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Penname: Squeaky [Contact]
Real name: Alexis Member Since: 16 Sep 2007
Membership status: Member

Reviews by Squeaky

Summary: Elizabeth had a fixation with curling her fingers around military dog tags while making love. It was an observation that both Cameron and John had voiced on more than one occasion, but Elizabeth liked the feel of the chinks, hands turning white-knuckled as she clutched them in her hands.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > All Varieties
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard
Genres: PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2380; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Mar 2008; Published: 13 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
15 Mar 2008
Awesome story! Almost too sweet for a PWP? But yet, incredible sex! I *love* Sparky and Weir/Mitchell, and Shep/Mitch *so* much! Having them all together? Wonderful! Thanks!
Sq
ps. If you *wanted* to write something with a plot for this group, that'd be good, too...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "You are being ridiculous," Teyla said sternly. "The Blue Moon Ball is a wonderful opportunity to be reunited with old friends and to celebrate our continued survival against the Wraith." "Yes," Rodney said under his breath. "Not being dead: an excellent reason to make ourselves wish we were."

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Humour, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8354; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Mar 2008; Published: 16 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
25 Mar 2008
LOL!!! Funny and sweet and wonderful all at the same time!!! I really, *really* want the sequel! I don't care what you write! JUST WRITE MORE!!!
Sq
Chapter 1: Up To and Including the Blue Moon Ball

Summary: Dishonorably discharged and down on his luck, John Sheppard agrees to a proposition that doesn't go as promised.

Updated: 16 Mar 2008; Published: 16 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
17 May 2008
Great story! Fun and with a lovely happy ending. The Teyla/Ronon part was really good, too. Thanks for sharing!
Sq

Author's Response: I\'ve never written Teyla/Ronon before, so it was fun to work those two in, venturing into a little het territory. But mostly just loving my boys and thank you for reading!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney's never been good with anything that lacks explanation.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3601; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Mar 2008; Published: 21 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
23 Mar 2008
Wonderful character study. Thanks so much.

Sq.
Chapter 1: Twelve Days' Breath

Summary: It's been almost a year, John thinks, as he watches over the others at night. Almost a year since his team tried to dial Atlantis and failed. One hell of an anniversary to have.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Drama, Team
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Snapshots of Survival

Word count: 776; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Mar 2008; Published: 21 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
25 Mar 2008
Oh man. Beautiful and sad and bitter all at the same time. Could you continue this AU? I'd really like to see the(happy?) end of the story...
Sq

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'ll admit I am considering continuing this ;) At some point...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: McKay/Keller. Set during alternate time line in The Last Man.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Keller/McKay
Characters: Jennifer Keller, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Episode Related, First Time, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1201; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Mar 2008; Published: 24 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
26 Mar 2008
Very nice story. I like this pairing a lot... Thanks for posting!
Sq
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Chuck/Lorne. Intruder missing scenes and Runner tag. Evan Lorne meets Chuck.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: Episode Related, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1536; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Apr 2008; Published: 31 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
12 Apr 2008
I'm always fond of anything Chuck or Evan related, so having the two of them together? Kinda like chocolate and peanut-butter...I would never have thought of this pairing, but I like it!

FYI - It's the Canadian Air Force. Not Air Command. Air Command is what commands the Air Force, but the Air Force is section of the Canadian Armed Forces that Chuck (in this story) would belong to. I think he's infantry, myself!
Sq

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and yes! a rare but yummy pair, thanks :)\r\nSince 1968 it\'s been the Air Command, but I bet no one calls it that. That\'s the trouble with Wikipedia :P I usually write him in the Army, but thought I\'d have a change. Real Chuck himself wants the navy, but as he\'s a sergeant, it\'s too bad, he can\'t, LOL. Originally, I even mucked up Evan, as I assumed he was Marine, so heigh ho, silly me.\r\nThanks again!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney is forced to experience a brief second childhood. How will his friends cope with a miniature Rodney who thinks this is all a dream?

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Friendship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 10357; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Apr 2008; Published: 31 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
01 Apr 2008
What a great story! But it feels unfinished! I think I need a chapter where Rodney adjusts to his new-found contentment as an adult, and he and John finally realize their feelings for each other... Great story, though!
Sq
Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Summary: Other ways Teyla's story could have gone in The Last Man.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Drama, Episode Related
Warnings: Adult themes, Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1079; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Apr 2008; Published: 01 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
02 Apr 2008
I didn't leave a review when I read this yesterday because it made me too wistful and sad. Teyla is the *heart* of team Sheppard, and I agree with "The Last Man" that everyone would drift apart once she was gone. Your story is an excellent addition to the AU fannon of "The Last Man," and presented four endings every bit as poignant as the ep. Well written and well done. Just really damn sad.
Sq.

Author's Response: Thank you! Teyla\'s fate in the ep was tough for me to take -- not that she died, but that there was no dignity. I\'m glad these alternatives worked for you.
Chapter 1: Four Stories Rodney Told John About Teyla

Summary: McKay and Teyla get stuck in a time-loop, Ronon has questions, and Sheppard may or may not get taken advantage of. Written for the Second Verse challenge at sga_flashfic

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Challenge, Friendship, Humour, Pre-slash, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1387; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Apr 2008; Published: 02 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
04 Apr 2008
THIS IS SO FRACKING FUNNY!!! (*can* I quote BSG on a SGA fansite?)
I read this and laughed and laughed and laughed some more! Thank you THANK YOU for your *awesome* sense of humour!
Sq
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "You want me to try on a glowing butterfly pendant that might kill me?"

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Friendship, Humour, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: The Pendant Of Unstoppable Paranormal Phenominal Power

Word count: 575; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Apr 2008; Published: 04 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
04 Apr 2008
Funny funny FUNNEEE!!!
I really, *really* want a manip of that photo!!!
This story walks on cute little feet!
Sq
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: "I'm not safe to be around, Elizabeth." But when has she ever put her own safety above the needs of her expedition? Conversion missing scene.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard
Genres: Angst, Drama, Episode Related, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2389; Completed: Yes
Updated: 06 Apr 2008; Published: 06 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
06 Apr 2008
A moving and *hot* story all at the same time! Niiiiice!
Sq
Chapter 1: Bedside Manner

Summary: Motherhood on Atlantis. With femslash, fpreg, and kidfic. Mild crossover with SG-1 that contains Kate Heightmeyer/Elizabeth Weir, as well as some stealth Sam Carter/Teyla Emmagan.

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings, Slash Pairings > Teyla Emmagan/Other, Slash Pairings > Heightmeyer/Weir
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, Kate Heightmeyer, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1403; Completed: Yes
Updated: 08 Apr 2008; Published: 08 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
10 Apr 2008
What a cool premise! And I always knew pregnancy was catching... Heh!
Sq
Chapter 1: My Heart's Quiet Home

Summary: Thirty years later, Rodney still remembers what John said about his hair.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 963; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Apr 2008; Published: 10 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
11 Apr 2008
This was *so* cute!
"Fighting over fifty class" ::snerk!::
Very sweet and funny!
Sq
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: An offworld celebration leaves John playing wallflower while Rodney dances the night away; a conversation with a little old woman leads John to make a decision, but Rodney has his doubts.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour, Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2284; Completed: Yes
Updated: 10 Apr 2008; Published: 10 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
11 Apr 2008
SO CUTE!!!

I now think that you are officially the soverign of cute stories.
Cutecutecute.
CUTE!
Sq
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Jeannie stared at the calendar on the kitchen wall, her finger gently tapping the marked date. Five years. Had it really been that long? God, how the world changed.

Sequel to 'Not Dead Yet'

Categories: General
Characters: Other
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Snapshots of Survival

Word count: 1760; Completed: Yes
Updated: 11 Apr 2008; Published: 11 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
12 Apr 2008
Whoa.
Does this baby ever need a sequel.
So sad to leave it like that! *Too* sad!
Sq

Author's Response: Hee! Thank you!\r\n\r\nThere is a sequel in the works, and hopefully will appear in the next two months or so real life permitting :S THanks for the review!
Chapter 1: Bedtime Stories

Summary: John gets hurt; Rodney and Timmy rush to him.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: The Detective and the Woobie

Word count: 3426; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Apr 2008; Published: 13 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
13 Apr 2008
I *so* love this AU! Great story!
:::huggles the Woobie 'verse:::
Thanks for posting!
Sq

Author's Response: And thank you very much for the feedback! It\'s a fun universe to develop and so cool that people are enjoying it.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Coherency by deltacephei [PG-13]
[Reviews - 12]

Summary: An all-Atlantis SG-1? This should be an interesting briefing.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Samantha Carter
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3257; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Apr 2008; Published: 17 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
20 Apr 2008
Great fic! Excellent Sam POV.
Thanks!
Sq
Chapter 1: Coherency

Summary: "You can't be serious," Cam hissed. "You want to steal the puddlejumper?"

"Borrow" Sheppard said, like that made a difference.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Mitchell/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, John Sheppard
Genres: Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4697; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Apr 2008; Published: 19 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
20 Apr 2008
You write the *best* Mitch! And I love this pairing! Great story! Thanks so much for sharing...
Sq
Chapter 1: -
Smudge by fififolle [PG-13]
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Lorne and Parrish shelter from the rain, no, wait, flash flood.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Major Lorne, Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Hurt Comfort, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3014; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Apr 2008; Published: 24 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Squeaky (Signed)
25 Apr 2008
I really like your take on Parrish. Not helpless or hopeless, but a man committed to his work - and Evan. Thanks so much for sharing.
Sq

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. Yes, I think Parrish came across as quite brave and focused, in his short appearance. Thanks for reading!
Chapter 1: Smudge