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Penname: merrymuse12 [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 07 Dec 2007
Membership status: Member
Reviews by merrymuse12
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
17 Feb 2008
*smiles* Another wonderful chapter! I love how Rodney was all possessive of John and how comforting Carson tried to be with Ronon even though it's all a lot for him to take in.

Lovely! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Everyone\'s going to have some adapting to do with the new situation, that\'s for certain!
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
22 Feb 2008
Yay! Good times and joy rides for all-especially for John/Rodney and Carson/Ronon! ;)

I love this so much and your latest chapter was no different!

I can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you\'re enjoying!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
27 Feb 2008
I just loved the whole thing! John and Ronon talking and the scene in the infirmary, they were both so good!

I am *so* looking forward to the next update! :)
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
01 Mar 2008
Wow. This is going to be hard on everyone, but I have a feeling that some good stuff is going to come from this... :)

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
06 Mar 2008
Awww! I feel all kinds of goodness and love for all of them! Each couple is so cute in their own way.

Yay! :)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!
Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
16 Mar 2008
Awwwwww! *takes Rodney and John and smushes them together*

They are such lovely boys! Ronon and Carson, too!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, thanks!
Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
06 Apr 2008
"Sam Carter? Everyone in the city has shoot-on-sight orders for her,"

I love this! I mean, I loved the whole chapter, but this line had me laughing so hard!

And of course, I agree with him on the sentiment behind the statement...

Author's Response: Hehe, think John has a serious hate on for her? We normally like Sam but not in this universe Thanks!
Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Any Liability by lavvyan [NC-17]
[Reviews - 18]

Summary: Not to brag, but he'd never fit in there.

First time sex.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2084; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
13 Feb 2008
LOL! That was so great! I can absolutely see John and Rodney being like this with their first time. You were able to get both of their voices just right for this, too. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: "You stole all the good stuff from WoW, didn't you?"

"Shut up and play, Sheppard."


Categories: Bitextual, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1466; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
13 Feb 2008
ROFL! Oh gosh, that was too funny. I loved your character names so much. 'Knievel the Mighty'...amazing...

Author's Response: Thank you! This was a lot of fun. *g*
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Sleepy talking after returning from the planet

Spoilers for: Hide and Seek, The Storm/Eye, The Defiant One, Quarantine, Harmony



Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1304; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
13 Feb 2008
Awwww, that was so sweet! Perfect thing to start my day with. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "You knew he was married before, right McKay?" Rodney really wishes he could have gone back to Earth with John. Spoilers for Season 4 "Outcast".

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, Established Relationship, Team
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Outakes

Word count: 3170; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
14 Feb 2008
You portrayed the characters quite well with some interesting twists when it comes to Ronon. I'm surprised that Teyla didn't whack him in the head with her tray(after she was finished with her dessert)for being so mean to Rodney.

I was quite happy about John letting Rodney know that he loves him just as he is. Snark and all.
This was such an interesting read. I truly enjoyed every word. :)

Author's Response: Teyla has astonishing self-control as I am sure she wants to whack most of her team members on a frequent basis. I\'m so pleased you enjoyed it--you got exactly what I wanted to convey!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John had sent him a message, in his own words. Rodney wondered why. (Companion story to Logopetria by Lavvyan.)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, First Time, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: Logopetria

Word count: 3075; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Oct 2009; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
13 Feb 2008
This was so lovely. You truly did the first story justice.
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: It had been seven days.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1935; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Feb 2008; Published: 15 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
15 Feb 2008
*fans self* That was hot, m'dear! Whew! I have third degree burns from this. I can't wait until it's Rodney's turn... ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: "Why should I return John? Give me a good reason and I might just think about it."

This is being written for the Missing in Ascension Challenge on Wraithbait. - AU version to Tao of Rodney where Rodney ascends. This is what happens next.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 6842; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Feb 2008; Published: 16 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
19 Feb 2008
I loved this. It was so sweet how everone went to Weir with their concerns about John, even Ronon.

Also, I loved the Oreos. Who knew that they could be such a staple of a love story....

'Rodney took a deep breath and said, "You really love me John?"
John nodded. "Yes, Rodney. I do."
That was all that needed to be said.'

And it is... :)

Author's Response: Thank you for you review. I\'m glad that you like it. I thought that everyone would have gone to her to let her know what was happening. I also thought that Ronon would go to as he and John have seemed to be good friends in the series. I\'m glad you liked the Oreos. It was just something that came to mind!!!! Yes you are right. That\'s all that needed to be said!!!!\r\n\r\n
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Dearest by lavvyan [PG-13] Past Featured Story
[Reviews - 55]

Summary: 04-877-57-7G was sixteen when he was finally transferred to his owner.

Updated: 17 Feb 2008; Published: 17 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
17 Feb 2008
This was beautiful. I feel so badly for Rodney and John. I do hope that you will continue this. It's lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Chapter 1: 1/1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
06 Apr 2008
I just went through an reread this. I was in tears by the end and let me tell you, I don't cry easily.

It's so sad and heartbreaking and...wonderful.

Please write more to this. Please.

Author's Response: Ohh, again, I\'m sorry, and thank you! There\'ll be more, honest.
Chapter 1: 1/1
Really by Susan [NC-17]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: Carson was master of the prostate, the final medical frontier in men's health, where no finger probe has gone before, to exam or not to exam, that is the question . . . Sometimes Carson got really involved in his fantasies.

Can you say Med Kink?

Updated: 18 Feb 2008; Published: 17 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Feb 2008
Oh. My. God. That was...that was...*brain dribbles out of ears thinking of all the wonderful possibilities*

Author's Response: I have fans! Oh, I love it when you review. I think I\'ve been looking at thsi story for so long that it has lost its magic for me. :( I am so glad you liked it hough! Keep your fingers crossed for the next chap.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Vuja De by Quasar [NC-17]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: It's bed enough being a teenager and probably gay, but going crazy makes everything worse. Includes teen sexuality, compliant with the rules of the archive. Spoilers for many episodes up to 4x15 Outcast.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11138; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Feb 2008; Published: 18 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Feb 2008
Wow. I am highly impressed with this. I didn't get confused on past/present reading or issues. Well done. I also love young John and Rodney together. There was a hint of their future dynamic playing through that I loved.

Thank you so much for this treat! :)

Author's Response: You\'re welcome, and thanks for the comments -- I\'m really glad to know you enjoyed it!
Chapter 1: Vuja De
Foretold by thegrrrl [NC-17]
[Reviews - 10]

Summary: What if John had taken the Seer's hand? What would he have seen?

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8361; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Feb 2008; Published: 18 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Feb 2008
Wow...that was pretty dang hot if I do say so myself! *That* is how the episode should have ended. Nicely done! :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Regret by Ionaonie [PG]
[Reviews - 11]

Summary: John reflects on some of his regrets

Spoilers for Outcast



Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study, Episode Related, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4128; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2008; Published: 18 Feb 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Feb 2008
Wow. This is really good. I love reading about what's going on in John's mind while he was looking at his dad's casket. Very sad, but with some hope...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1