Response: Yes, I know Rodney is always talking but you do have to wonder about the times when he\'s quiet.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Sticks and stones may break my bones but words will scar me forever."

Categories: Ship Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1759; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Aug 2007; Published: 16 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Sep 2007
This was very well written. I really liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I\'m glad you enjoyed it :)
Chapter 1: Sticks and Stones

Summary: Sometimes, you do things in the heat of the moment you live to regret. But then sometimes, you don't.

This story contains a slight spoiler for SG-1 Episode The Road Not Taken, and a casting Spoiler for SGA S4.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Carter/McKay
Characters: Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: Angst, First Time, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1084; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Aug 2007; Published: 17 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
20 Sep 2007
aww, poor Sam and Rodney! Nicely written.

Author's Response: Thank you. Sam and Rodney just so call for angst, don\'t they? :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John finally declares his love; Rodney is, of course, thoroughly confused.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Steven Caldwell
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4955; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Aug 2007; Published: 31 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
14 Sep 2007
This was a priceless! I loved this one!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, happy you enjoyed....Huntress
Chapter 1: I Was Just Wondering....
Who Am I? by The Huntress [NC-17]
[Reviews - 9]

Summary: The 'Two Johns' challenge - John is split into two men

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Non-consensual
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 30325; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Sep 2007; Published: 06 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
10 Sep 2007
You had me cringing and drooling...I would have to say that those are quite the opposite reactions. However, having said that, I throughly enjoyed the concept. I for one, know with absolute certainty that I possess both sides. All in all very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked and thanks for the FB. Looking back over the time spent on this, I think that was the reaction I was going for. As for me, as I said earlier, I\'d be running away *very* fast from my dark side LOL...Huntress
Chapter 1: One
Affirmation by Sid [NC-17]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: An episode tag to Common Ground. John is trying to deal with what happened, and Rodney wants to help.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Episode Related, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1084; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Sep 2007; Published: 08 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
09 Sep 2007
This was a different way of progressing and I like that way it is written. However, I feel jipped! Where is the rest, you have the makings of a great story and left me hanging. Hope that your muse inspires you to continue this.

Author's Response: Oh, sorry that you feel let down! :-(\r\n\r\nFor me this was simply an episode tag to explore some of the pain and confusion that John had to be feeling after nearly dying in such a horrible way - and to reveal how much Rodney had suffered, too. I think that eventually the two of them will be together, but that\'s not the story I was trying to tell.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1

Summary: Ronon had taken their favourite balcony, Teyla the top of the central spire, and Rodney one of the few open places on Atlantis without a railing; all three of them were certain they knew just what, exactly, John Sheppard would be hallucinating.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes, Character death
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2755; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Sep 2007; Published: 08 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
08 Sep 2007
This was well done. Nice use of a red herring, my obvious assumption with the CD warning had been that John had indeed died. I was to wrapped in McKay's grief to make the connection until it was said. Great job!

Author's Response: Well, he did die. They just managed to bring him back. *coughs* Thank you for commenting!
Chapter 1: 1/3
The Bottom Line by Punk [NC-17]
[Reviews - 9]

Summary: This time the angry mob was Rodney's fault.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1857; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Sep 2007; Published: 08 Sep 2007
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
09 Sep 2007
This one hand me chuckling in a good way, through the whole thing.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1