Wraithbait

Summary: John and Rodney in the first year of the expedition. Sometimes love is a journey, sometimes it's a gantlet, and sometimes it's a baptism by fire.

wow...just wow. This is one of the best stories I have ever read.

I am a huge fan of angst, and there are many writers out there, who proclaim that their story is angsty, yet when I read it, I laugh because it isn't.

This was fantastic. You balanced the angst so it didn't seem overboard and surreal. Great job hun.

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-squee-

That was perfect.

Summary: An extrapolation from "38 Minutes." John's behind the door.

That was very creepy. I kept imagining alien, and how it would burt out of his stomach.

Summary: He was dating Rodney McKay, and no one had had the decency to tell him.

That was soo funny. Great job.

Summary: Takes place right after the Defiant One. Sheppard and McKay try to reason through what happened and what is happening between them.

That was very raw, and powerful. Great job.

Concrit:

There was a time you put 'out' when it should have been 'our'.

eg. You're out best pilot.

Summary: The little things that get you through a mission.

I really enjoyed reading this. You did an awesome job.

Summary: Post-The Eye both John and Rodney are in need of a little comfort

very adorable. Really liked it.

Summary: Nobody likes seeing their friends get hurt.

Written for the Worst Case Scenario Challenge. Scenario: how to survive an avalanche. Spoilers for 38 Minutes, The Siege, and Conversion.

I liked how you made the injuries more real, and life long. Most people gloss over that, and make them heal, perfectly. I know that most people want them perfect, or to go through something tramautic and come out none the worse, but it doesn't work that way.

I loved how you portrayed them in this story. Great job, I truly enjoyed it.

Summary: Post-Duet, John asks Rodney a question and craziness ensues. Spoilers for Duet

That was hilarious! I loved how he accused John that his hair turned him gay.

Summary: Of course, Rodney didn't care if the mattress was comfortable or not, seeing as how he usually slept stretched out on top of John. His greater weight practically guaranteeing that one day John would die a horrible death smothered by the combination of Rodney and the damn extra thick bedspread that Rodney had bartered for with one of the Athosian women.

That was adorable. Great job.

Summary: Coda to "Grace Under Pressure." Rumours are flying around Atlantis about Rodney, a sexy Lt. Colonel, and a puddlejumper.

Very cute, and hilarious. I love the food analogy.

Author's Response: Thank you - it\'s always a pleasure to be able to make people laugh.

Summary: John has an unexpected visitor in the middle of night.

That was very ingenious! I loved the idea, and how you went about it. Great job.

Summary: When John sees the enemy, he shoots and kills. When he sees Rodney, he smiles, slow and open and, more often than not, a little sad, because Rodney gets it, he understands.

Very well done. I liked how you showed how John reacts to certain people of the expedition. It was well thought out, and a very good read. Thank you.

Summary: "Have you tried ear plugs?"� Rodney asks. "It's in my head, Rodney. Ear plugs don't do a lot when the voices are inside your brain!"

Neat idea. I loved the plot, it was very interesting.

Also the thought of John in Rodney's clothes, just made me "awwww" That'd be so cute to see.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the comment!

Summary: Everyone breaks.

Damn fucking awesome story you have here. I absolutely loved it. Great job. It was very intense, and yet perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! *hugs*

Summary: Like Sisyphus, Rodney keeps pushing the rock up the hill every day - until he can't.

You had me crying near the end. That was painfully, and yet beautifully written. I loved it.

Author's Response: *hands you hankie* That\'s a lovely compliment - thank you.

Summary: There might just be another reason why John and Rodney fight like cats and dogs. (Fluff warning)

very very cute.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Summary: John doesn't know when he started thinking people had to justify being happy.

Great one-shot I really enjoyed it. I'm so glad that they finally found a planet no scared and cowering in the dark. It not only brought the people joy, but John as well.

Author's Response: One of the things about humans is our almost infinite capacity for hopefulness, even in trying times. I\'m glad that came through in the story.

Summary: Everyone has their limits.

I love your writing style, and your characterization. Your dialogue was well delivetred, and Rodney sounded like Rodney. Tehre are just some people, who suck at writing him. Thank goodness you aren't one of them.

Great job. I really enjoyed this story. I will now check out your other stuff.

Summary: Um. John is a werewolf? Kind of?

Do you know of any other Werewolf!John stories? I adored this story, and it made me think about all the other possibilities that could happen.