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Penname: Severusslave [Contact]
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Reviews by Severusslave

Summary: Carson in a kilt. It really has no plot.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1069; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Jun 2005; Published: 13 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
13 Jun 2005
Mibble - Yeah that was the sound I made, then I clicked your story. *roar* nice! The visuals! :D
Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1
by []
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Summary:

Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
17 Jul 2005
The kindergarden bit. Yes. Absolutely. Wow. Brilliant. Even read it out loud to my mom who was innocently vacuuming next to me. Very loud. Now... more!
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Incomplete by rotschopf [NC-17]
[Reviews - 5]

Summary: Without you, all I'm ever going to be is incomplete

Categories: Slash Pairings > Ford/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, John Sheppard
Genres: Angst, Episode Related, First Time, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 18356; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Jul 2005; Published: 12 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
18 Jul 2005
Very nice story! Good characterization, yeah. More, please!
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Asclepius by Dr_Dredd [PG-13]
[Reviews - 6]

Summary: How far would Carson Beckett go to save a patient?

Categories: General
Characters: Carson Beckett, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 14726; Completed: Yes
Updated: 17 Jul 2005; Published: 12 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
17 Jul 2005
Very, very nice! Carson has to be given more credit! And you just did exactly that in a wonderful way. Including the Hippocratic oath was brilliant, somehow that little sentence gave amazingly great depth to the story. -Elena

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. It's unrealistic to think that he wouldn't feel guilty over his role in creating the drug, even though he tried to stop them from using it.
Chapter 1: Chapter One
Pure Genius by probodie [PG-13]
[Reviews - 2]

Summary: Written for the Zelenka Ficathon!

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Zelenka
Characters: None
Genres: First Time
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1625; Completed: Yes
Updated: 14 Jul 2005; Published: 14 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
15 Jul 2005
And again, :).

Author's Response: Thank you very much :-)
Chapter 1: -

Summary: Response to the SGAHC 5 minute fic challenge. Starting off with "Good grief! Is he...NAKED?"

Categories: General
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Challenge, Humour, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 440; Completed: Yes
Updated: 16 Jul 2005; Published: 16 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
17 Jul 2005
Beware of the Pun! Very funny. :D

Author's Response: Oh, yeah. And I'm not even the worst in my family, either. ;-)
Chapter 1: n/a

Summary: Originally written for the prime_not_prime ficathon

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: Pre-relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 8250; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jul 2005; Published: 18 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
18 Jul 2005
Sigh, your story made me happy. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback (it makes me happy!)
Chapter 1: Rest and Recreation
Idle Annoyances by Pas [PG-13]
[Reviews - 8]

Summary: Murder. Yes, that was it. He would murder the bloody Canadian with his own damnable pen. It was perfectly justifiable; Elizabeth would understand.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Beckett/McKay
Characters: Carson Beckett, Rodney McKay
Genres: Established Relationship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1058; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Nov 2005; Published: 31 Jul 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
14 Nov 2005
If a person could smugly close a laptop, Rodney McKay just had.
I love this sentence. Sooo McKay!

Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Chapter 1: Click-Click

Summary: Things are different in Atlantis. Ultra-mild spoilers for season 2 through 'runner'. POV is a season 2 character.

Categories: General
Characters: Major Lorne
Genres: Character Study, Drabble, Drama, Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 229; Completed: Yes
Updated: 05 Aug 2005; Published: 05 Aug 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
06 Aug 2005
Omg. Welcome to my life. *sigh*

Author's Response: LOL! It's that whole 'write what you know' thing. It's my life too. *g*
Chapter 1: Laptops
by []
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Summary:

Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
08 Aug 2005
You are an evil tease! I love that! More please! :)

Author's Response: LOL!! I don't mean to be... I tend not to put up incomplete stories but a couple of readers wanted to re-read earlier parts and YAHOO can be a pig so... Glad you are enjoying this one so far.
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Summary: The things McKay was willing to do for really good coffee cake...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Original Character, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Established Relationship
Warnings: None
Chapters: 25 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 42265; Completed: Yes
Updated: 21 Aug 2005; Published: 10 Aug 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
10 Aug 2005
Now this was very nice! I liked the amazing details when you described the culture of this people. And I give you two enthusiastically raised thumbs for not-jealous McShep as they handle the ladies. Who, btw, are lovely. I want to see more of this! ~Elena

Author's Response: So glad you liked! More to follow soon. Just wait! the not-jealousy gets better... wags, springwoof
Chapter 7: 7. Never Forget an Eyebrow
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
12 Aug 2005
You know I know a Jana and she looks eeriely like your character... This is weird. X.x

Author's Response: Oh wow, truly weird. I based her on someone I met once, but *that* woman's name *wasn't* Jana....
Chapter 9: 9. All About the Cuddling
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
12 Aug 2005
*applause* Rodney of Arabia, lol. I thought Moses myself. ;) Btw, more! Love ~Elena

Author's Response: hee! yeah, Moses parting the Red Sea=Rodney with ZPM aloft! I can see it, too! (snerk!) more soon, promise, just cleaning it up before I post...wags, springwoof
Chapter 13: 13. Rodney of Arabia and the Porno Flick
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
21 Aug 2005
You! You are killng me with the suspense!!!

Author's Response: Wait! no death! (at least not from suspense). I posted the last part today. You should be able to see it here soon, or at my LJ right now... hope you like it. wags, springwoof
Chapter 22: 22. Another Fine Day in Pegasus

Summary: Story 1 summary: Enemies, green beans, oatmeal, and a cart. Really. (Stories 1-30 are archived as chapters of a single story, but each is a completed standalone.)
All stories are McKay/Sheppard unless otherwise specified.
*Stories whose primary pairing is NOT McKay/Sheppard
+Stories with additional explicit pairings beyond McKay/Sheppard

*2. Doing What Comes Naturally ~ Beckett/Zelenka, McShep
+3. Gender Bender ~ McKay/Sheppard, Beckett/Zelenka, Grodin/ofc (Lindstrom)
+4. What Kavanagh Saw ~ McKay/Sheppard, Beckett/Zelenka, Teyla/Sora UST, Grodin/ofc (Lindstrom)
*7. Therapy ~ Beckett/Zelenka, McShep implied
*10. Welcome to the Madhouse ~ Maj. Lorne/Sgt. "Bryan"
*16. Positive Reinforcement ~ Beckett/Zelenka
*23. Same Time, New Galaxy ~ Cadman/O'Neill 2.0, McKay/Sheppard, Bates/Lindstrom (ofc), Beckett/Zelenka, Weir/Davis
*25. Rodney's Revenge ~ Beckett/Zelenka, McKay/Sheppard
*28. The Best Team ~ Weir/Davis


Updated: 01 Jun 2008; Published: 11 Aug 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
12 Aug 2005
Love to Rover the wondercart!
Chapter 1: Carts and Dogs
by []
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Summary:

Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Chapters: 0 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 0; Completed: No
Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
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Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
21 Aug 2005
Hee!
... Four weeks later John saw the blue t-shirt again. He stood next to Rodney, who spoke to Lt. Ford, in front of the quasi-washing machines of Atlantis and waited till his laundry would be given to him again. Freshly washed, cleaned, dried, pressed and pleasantly scented. There really were things he loved about this city.
There, his clothes appeared again. He took them and set them on a nearby chair as he saw The T-shirt. Rodney still was in the process of stuffing his own clothes into the opening of the washing machine as John grabbed it, held it up in front of him and smiled.
"Oi, waht the fuck?" said Rodney. "I like this t-shirt. It reminds me of my mother," John answered. Rodney looked at him confused and John gave him his shirt back.
"She gave me one of those in black for my fifteenth birthday," John said and went out of the laundry room, leaving Rodney and Ford standing there. Rodney wore the cutest look of confusion on his face.

Author's Response: LOL!!! That was a great additional scene... and I wonder if Rodney will catch the clue bus and act on this new knowledge :-)
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Summary: Rodney meets and falls for another blonde. But it's not what you may be thinking.

Categories: General
Characters: Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Character Study
Warnings: None
Chapters: 9 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 15869; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Sep 2005; Published: 26 Aug 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
29 Aug 2005
Oh my! This story is so ...cool! I love Eve's language, it's pretty. This needs updates, methinks.

Author's Response: "This needs updates, methinks." A/N: Yup, as I tweak away at the story, I'm attempting to get the updates in daily. Just a few more chappies to go -LOL!
Chapter 4: Chap.4 of 9

Summary: What if Elizabeth wasn't the only one to survive in the first timeline? This chapter gen.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 17861; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Oct 2007; Published: 29 Aug 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
29 Aug 2005
Now that's an intriguing plot! I'll lurk around and wait for more! Bravo!

Author's Response: Hopefully it wasn't too long to wait and the second part didn't disappoint. Thanks!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John gets more than he bargained for on an exploration of the city. John angst ensues. Pairing: Almost incidental McKay/Beckett, will be McKay/Beckett/Sheppard eventually.

Categories: Threesomes and Moresomes > Strictly slash
Characters: Aiden Ford, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Angst, Established Relationship, First Time, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 21321; Completed: Yes
Updated: 23 Oct 2005; Published: 23 Oct 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
23 Oct 2005
I adored the few Zelenka cameos; smug, little guy that he is.McKay's rant towards Weir was cool.
And, of course, the sex was brilliant and, omg, so hot.

Author's Response: Yep, you've gotta love Radek *g*. I'm glad you enjoyed Rodney putting Weir right on a few points, and yay, I'm glad you thought the sex was hot :).
Chapter 1: part 1/4

Summary: Colonel Sumner has known men like John Sheppard before. D/S.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard, Other
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 782; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Oct 2005; Published: 25 Oct 2005
Reviewer: Severusslave (Signed)
25 Oct 2005
Hell yes, I would like to leave a review!
This was brilliant. And, omg, so hot. And you know what? This leaves me satisfied and happy withthe thought that Sheppard really is happy himself. Woah. Haven't expected this from a Caldwell/Sheppard fic.
*applauses*

Author's Response: Thank you :-) That's pretty much what I was aiming for! Temaris
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