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Penname: Whistler84 [Contact]
Real name: Sana Member Since: 09 Jun 2005
Membership status: Member

Reviews by Whistler84

Summary: Five ways to live a life...

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Other
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Character Study
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2543; Completed: Yes
Updated: 12 Jun 2005; Published: 12 Jun 2005
Reviewer: Whistler84 (Signed)
13 Jun 2005
Wow. Excellent feel for a man who was in all of one episode (or was it two?). You dwelled deeply in the psyche of a man who I never really gave much consideration to, and now I'm kinda sad that he died. Excellent job. My favorite lines in this were . . . "Still, McKay was the head of the science division, and so Marshal couldn't strangle him . . . He could knock him out of the way when Cowen drew his weapon. And he could take a bullet in the skull for the man." That was unexpected and deeply moving. I hope you write more.
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