Penname: bridgie0202 [Contact] Real name: Member Since: 23 Sep 2007 Membership status: Member
I am back up and running. I have struggled through the last year. None the less, I have returned.
I have finished Lorne's Memoirs. I will be posting it a chapter at a time so that I can edit it as I go. I think it may be the best I've written yet. If not, then it is certainly among the best. Please enjoy it.
I mainly write Lorne/Sheppard, though I do venture into Lorne/Mitchell/Sheppard occasionally.
I am slowly working on creating a livejournal site. It is https://www.livejournal.com/create.bml?from=bridgie0202.
Summary:Major Evan Lorne of the United States Air Force sat bolt upright in bed with a scream, drenched in sweat with half a mind to grope for the gun on his nightstand.
Summary: Two more times Lorne ended up in bed with Sheppard and Mitchell (or pressed up against an alley wall, as the case may be). Written for the most recent Porn Battle.
this has the potential to be a intro to a fantastic story!! it is good on it's own, but there's so much left in lorne's story here, in the pre-existing relationship between shep and lorne. i like it.
the story wasn't dying...it was becoming complex. there was a moment there when you could have taken this and turned it into a long story with several interwoven story lines. this is good. you're doing a good job. keep writing. :-)
Author's Response: thank you! i feel better about this story now :-) i\'m working on a sequel to this story, but it might take me a while to et it up; the computer it\'s on is broken. but there will be more! by the way, what part did you think could have spring-boarded a long, intricate story? just wondering. anyways, thanks for the review! :-)
Summary: The low spark of panic edges up Rodney's spine, fanning itself into full flame as the warm and oppressive darkness bears down on him. He'd been too intent on saving Sheppard before, then saving himself to really notice it at first, but within seconds, his breathing becomes harsh and shallow.
Summary: John Sheppard. He can handle intergalactic space vampires and nuke wielding Amish, but when it comes to emotions, he's not really the person to talk to. Unfortunately for him, an encounter with an Ancient laboratory has made him confront the things he's always avoided.
There's something you should be proud of...I got a lesson out of your chapter as I read it tonight. Sometimes life's answers come from the strangest places.
None the less, thank you.
Author's Response: I can certify that that lesson is true! I can\'t go into details so as to protect the innocent, but I wholeheartedly believe that. And glad you got something meaningful out of it!
Nice! It's been so long since I've been on this site, but I gotta say: It's good to be back! Love this story!
Author's Response: Wow, sorry for the late response! But thanks for the comment, I\'m glad I helped make your return to the site a pleasant one :).\r\n\r\nLaura.
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