I think I love John/Cam PWP stories. Actually, I love nearly all John/Cam stories, but this one is especially hot. And the conversation with Elizabeth was hilarious!
I absolutely love the line you used in the summary. And the image of John with his motorcycle and leather jacket. (He's a pilot--of course he has a motorcycle!) Very nice!
Author's Response: Oh, of course he does. Hee. John had to be a little different with the dirt bike, of course. \r\n
These conversations are perfect. I particularly like the conversation with Elizabeth, with Elizabeth. There wasn't enough Teyla-Elizabeth interaction on the show.