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Penname: CrystalBall [Contact]
Real name: Jenny Member Since: 24 Jun 2008
Membership status: Member
I like to write fanfiction.
Reviews by CrystalBall

Summary: "That doesn't sound so bad."

Missing scenes for 4x20: "The Last Man": the untold parts of the story preceding Rodney's idea.

Categories: General
Characters: Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter
Genres: Angst, Episode Related
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 9152; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Jun 2008; Published: 23 Jun 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
26 Jun 2008
Wow, so sad but so good! Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Chapter 1: A Mantra for These Times

Summary: The font of all love - Rodney finds John the perfect present.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2327; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Jun 2008; Published: 25 Jun 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
26 Jun 2008
Great writing! Enjoyed this one much.

Author's Response: Thank you! John and Rodney are a joy to write. Glad you liked it.
Chapter 1: Four-letter Word

Summary: Title says it all really.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1903; Completed: No
Updated: 05 Jul 2008; Published: 25 Jun 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
28 Jun 2008
Cute and funny, do more! Like, "How to resist the advances of alien priestesses/world leaders/etc." Sheppard needs one of those badly. Maybe it could be written by McKay.

Author's Response: ta xx
Chapter 1: Part One: So you've gotten yourself kidnapped?

Summary: The Ancients really did leave an awful lot of unfinished projects lying around... crack!fic. (The vaguest of season 2 and 3 spoilers)

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1084; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Jun 2008; Published: 25 Jun 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
26 Jun 2008
Funneh! love the Ancient scientists you wrote in!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: the title covers it all really.

Categories: General
Characters: Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 650; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Jul 2008; Published: 02 Jul 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
22 Dec 2008
It's funny! I like it.

Author's Response: glad you like!! x
Chapter 1: Part one: so, you're an alien too?

Summary: Two weeks in a puddle jumper in deep space. No coffee, no entertainment, no deodorant. Tagged for Midway. Crossover with the Cthulhu Mythos.

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: The Shadow Over Atlantis

Word count: 3381; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Jul 2008; Published: 08 Jul 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
13 Jul 2008
Love it! Write more like this!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: After the events in Trinity, things become uncomfortable for Rodney.

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Episode Related, Friendship, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3397; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Aug 2008; Published: 14 Aug 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
19 Aug 2008
Love it! Excellent work, especially w/McKay and Sheppard's characters!

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m really glad you enjoyed the story so much. Thanks for leaving feedback.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Kavanagh works through his life after being forced into becoming a Runner, all while clashing with Ronon.

Categories: General
Characters: Other, Ronon Dex
Genres: Action/Adventure, Challenge, Drama
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5149; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Aug 2008; Published: 29 Aug 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
31 Aug 2008
Nice one! You're great with descriptions, I could really see the settings and scenes.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: She thinks that maybe in another life she could have been someone – done something.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Sheppard/Weir
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 21056; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Aug 2008; Published: 30 Aug 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
31 Aug 2008
So imaginative and vivid--it really pulls you in! Great work.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Crack!fic, SGA meets Monty Python.

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: Original Character
Genres: Humour
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 445; Completed: Yes
Updated: 01 Oct 2008; Published: 25 Sep 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
01 Jan 2009
ROFL! Nice... =D

Author's Response: Thank you! I rather thought so myself.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Why John tortures himself

Categories: General
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Challenge, Character Study, Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2937; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Nov 2008; Published: 28 Nov 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
16 Jan 2009
Very in-character! I like it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Spaceport AU. Kavanagh has an issue with a certain member of Atlantis staff and is determined to prove his worth. Written as part of Kavtolanon Secret Santa 2008.

Categories: General
Characters: Major Lorne, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Friendship, Humour
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3455; Completed: Yes
Updated: 31 Dec 2008; Published: 31 Dec 2008
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
31 Dec 2008
You are a genius. I love your stories. Write more!!! =D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Kavanagh, McKay and daffodils.

Categories: General
Characters: Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 252; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Mar 2009; Published: 07 Mar 2009
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
14 Mar 2009
Love it! do more like this!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A serial killer is loose on Atlantis.

Categories: General
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Kate Heightmeyer, Original Character, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 11546; Completed: No
Updated: 18 Jun 2010; Published: 20 Feb 2010
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
23 Feb 2010
looks great! write more!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Making Nice by Squeaky [PG-13]
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Summary: Major Lorne's dealt with Goa'uld, Wraith and disgruntled natives, but teaching Kavanagh to paint may be more than he can stand--or more than he ever hoped for.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Carson Beckett, Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Challenge, Drama, First Time, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 14220; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jan 2012; Published: 18 Jan 2012
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
24 Nov 2013
This is absolutely amazing. The characters are well-rounded and believable and I'm really curious to know more about the backstory. You should think about maybe writing a prequel or sequel!
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: Not all ghosts go to heaven.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Other
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Challenge, Drama, Friendship, Hurt Comfort, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 18176; Completed: No
Updated: 19 Jan 2012; Published: 19 Jan 2012
Reviewer: CrystalBall (Signed)
24 Nov 2013
OMGGGGGGGGG LOVE IT SO MUCHHHH!
Chapter 1: One of One