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Penname: merrymuse12 [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 07 Dec 2007
Membership status: Member
Reviews by merrymuse12

Summary: The Goa'uld are gone, the world is at peace and the history of the SGC is known by every schoolchild. Or is it? A once trusted friend is now the enemy while those left fight to stay alive and search for way to be free again.

Updated: 21 May 2012; Published: 11 Jan 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
01 Mar 2008
Holy Mamba Jahambas! What an update! Poor Jack...he finally gets to meet up with his friend, but gets stabbed in the heart! Sad times for him... :(

Lovely update, though! :)
Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
03 Mar 2008
I was hoping that there would be some crazy twist to the last chapter...and whoa, was there! Of course now there is another...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
26 Mar 2008
I loved how you introduced Ronon into the story. Also, I loved how you incorporated things in the show with your own ideas.

Great chapter!
Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Summary: After Rodney is held hostage on a trade mission, he starts to fall apart. When he won't admit anything's wrong, he's sent back to Earth to recover, and it's up to John to pick up the pieces.

Updated: 12 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Jan 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
12 Feb 2008
Wow...just wow. That was beautiful from beginning to end.

"Loving people makes you happy," she told him, like it was just that simple.

Stunning and so true...

Thank you so much for this.
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Jan 2008
This is so wonderful...so well done! The bit about hockey was simply brilliant! I also love how you have Madison reacting to Rodney. She may be five, but she is a smart little girl. I love how you have her pick up on Rodney's moods, too.

Delightful! I can't wait for more!
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
30 Jan 2008
OMG, that was amazing! My heart is breaking for Rodney, though. All that pain and horror locked up inside him...not good at all...
I also love the development of John and Rodney's relationship. How it is so natural for John to hold and comfort Rodney.
*sighs happily and melts into a mush puddle*

I can't wait until the next chapter!! :)
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
01 Feb 2008
Don't listen to certain drama queens that apparently can't keep their unproductive thoughts to themselves. This is a wonderful piece of work. I am quite sure that if you were to stop not only would I be upset everyone else that has praised your work would be too.
This is too beautiful...

Author's Response: No fear, hadn\'t planned on stopping. Not sure I could if I wanted to. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
06 Feb 2008
It's so good to see Rodney interacting with everyone again. It isn't his normal routine, but it's a start.
The whole water fight thing was amazing!
"Oh." Rodney grinned back, patted her on the head. "You are my favourite niece ever," he told her, and she giggled.
I laughed so hard!

Thank you so much for the treat that this is! :)
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I can't by Lenyia [PG-13]
[Reviews - 19]

Summary: Little series after Miller's Crossing. It's complete, but there can be another parts.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Episode Related, First Time, Hurt Comfort, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2876; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Mar 2008; Published: 13 Jan 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Jan 2008
You do very well with your English. Better than me, in fact, and I speak the language! This was so good. Are you going to post more to this? It was so moving.

Please???

Author's Response: Yes, I want to write more of it :)
Chapter 1: I can't

Summary: Major Lorne coming in with a paintbrush stuck to the end of his tongue had been pretty funny. On the other hand, Dr. Delatorre arriving with a sex toy stuck on his tongue had filled Jennifer's vicarious embarrassment quota for the week. She really didn't want to know what Colonel Sheppard was stuck to.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1652; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jan 2008; Published: 18 Jan 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Jan 2008
*Rolls on the floor, laughing* That was hysterical! Oh, my gosh! I am having a hard time breathing! This made my day. Only at Atlantis...*Shakes head and smiles*

Author's Response: hee! glad you enjoyed it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Omelets, diapers, Nana and Freud, and slash (but quiet slash while the baby sleeps.)

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 26959; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jan 2008; Published: 18 Jan 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
18 Jan 2008
I laughed so hard throughout! I loved the whole "Dr. Nana" thing, not to mention Ronon dragging John out of bed! This was so great! *Applause*
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Sequel to "Keep Holding On". Rodney is learning his place within the pack, but it's a long journey, and there are a lot of bumps along the road - including an offer Rodney, two months ago, would not have hesitated to take. (Appearances of Characters from SG-1. All pairings excepting McKay/Sheppard background. Spoilers for SG1 Seasons 2 and 3, and maybe more after.)

Updated: 16 Sep 2008; Published: 18 Jan 2008
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
19 Jan 2008
I read this one first and I was intrigued. I then went and read the firt part...it was fantastic! The sequl obviously makes more sense now. Ijust can't wait until you post more. Rodney and John are so good like this and so are the rest of the pack!

Author's Response: Thank you! It seems several people are reading them in reverse - which is interesting, but probably a little more confusing. I\'ll try to update soon. :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
26 Jan 2008
*dances around room* I am sooo glad that you updated! I have been looking forward to this. It's so great!

Can't wait until the next chapter!!:)

Author's Response: :) It\'s good to know you like it! Chapter three is up now, so enjoy!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
02 Feb 2008
Yay! Another great chapter! :)

Author's Response: thanks!
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
09 Feb 2008
This is so wonderful. I can't wait for your next update. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
09 Feb 2008
Oh, wow. I am so glad that you updated. And what an update it was! Rodney and John touching on the relationship topic *and* pool? Lovely...

Oh, by the way...Happy Birthday!! :)

Author's Response: I can\'t help but enjoy the idea of John and Rodney playing pool together. I don\'t know why, but I like it so very much. :) Of course, I don\'t get to insert all of my favorite ideas, but I do my best! And thank you so much! I did have a good birthday. ^_^
Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
15 Feb 2008
Yes! Another chapter! *dances around room* I just love how Rodney stood up to Kavanagh. He is finding his place in the pack slowly, but surely. I also loved that Ronon has already taken a liking to Rodney just like most of the other members of the pack.

Yay! More soon please!

Author's Response: *giggles* It\'s good to hear that everyone\'s enjoying this so much. :) One of the big things about canon that struck me was that Kavanagh wasn\'t exactly *bad*, he just didn\'t fit in - and I wanted that to carry over, with Rodney taking the place of Weir to help him find his niche. And really...who (besides Kav) doesn\'t like Rodney? He\'s just so cuddly! ;)
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
24 Feb 2008
Hmmm....interesting....

I wonder just what kind of job Carter wants Rodney to do? And what are Deceivers exactly?

It's going to be difficult to wait for the answers, but wait I must!

Thanks so much for this. Not only is it fun and entertaining, it is also thought provoking as well. :)

Author's Response: Well, that is a mystery, isn\'t it? In time, it will be revealed...or I\'ll start kicking myself for leaving things out. ^^; Deceivers - are special, special people. If you\'ve read to the most recent chapters, you should have a good idea, at the very least, of what they are.

Hurry up and wait doesn\'t really do much for the rest of us, does it? In fact, it kinda sucks.

I\'m glad that you\'re enjoying this. :) The more people that like it, the better!
Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
01 Mar 2008
Completely satisfying...for another five minutes, anyway. Then, I am probably going to start bouncing around anxiously waiting for the next update! :)

Well done!

Author's Response: lol. Well, I\'ll try to keep you satisfied for a little bit long next time, how\'s that? :) Thanks so much for your review. ^_^
Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Reviewer: merrymuse12 (Signed)
15 Mar 2008
Ooooo! Carter smells of the enemy...that could lead to all kinds of dangerous and fun trouble! :)

I am so glad that you posted this. It helped take my mind off of some stuff that is going on, and for that I thank you profusely. :)

Author's Response: It can and will. :) Let\'s face it, Carter\'s an outsider and just too darn persistent. ;)

I\'m glad to have helped you, in whatever way this did! Have a virtual hug, and I hope that everything\'s working out okay for you. ^-^
Chapter 10: Chapter 10