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Penname: AliCat [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 04 Oct 2008
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Reviews by AliCat

Summary: John had always known he was different. What he had never known was there were others like him.

Updated: 05 Oct 2007; Published: 05 Oct 2007
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
04 Oct 2008
Made me flash back to Rising - I can the scenes roll by while John's thoughts flash by. Enjoyable - I'm glad there are more.
Chapter 1: Being Different
Ashes by ladyholder [G]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: The ashes of a broken trust are a bitter thing.

Updated: 07 Oct 2007; Published: 06 Oct 2007
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
04 Oct 2008
Emotionally painful - for John, for me as the reader, and I'm assuming for you as the writer. Thanks for pushing through.

Author's Response: It was. Thank you
Chapter 1: Ashes

Summary: Did his time with Chaya take something away? John has to wonder.

Updated: 17 Oct 2007; Published: 17 Oct 2007
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
04 Oct 2008
Great set up. When he reached out and couldn't feel anyone, I actually sucked in a surpirsed / scared breath. The end was that much more gratifying.
Chapter 1: The Lights Of Home

Summary: There was just no way that he was a Guide. Really.

Updated: 21 Nov 2007; Published: 21 Nov 2007
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
04 Oct 2008
Bam,bam,bam. Rodney's life goes by so quickly. I really liked the way you merged Rodney's life and personality with the Guide myth, without sacrificing the snark.

Author's Response: I really cannot see all Guides being sweetness and light. Given Rodney\'s personality in canon, he is neither. But he does *care* about people beyond all reason.
Chapter 1: The Unlikely Guide

Summary: Getting to know each other can be interesting too.

Updated: 28 Dec 2007; Published: 27 Dec 2007
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
04 Oct 2008
The coming together made me want to purr too.
Chapter 1: The Unknown Future

Summary: Choosing to stay in Pegasus wasn't complicated for the people of Atlantis. What happened next? That was where things got interesting.

Updated: 20 Jun 2011; Published: 01 Oct 2008
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
25 Oct 2008
Exploring the city and finding fun stuff - you make it exciting. Can't wait to find out more about your Atlantis - how it will learn and interact - assuming it wants too.
Chapter 4: 4 - Atlantis Chapter Two - Exploring The Neighborhood

Summary: Sentinels and Guides form a juvenile pair bond in childhood in order for Sentinels to survive. Neither John or Rodney formed that bond until they were older, which shocked both their parents, the academic community, and their governments.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, Series
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: McKay and Sheppard are Probably the Worst (and Best) Sentinel and Guide in History

Word count: 5967; Completed: Yes
Updated: 09 Dec 2009; Published: 13 Oct 2008
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
25 Oct 2008
Your take on Sentinel/Guide history and biology is fascinating. John and Rodney's personal and polical issues are very entertaining in their own right, but mesh wonderfully well with the background provided. More please.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Obsession by Madison [NC-17]
[Reviews - 10]

Summary: It was just supposed to be a stupid joke. He'd never meant for it to go this far.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Challenge, First Time, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 12782; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Dec 2008; Published: 28 Dec 2008
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
31 Dec 2008
You have such a way with lightbulbs. Its a wonder it didn't explode over John's head and leave little glass bits all over.;}

Author's Response: *snort*! We\'d never get all the pieces out of his hair...thank you, this made me grin big time!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A mysterious malfunction, freezing cold temperatures, a pair of love-struck boys, plenty of porn and the wonder-fleece saving the day – what more could you want?!

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Samantha Carter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Challenge, First Time, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8657; Completed: Yes
Updated: 29 Dec 2008; Published: 29 Dec 2008
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
31 Dec 2008
You know how sometimes when the story is themed its all about the theme? Or sometimes its really obvious what the theme is supposed to be because the rest of the story hs been forcibly attached or draped around it?

Your story doesn't do that. Everything flows so smooth. If I hadn't been looking for fleece I would have just thought it was a great story with an interesting twist. And it is, but it also works well as a fleece focus.

Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I\'m really pleased you enjoyed it. cep xxx
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Sheppard/OMC Connor Davids is a shy, quiet scientist who keeps to himself but over time finds he's lonely. John Sheppard is the man everyone wants and everyone wants to be except all he wants is quiet understanding. Can he get that from the new Dr. Davids? Can they both overcome gender to be with each other?

This story is now complete.

Updated: 29 Oct 2010; Published: 04 Mar 2009
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
10 Apr 2009
Atlantis Survival 101: How-not-to-die-or-incur-the-wrath-of-Dr.McKay. Gotta love a good orientation.
Chapter 1: Arrival
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
10 Apr 2009
I'll be honest with you, I clicked on the wrong story. I tend not to read stories that make major use of original characters unless I know the author's work or its been reccomended by someone.

That said I read enough of the first chapter to realize it wasn't the story I though but then it pulled me in and I kept reading.

Davids is almost too perfect. But you added enough stuff so far about isolation issues and shyness to balance that out. And the writing is good.
Chapter 2: Meeting
Earth by Kayleefaye [PG]
[Reviews - 16]

Summary: Atlantis is drawn into the war between the Courts, and a certain young Elemental is determined to turn the city (and its chief scientist) on its head.

Updated: 30 Jul 2009; Published: 20 Mar 2009
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
10 Apr 2009
Exactly how young is Omen? I get the impression the Drow are longer lived than humans and if thats true they would most likely have a slower maturation process. Maybe Rodney is more mature acting (at least some of the time ;] ) because he was raised human?

Author's Response: Shh! wait and see! Geez, some people...No, just kidding. You are very observant. This is actually an element later in the story.
Chapter 12: Of Expiration Dates and Hypodermic Needles
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
26 Apr 2009
Oh goody! Now we have beautiful bloodsucking vampires to go with the strangely enticing pond scum colored ones. Somedays Pegasus just gets on the last nerve.

Author's Response: That was the feeling I wanted to get across. Sometimes life just really sucks.
Chapter 16: Face of the Enemy
[Reviews - 3]

Summary: Response to a challenge on LJ. McKay and Sheppard as seen through the eyes of one of the marines.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 570; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Apr 2009; Published: 15 Apr 2009
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
26 Apr 2009
Funny. Only not, because I could so see it actually happening.

Author's Response: Thanks, AliCat. I\'m glad the story worked so well for you. :o)
Chapter 1: Light Switch Duty

Summary: But of course, his only attempt to find Rodney's snapping point not only failed; it backfired spectacularly.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: Black Helicopters

Word count: 1646; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Apr 2009; Published: 22 Apr 2009
Reviewer: AliCat (Signed)
26 Apr 2009
Tantalizing.

Is he or isn't he? Will he let him, and if so how far? Will they let either of them? I can't wait to find out.

I'm really loving this series.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1