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Penname: Stormraven [Contact]
Real name: Ali Kelly Member Since: 01 Apr 2008
Membership status: Member
age 36, married, mother of a beautiful baby boy, and totally addicted to slash and yaoi. *husband rolls eyes and mutters, 'understatement'*
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Reviews by Stormraven

Summary: John loves Rodney. Rodney loves John. But then Rodney's ex makes an appearance. McKay/Sheppard. Little bit of McKay/OC

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard, Slash Pairings > McKay/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 30147; Completed: No
Updated: 12 Sep 2005; Published: 07 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
16 May 2008
Love the fic, great storyline and nice execution. Hope to see more of it.
Chapter 7: Fallout

Summary: Harry would do anything to find Sirius. SGA/HP Crossover Harry(25)/Rodney

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings
Characters: Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9806; Completed: No
Updated: 05 Jan 2006; Published: 12 Dec 2005
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
29 May 2008
OMG! I love the ending for ch 3, a tongue-tied McKay is lovely. Please continue?
Chapter 3: Welcome to Atlantis

Summary: Sequel to "Keep Holding On". Rodney is learning his place within the pack, but it's a long journey, and there are a lot of bumps along the road - including an offer Rodney, two months ago, would not have hesitated to take. (Appearances of Characters from SG-1. All pairings excepting McKay/Sheppard background. Spoilers for SG1 Seasons 2 and 3, and maybe more after.)

Updated: 16 Sep 2008; Published: 18 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
23 Aug 2009
Just got through reading your wonderful fic! Great read, had a lot of fun, interesting premise (shape-shifting) and can hardly wait for you to really get into writing the next fic in the series. Also, you know SyFy (*snerk* something nasty in Polish) is running syndication of all the seasons of SG:A in the afternoon?
Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Summary: Atlantis is shaken up when two men who aren't what they seem arrive from Earth seeking asylum from the United States government.

Categories: Crossovers > Slash Pairings, Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 15236; Completed: No
Updated: 05 Jul 2008; Published: 21 May 2008
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
26 May 2008
OMG! I love Chuck and great way to intro the characters into SG:A. Love how Chuck and Casey interact. Hope to see more in the future!
Chapter 3: Chuck vs. the Clichéd Captors

Summary: The fall of Atlantis came and went with a bang...Now McKay finds himself back at the beginning again. But there is a problem or two.

Updated: 30 Jun 2013; Published: 05 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
11 Jun 2008
OMG! Thank you for the new chapter. Love how McKay and Sheppard interact. More, please?

Author's Response: thanks and there will be more!
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
20 Jun 2008
Bloody Hell, love the new chapter. Seems Lorne also came back in time. Will Rodney and Daniel reach Ascension or will they just be highly evolved? Can hardly wait for the next post!
Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
10 Nov 2008
OMG! Love the new chapters! Had me cackling like a hyena on laughing gas.
Chapter 18: The Scenic Route...Surprise Flight
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
10 Jan 2009
Mwahahaha! Love the new chapter....ferris wheel....*snerk*

Author's Response: everyone loves the ferris wheel. i\'ve read a lot of fic where McKay tells Sheppard he won\'t build him one.\r\nwould like to see a fic where Rodney bulids one to get Sheppards attention.\r\nLOL
Chapter 19: The Scenic Route...Boy's Night
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
28 Jan 2009
Um, love the new chapter! But...was there supposed to be a chapter 20?
Chapter 19: The Scenic Route...Boy's Night
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
11 Feb 2009
Damn you, you wonderful, crazy, beautiful woman! Gah, cliffhangers, my personal bane in life....grrrr...
Chapter 21: The Scenic Route...The Plot Thickens
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
04 Jan 2010
Hi, just checking up to see if you're still alive? It has been about 5 months since you updated this fic and just want to know if you are working on it? Thanks.
Chapter 28: The Out Post...pt.1
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
02 Mar 2009
Holy crap! Love the new chapter! Very interesting how you interlaced the thoughts of McKay and Kali. So, is Kali 'crazy as a bed bug' and McKay is holding on by her fingernails? Seems like...

Author's Response: Seems like??? Tell me and i\'ll tell you if your right.
Chapter 23: The Scenic Route...Mantra Kali
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
17 Mar 2009
Ohohohoho! I foresee some thorough working over in Sheppard's future, either by McKay or by O'Neill. Have any of the other SG:Atlantis personnel come back with McKay and Sheppard, since Lorne is kicking about in this timeline?
Chapter 25: The Scenic Route...Embrace
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
05 Jul 2009
Hmmm....outpost. Will you still put in the part where Carson accidentally activates a drone? How about lighting up the command chair? Also, you can factor in using body heat and activities of the lecherous kind to stave off the chill of being so far underground. :)
Chapter 27: The Scenic Route...Purgatory
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
20 Aug 2009
Hmm, ideas...ideas.... Do you have SG-1 on dvd? maybe look at the season where SG:A starts up? There is a lot you can play with in regards to McKay's gender. How are the rest of the SGC handling McKay so far? What are their reactions to Sheppard and McKay and what just happened recently with Kali and them sleeping together? There's got to be lingering emotions and thoughts when it comes to that, no matter how socially inept McKay is. How about exploring further some of the Atlantis past situations and how it has changed McKay & Sheppard? They were definitely older when they died and were sent back in the current timeline you have going, so there is a lot of history you can play with. Will there be people they won't send to Atlantis based on McKay's and Sheppard's experiences? Some people really fubar'd, so it would be a good idea to leave them behind since they couldn't hack it in the first timeline. Is Bates going? He was pretty intolerant in the first season and just kind of faded away as the seasons passed. You just intro'd Kavanaugh, so will you play a bit more with him? He did come back at the series finale, where he was onboard Caldwell's ship as part of the bridge crew. How about the Asgard? Your current SG history will place them as still existing. How about the replicators and Ori? Maybe McKay and Sheppard will give advance advice on how to deal with them? Also, McKay and Sheppard know what's coming when it comes to the Pegasus galaxy, so will they be better stocked when it comes to supplies and staffing? Also, how about the ZPM's? McKay and Sheppard will know where to go when they get Atlantis up and running for further power. Also, how about the Genii? And the Athosians? Will Ford still be included into the expedition, even though in the Atlantis past, he got addicted to the Wraith enzyme and abandoned them? Also, what about McKay's and Jackson's ancient abilities? You haven't touched on them recently, so you have something to work with there. Hopefully, I have given you some ideas to work with and I live in anticipation of another chapter coming soon!
Chapter 28: The Out Post...pt.1
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
03 Apr 2010
Thank you! So worth the wait, LOVE how Cadman and Rodney messed with John, was giggling like a madwoman! :)
Chapter 29: Out Post Two
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
25 Jun 2010
Did I already review this chapter? If not, love McKay's and Cadman's little tease for Shepard! Write, please? Sweet cream covered McKay on top?
Chapter 29: Out Post Two

Summary: Colonel Sheppard is playing Savior of the Universe. The rest of the people on Atlantis are called back to Earth. Sheppard also has a twin brother, who's a general? Atlantis is destroyed! Add in the fact that McKay is also a woman! Well, McKay's bad temper is really understandable.

Updated: 04 Mar 2009; Published: 01 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
11 Feb 2009
Mwahaha! I needed a glorious laughing session strong enough to make me sore! Love how McKay has Sheppard like putty in her hands, or is that moldable C-4 in her hands....hmmmm?
Chapter 4: Three Months After...
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
14 Feb 2009
Hmmm...just re-read the story again. How are the rest of the old Atlantis crew taking this? McKay's relationship, her position in SGC, what are they up to? Where's Zelenka and the other essential Atlantis crew? Where's Ronon and Tayla? Were they left behind in Pegasus? McKay's hot, so, will there be competition for her from someone else?

Author's Response: Hmmm.those are some good questions. Guess i\'ll have to think of some anwers.
Chapter 4: Three Months After...
Reviewer: Stormraven (Signed)
04 Jan 2010
Hi, same spiel as PoC, it's been....10(?) months since you last updated this fic. I hope your muse hasn't up and died on you. Or are you stuck in writer's block purgatory? Hope to hear from you.
Chapter 5: Rumors...