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Penname: Kamerreon [Contact]
Real name: Kay Member Since: 17 Aug 2009
Membership status: Member

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Summary: There are things a person needs to hear, even if by coincidence.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe, Established Relationship, Hurt Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5875; Completed: Yes
Updated: 28 Nov 2008; Published: 25 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
27 Aug 2009
This was brilliant!

I did find a few errors though I wanted to let you know about since the rest was clean.

...he used on a specially interesting problem.

I think you meant 'specifically' here.

"Huh?" he asked, his tome somewhere ...

Should be 'tone'.

...abominable table members of half of his team.

Should be 'manners'.

...but his stomach war churning...

Should be 'was'.

There were a lot of amusing dialogue bits, and sweet parts too. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review and for pointing out the problems, I fixed them now. Glad you like our story, it was a lot of fun to write it and we had a blast.
Chapter 1: Communication

Summary: Various short stories written for the Cliche Bingo Challenge over at livejournal that are too short to post on their own. Prompts are:

Truth (pre-McShep)
Fairy Tale (pre-McShep)
Phobias
Road trip (McShep)
Physical imperfections (pre-McShep)
Documentation (pre-McShep)
Pretending to be married (pre-McShep)
Pregnancy (pre-McShep, onesided)
Apocafic (Crossover: HL/SGA, McShep)
Imprisonment (McKay/Keller)
"It's the way of my people" (pre-McShep)
Secret admirers (pre-McShep)
Episode tags and missing scenes (McKay/Sheppard friendship)
Closets, caves and other tight spaces (pre-McShep)
Rare pairings (Lorne/Zelenka, pre-McShep)
Woke up in bed together (McShep friendship and McShep)
Contemporary AU
Wingfic
Genderswap
Hypothermia & Extreme Cold (McShep)

See chapter notes for individual summaries. Chapter 9 is a Highlander/SGA crossover (short with 925 words).

Updated: 27 Aug 2009; Published: 30 Jul 2009
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
27 Aug 2009
Awwww! This is so cute! Great job!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! This one was fun to write :).
Chapter 2: The Doctor and the Pea
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
27 Aug 2009
This one was awesome.

Only thing: it's discreet, not discrete.

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it. And thank you for pointing that mistake out to me :)
Chapter 3: To be afraid

Summary: Slice of Life: a look at a possible future on Atlantis.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Friendship, Humour, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1763; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Mar 2010; Published: 22 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
16 Apr 2010
This is more wonderful than I could ever describe. Funny as heck, too. I especially adore this bit, because it's so childish and fit:

"Sheppard, you jerk!" Blue eyes flashed like lasers. "That's mine!"

"I don't see your name on it."
Chapter 1: Even the Best of Friends...

Summary: Love among the Peeps. Crack!fic.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 755; Completed: Yes
Updated: 03 Apr 2010; Published: 03 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
16 Apr 2010
This is so fluffy that I think I got a cavity. Well done. I love it! Your husband is a genius.

Author's Response: I think this has to be the sweetest story I\'ve ever written - glad you enjoyed it! :-D
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney didn't think John could save him this time.

A different look at how things might have gone down in S5 "Inquisition".

warnings for schmoop and grandiose speeches

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Richard Woolsey, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Episode Related, First Time, Team
Warnings: Adult themes
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5853; Completed: Yes
Updated: 15 Apr 2010; Published: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
15 Apr 2010
Very cute! I like the impassioned speeches, and the visual of Ronon ruling the court. Well done.

I hope you don't mind concrit. I found a few errors.

1) You need a space between these paragraphs:

Rodney reached out and snagged John's arm as he turned to leave. John looked down at Rodney's grip with a frown before making eye contact again.
"I couldn't let you do that." Rodney took a deep breath before plunging on rapidly. "You're part of my family, you know."

2) ". . . I didn't necessary agree with." It should be "necessarily".

3) "Never have a met a people . . ." It should be: Never have I met . . .

Author's Response: I don\'t mind concrit at all! This was written very last minute and I should have re-read it before posting. The spacing errors occurred when reposting, but I missed the other howlers there--thanks for pointing them out!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: For skidmo_fic's challenge on LJ: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover; #20 with flowers. Slash. Sheppard/?

John Sheppard brought him flowers.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1301; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Apr 2010; Published: 24 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
15 Jun 2010
Beautiful beyond words. Thank you for sharing.

Is the mystery lover Radek?

Author's Response: Thank you, and thank you for reading. And the mystery lover is whoever you want it to be. =) Cheers, Ace
Chapter 1: With Flowers

Summary: *SLASH* John/Cam

John Sheppard was almost free. But everyone knows, almost doesn't count.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Mitchell/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, John Sheppard, Original Character
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, Drama, Hurt Comfort
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 7175; Completed: Yes
Updated: 02 Jan 2011; Published: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Kamerreon (Signed)
09 Jan 2011
This is a very enjoyable piece; I'm particularly impressed with your characterization. Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reading. =) Cheers, Ace
Chapter 1: Almost Free