13 Dec 2007
John's unusual method for rescuing Rodney leads to long-term consequences for both of them.
Warning: Virgin sacrifice (with all that implies), mpreg.
Updated: 04 Mar 2006; Published: 04 Mar 2006
yep, i know you have the 'no feedback' on this one, but i gotta agree with lilac here. this fic needs no justification. me love, and have read many many times. pretty much my favourite mpreg fiction, and that encompases alot of fandoms too. and coming out of my second pregnancy myself, i can say that this is pretty on the dot with descriptions-and the caesarian. and i love this fic, and really, you shouldn't have to justify yourself. i think you rocksaw, if not for this, than for the neighborly detective and the tragic woobie widower. love your work!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the support. I\'m very happy that you enjoy it and woobie. I\'ve only written mpreg and kidfic in SG:A; there\'s just something about John and Rodney that makes me want to write them as family men.
Written for the LJ Atlantis kink challenge details are as follows: I'd like to see something involving bondage (collars/leashes in particular) with some light d/s, possessiveness, and some biting is a definite plus. If Sheppard is in it, dog tags are a welcome addition. With a happy ending, & no non-con. Pretty much would like McKay with Beckett and/or Sheppard and/or Zelenka.
Updated: 05 Apr 2008; Published: 17 Apr 2006
and of course you will be writing all about the training right? me want more!!! was so good!! and this is my favourite threesome setup. carson is a natural dom, and john is definetely a switch to me. and rodney as the pushy bottom sub. absolutely fantastic. thanks so much!!!!
Author's Response: Truth told, cause I hate to disappoint, but the thing is I\'m a seriously slow writer--if I continued it\'d probably be another 2 years before it got posted. Also it probably wouldn\'t go in the direction you\'d expect; Carson has this way... *nods* yeah he does ;-)\r\n\r\nThough seriously, thank you!!!
"Orbital planetary defense system. With a multidirectional railgun." Rodney teases John with imaginary toys.
Updated: 02 Sep 2006; Published: 02 Sep 2006
"i'm thinking we should get dressed" *howls with laughter* fantastic. urk, getting stitch, you evilness. i can't even find the words to describe the hilarity of this ficlet. thanks and humble offerings for this divine offering, i bask in your magnificence.
total crack up. *helpless giggles*
Sheppard's team is sent to investigate an Ancient research satellite, and find ZPMs. But then, McKay starts to act strangely...even violently. Friendship, hurt, comfort and angst.
Updated: 17 Jul 2008; Published: 03 Nov 2006
ok, that is just MEAN!! wow. this was seriously screwed you know. completely messed up. no, i mean it, totally and utterly fucked up. i LOVED it. but that end bit. that's just taking the whole 'mess with the readers head' a little far. total freak out. totally awesome. keep up the good work!!
Rodney realizes the military has shorted the Atlantis expedition.
Updated: 13 Apr 2007; Published: 05 Mar 2007
ok, you were totally right. loved it. the 'Dibs on Weir' and the imagery of him scrambling out of the mess. that followed by Ford's poker face, and the whole open relationship, 'I don't want to pass up an opportunity like that'. bloody brilliant, complete crack. normally refuse to read het, but this was just fantastic!!! didn't really go for 'liberty' that much cause i'm aussie and have no understanding of 'republican'. me clueless. but this, this was genius. a fic worthy of a genius even. rodney would be pleased. kudos!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. *g* \r\n\r\nI think this story really ought to be more Gen than Het, but then it\'s not really Gen either ... we\'ve never been able to classify it.
Chapter 1: Breeding Ground
ok, just read it another couple of times and this just is so hilarious as is, but it also has so much comedic potential, which sends me into more giggles. i can just picture weir's next encounter, rodney barging in to say he's found bigger quarters for them, or even better, that he'll be moving in with her!! and asking about the open relationship thing and musing on who they could get and the sudden 'ping' as he realises that weir could be hot enough to get john!!! and rodney going on about keeping it in the chain of command and that he can't expect any of the three of them to settle for less. and kinda sighing and going 'that would be so hot, you and sheppard at the same time' and then the eyes glazing as he goes off into a little daydream while elizabeth stares at him with a mixture of desperation and bemusement, not knowing whether to scream or scream even louder. there is so much giggle potential in a thousand different scenarios from this fic alone, you've lit a match under my brain-fire!! it's almost adorable his hopelesness and you almost want him to eventually win her over. well, her and john, hehe. gah, i can go to bed a happy happy woman. me LOVE!!!
Author's Response: he sudden \'ping\' as he realises that weir could be hot enough to get john!!!\r\n\r\nI can just see that \"ping\"!
Chapter 1: Breeding Ground
Summary: Fire to Air, Air to Water, with the broad Earth beneath linking them both.
A fusion between SGA and Avatar: The Last Airbender.
Updated: 08 Mar 2007; Published: 08 Mar 2007
wow. i just found this, and wow. love it. the characters were them, john and rodney, but but perfect for the roles you stuck them in to- mer and zohn. i can see this so damn clearly, it was just perfect. i love mer's horror at using his bending to harm someone else, i love john's... sorry, 'zohn's' bleak look at the life of a soldier, and of course, his meeting Zuko- so brilliant, and so very touching.
so, i think i have to say thankyou. for combining these two wonderful worlds into one fantastic story that makes my mind fly to amazing places. well done.
When Rodney learns John is attracted to him, he's determined to find a way around the rules.
Updated: 18 Jul 2007; Published: 18 Jul 2007
loved it. hot and shmoopy. just gorgeous.
John's bored at a meeting. Who's nearby? Rodney, of course!
Updated: 31 Aug 2007; Published: 30 Aug 2007
love it. absolutley love it. a mischievious john is a wonderfull thing. and the thought of rodney giving up his coffee for a blow-job- i'm suprised he agreed!!! great story, hot and funny in a quick have-five-minutes-to-read convenient kind of way. thanks!!!
Author's Response: He may love coffee, but he\'s still a *guy*. :D Thanks so much!
After the declassification of the Stargate program, John outs himself in People Magazine.
Updated: 22 Dec 2007; Published: 22 Dec 2007
luuurrrv it. fluffily endearing and sweetly amusing. fantastic offering, thanks!!!!
Rodney invites John to Jeannie's for Christmas.
Updated: 22 Dec 2007; Published: 22 Dec 2007
absolutely gorgeous. adding to my happy holidays here!!! thanks for that, and merry christmas.
FBI Agent John Sheppard accepts a bet that leads to a big change in his life.
Categories: Slash Pairings
Characters: Aiden Ford
, John Sheppard
, Major Lorne
, Radek Zelenka
, Rodney McKay
, Ronon Dex
, Samantha Carter
, Steven Caldwell
, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
, First Time
Chapters: 21 [Table of Contents
Word count: 59262; Completed: No
Updated: 22 Feb 2010; Published: 29 Dec 2007
really really want some more of this story!!! where is john taking him saturday? and will there be kissage after/during/before? and will rodney find out about the bet? and will he be pissed or 'whatever'? grrr, this always leaves me so impatient for more!!! thanks for update!!
Author's Response: I\'ve made a start on the next chapter today and I hope to have it ready to upload as soon as possible. Sorry my slow rate of writing makes you (and others) impatient. Initially, I\'d considered only posting this story when it was completed, but in all honesty I need the extra impetus provided by having readers waiting for the next installment. I\'m really glad you\'re enjoying the story :D
*wriggles happily* the boys are just so CUTE!!! how thoughtful of john!!! wonder when he will get a clue over his own motivations? or has he already figured himself out? i love that rodney can't help but open up for john. oh, me love the boys!!!
thanks for another update darling!! is wonderful that you are able to do them so quickly for us. thankyou thankyou thankyou!!!
*wriggles some more in contentment*
Author's Response: You\'re quite right - John does not have a clue why he is behaving the way he is; Rodney has bit more of a clue but not much. So glad you are still enjoying it - I\'m doing my best to keep the chapters coming :)
i don't mind this story taking longer to tell. is wonderful story. and i enjoy each new piece so very much. the boys just make me melt into a puddle of goo in this. they need their hair petted and their bellies rubbed they are so cute!! *woobles and coos* i still have worry about the bates aspect, and i am wondering what john's reaction will be to the dawning realisation of his feelings- i'm really hoping there will be no freak out, that he goes with the flow. but then, he is a boy, and they do silly things sometimes. i love rodney in this, he is a snarky grump, but he's sesitive and shy as well, and that still works with his character. love it love it love it. shall await the nexy installment with eagerness. thanks for the update!!!!
Author's Response: Awww I love your description of the boys :) Thank you very much for your kind words about the story. I am giving lots of thought to how to write John dealing with his dawning feelings in a convincing manner - I anticipate it will be a tricky bit of writing but I think I\'ll be better able to do it by building the story slowly, I think it makes his changing feelings more realistic for the reader. I am really glad to hear you like Rodney in this story, I was worried that perhaps I wasn\'t making him Rodney-ish enough. However, to my mind this AU Rodney is simply showing characteristics that the canon character possesses and that are not given much exploration in canon SGA.
Chapter 11: The Weekend (continued)
you know what? i love you. i and my four year old son and my eleven week old baby girl are all sick with tonsillitis and we have spent the morning fighting the staff at the surgery to see my kids at least, followed by a house inspection i didn't know about in my disgusting messy "we're all sick" house, and in a rare moment of children-sleeping/children-occupied/quiet -ALL AT THE SAME TIME- i have staggered into the nearest chair, which happens to be my computer chair, and decided to indulge a little and check for wraithbait updates. and here is an update for this particularly gorgeous story. and it made me happy. me, my tea, and the gorgeous boys. may i say: john? such a sweety. i want a john to come look after me while i'm sick. *pets the boys and croons* such pretty boys....
thanks for making my day better!!!
Author's Response: Oh you poor thing, I used to get very bad tonsilitis (until I had a tonsilectomy) and it is not nice. I always found eating sorbet or drinking hot tea helpful. I am so pleased to think that I have made your day even a little bit better with my wee story :) I hope you all feel better soon!! x x x
Chapter 14: Bump in the road
*cries pitifully* as my son would say, i been waitin' long long time, and me really want an update soon cause this is my comfort story and i've been needing an aweful lot of comfort lately *sniffles*. miss updates. so i being a bitch and nagging. i nag really well, just ask hubby, i can be quite shrill. i will send cyber chocolate brownies and hot cabana boys in exchange for updates. though i realise that real life is probably stompin' all efforts to ply us with lovely boy lovin'? *sighs* real life sucks. just don't forget us totally addicted ciar fans- we're all junkies for this story and we need a fix!!!
gonna go content myself with reading all 15 chapters again. me love so much. you so rocksaw the AU mcshep.
Author's Response: *raises head above parapet and notes \'wow, there\'s a whole world out there\'* ;) I\'m so sorry you\'re suffering from my lack of updates; your pitiful cries have melted my nasty, stern, black heart and I have almost finished chapter 17 which I will upload as soon as I think it\'s good enough. I hope you and yours are feeling better since your bout of tonsilitis! Some of Chapter 16 was inspired by you and your illness. Unfortunately, I couldn\'t send John to take care of you, so I sent him to take care of Rodney instead :) Bye for now!
Chapter 15: Care and Concern
UPDATE!!!!!!! oh, i cannot even begin to describe how thrilled i am that there is an update for this. had despaired at ever seeing more woobly fbi!john and his cluesless love of snarky adorable rodney. i'm wriggling with joy at seeing this in the update list!!!! and the chapter was like, three times as long as the other chapters, and chock full of clumsy sweet oblivious man-love!!! was sooo good. poor john and his little misery fest at supposedly being kicked out. and their shoulder bumping in the kitchen over always having fun together. and their trip to the beach. and john wanting to help rodney with his sunscreen!!!! and the haaawwwt dream, mmmm. and a good feakout there, it was inevitable to have one after he (finally) figured out that he has the hots for a guy, but he didn't do anything stupid, well, not straight away. but now he has done something stupid by deciding to keep his feelings to himself. may i shake him till he sees reason? and poor woobly rodney thinking that he has let the cat out of the bag and revealed how he felt and that john's gonna hate him or something. silly boys. wanna smack them for being stupid, then pet them, then watch them get naked and sweaty together. so is there a fluffy resolution in sight for the boys? surely their torment cannot continue for too much longer? they aren't that clueless are they? though they are guys. *sigh* me wanna see shmoopy love and smut for the pretty boys. was such a good chapter darling, love it so much!!! more more more!!!!! is giving you intangible brownies of love and affection for a job very well done.
Author's Response: Gosh, your review was the first thing I saw this morning when I logged into my computer and it made me smile :) Which first thing in the morning is no mean feat (I\'m not a morning person *g*). Sorry you and other folks were worried I\'d never update the story, real life got in the way of writing for a while. I LOVE your description for the fic \"woobly fbi!john and his cluesless love of snarky adorable rodney\" perhaps I should use it as a subtitle :) I decided that I wanted to treat readers to a decent chunk of story after not updating for a while, plus I wanted to avoid cliffhangers (ultimately, I failed on that score). I\'m so glad you enjoyed the extra helpings of clueless man love. Oh and those intangible brownies were yummy - thanks :)
Chapter 17: Flashes of Insight
ok, i had to read it again, and it..they.. *sighs* there was t-shirts and maple syrup jokes, and cross-dressing teasing, and star wars lego- with ganging up on jar-jar, and "go play in the water with his plank of wood"!! *dies*, and the haawwt dream (did i mention that i love that he had an EROTIC DREAM over rodney) and rodney excitement over a SLEEPOVER and then almost kissage!!!
They. Almost. Kissed. GUH!!!
its just.. its so..
me so in love.
Author's Response: You enjoyed all the parts that I had the most fun writing for this chapter - I\'m so glad you liked all those elements :D
Chapter 17: Flashes of Insight
I am so damn happy right now, I can barely stand it. You updated!!! I squeed so hard when I glanced at wraithbait this morning. I love you so much. It does not take much to make me happy, trust me. A chapter or two a year will make me the happiest little fangirl in the world. And this was so worth the wait. The boys are clueless and in love!! The present! The breakfast! John and 'homecoming' and Rodney's surprise! A mention of John's family! The maple syrup! The snark! It's all soooo good!!!!!!
Though. Chapter name. Truth Hurts Pt 1? I am slightly apprehensive here. Bates is going to show his great ugly mug again, isn't he? Hmm, even if the next chapter is going to burn a bit, I am still looking forward to it. I can't help but love it!
Thankyou so much, dear Ciar. I hope that you have time and inspiration at your disposal real soon. You're fantastic!
Author's Response: It feels very nice to make someone feel happy :D Thank you very much for letting me know how you felt about this update. I will be finishing this story but I am not sure when I will be able to fit writing around real life (also, my muse needs frequent kicks up the bum to keep her working lol). Take care!
Chapter 21: Truth Hurts Pt 1
*sigh* so it's been months and months and months since an update to this gorgeous little morsel. *puppy eyes* and i had a hankering for oblivious!FBI john and sweetheart rodney, so i spent my day re-reading. and in the vague hope that seeing a new review for your story may spark some enthusiasm in thinking about having another go at writing again, i am reviewing to say: this is amazing. pretty pretty please may i have some more? pu-wease???? you are wonderful, i still love you even though this is a WIP (is there anything sadder than the acronym WIP?). some day, would you consider making things right for john and rodney in this? i'll make you choc-ship cookies and white rose truffles!?! promise. just, more please!!!
Author's Response: Yes, it has been a long time - sorry for that but I just have not had any free time in which to work on this story. I\'ve added the little amount that I have got done and hope it will suffice for now. Thank you very much for your kind words about the story :D
Chapter 20: Approaching Truth