Summary: The low spark of panic edges up Rodney's spine, fanning itself into full flame as the warm and oppressive darkness bears down on him. He'd been too intent on saving Sheppard before, then saving himself to really notice it at first, but within seconds, his breathing becomes harsh and shallow.
the ending was fantastic! i can just imagine that happening, john having to stay nonchalant to the end, no matter what he might have been feeling! great job! :D
Author's Response: I admit, I didn\'t know how to end it at first--then the title leaped into my head and the ending wrote itself. So glad you liked it--thanks!