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Penname: Alauralen [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 18 Feb 2008
Membership status: Member
Just a bored mother of two boys, ages 11 and 10. A bored mother who is completely in love with Michael. I just wanna cuddle the poor hybrid and make him feel all better and loved. I think he and Teyla would be great cannon on the show. I also love John and Ronon, though not together.
Yahoo IM: Alauralen
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Reviews by Alauralen

Summary: Laura Cadman is abducted off-world and rescued, but her nightmare has only begun as she starts to remember exactly what happened to her and what evil plans the Wraith have in store for humanity.

Updated: 10 Apr 2008; Published: 19 Aug 2007
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
19 Mar 2008
I just sat here and read all ten chapters and all I have to say is this is awesome! Please, please update soon! I love the characterizations and the plot. I really feel for poor Carson and Laura. What they are going through really sucks. And, I just have to say that, even though he is an evil bastard, I love Michael! I think it is mostly he is played by Connor Trinneer, who I love. He is my favorite bad guy right now and I can totally see him doing something this ingenious and devious. You're doing a great job! Please continue soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know I\'m putting them through the wringer, but what else can Michael do?! He is so very evil indeed. I\'m glad you are enjoying it and I should have the final parts out very soon.
Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
11 Apr 2008
Oh, what kind of game is Michael playing now? Great chapter! Hee hee hee! I can't wait to see exactly what is going on. Please update as soon as you can! I've been checking every day for updates, LOL.

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you are enjoying the story so much. I am planning on having the final chapter up this weekend.
Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Summary: A tag to the S4 episode Quarantine. -- He knew it was her even before the door slid open.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Ronon Dex/Other
Characters: Other, Ronon Dex
Genres: Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2053; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Jan 2008; Published: 21 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
21 Feb 2008
Aw, that was so sweet! Great job!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1

Summary: An AU bit of the scene in Doppleganger where Keller is stitching up Ronon in the infirmary.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Ronon Dex/Other
Characters: Other, Ronon Dex
Genres: Episode Related, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1630; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2008; Published: 20 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
21 Feb 2008
Yummy! This was great! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: thank you so much! :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 of 1

Summary: Teyla wakes up with no memory. Fortunately a man claiming to be her husband is on hand to help her.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Teyla Emmagan/Other
Characters: Other, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Character Study
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4137; Completed: No
Updated: 11 Sep 2008; Published: 01 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
19 Jul 2008
Hmmm... Interesting beginning! Can't wait to see the next chapter! Great job! If you have a Live Journal account, you should post this to the Teyla_Michael community.

Author's Response: Thankyou, I\'m really pleased that you liked it, I\'m going to try and post it on the Teyla_Michael community if I can figure out how to do it, lol.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
08 Aug 2008
LOL! He burnt the toast! Love the chapter and how Michael is conflicted about what he's doing. Though, he is still angry at her for what she and the Lanteans did to him. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Yeah, he burnt the toast, I\'m trying to inject some humour into the story but I don\'t want to go too far as it\'s not a comedy so I\'m glad you thought it was OK. Thankyou, even though Michael has another agenda I don\'t want him to come across as totally evil, I think that\'s possibly where the show has done things wrong for this character. I\'m glad you liked it.
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
08 Aug 2008
You've made it very realistic by not just having her jump into bed with him just because he says he's her husband. She is frustrated and confused and desperate to know who they both are. Very nicely done!

Author's Response: Thankyou, I don\'t think Teyla, even if she has lost her memories would do that.
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: Alauralen (Signed)
08 Aug 2008
I like that he didn't want to start the lies again. He felt the same way that Teyla did when they wanted to up the retrovirus and start their lies all over again. I'm glad that she went to him and told him how she was feeling. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, I think in the show Michael has always been against lies of any kind (execpt when he pretended to be Kanaan contacting Teyla), so even though he is willing to lie to her he doesn\'t like doing it. I\'m a bit busy at the moment but will try and have the next chapter done ASAP.
Chapter 4: Chapter 4