24 Jun 2005
Rodney uses his strengths to figure out matters of the heart.
Updated: 12 Feb 2006; Published: 13 Dec 2004
No, chapter 6 did not ‘suck eggs’. I thought that it was good, but then I think that the whole story is, so there you are. ^.^
I don’t understand the last part in chapter 7 though where Sheppard asks McKay about the scary look that cared Ford and then calls for Teyla. What is up with that part? Maybe it will come to later. I hope…
Anyway, thanks for the story, I hope that you finish it soon. I would really like to finish it, it was so much fun to read. Please, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: It was a previous chapter where Ford discovers that McKay is an evil scientist. Thanks so much for the rewivew.
Chapter 10: Chapter 8 and a half
Transformations aside, a romp through the hay brings about some unexpected results.
Updated: 07 Apr 2005; Published: 29 Dec 2004
*grin* Cool! It's a multi-part finished story! Thanks! I like long stories the best. I wonder though who won the poll. Maybe a small snippet could be added telling us that information? But only if your not busy and feel up to it.
Author's Response: It was great to finally get this thing finished. A snippet may be possible but not for awhile, unfortunatly. With unfinished stories and a few for paper zines, my plate is full at the moment but your kind words are always, always appreciated! Thank you.
It was just a standard mission until John ended up saying vows. Rodney will never live it down.
Updated: 13 Feb 2005; Published: 13 Feb 2005
I don't know what svelte even means, but it sounds good. Anyway, I enjoyed this. A lot. And I really think that it deserves a sequal. You were playing on writing one, right? Right? I hope so. Keep up the good work and thanks for posting this for all to read.
He remembers the failures. Somehow he must think of something better. (Sequel to Thirty-Six
Updated: 19 Dec 2005; Published: 21 Mar 2005
I would leave more reviews but I get so caught up in reading the reading the chapters that I don't think about it. I was very pleased when I found the sequel to ‘Thirty-six.’ I was looking for one but didn't expect to find one and there it was. ^^ Thanks for writing ‘One.’ I really like this series. It depicts depression and sadness well and I truly enjoy reading what you have written. I hope that you can finish this. I want to know all about Rodney's horrible ex and I would like to see how the McShep relationship develops. And the final sentence at the end, it tells a lot. Because it can be dark too. Rodney can either order him to leave or can become abusive and that would force John to leave. But I know of which reference you mean. However I wonder who the other person that left Rodney was. It can’t be his ex. From what I understand she was horrible and he is better off without her. I hope you further explain how that sentence came about. And please, don't stop writing. It is a pleasure reading what you have written. Thanks for writing and posting for all fans to enjoy.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for this review. I've been waiting to continue the series once I've been able to get a few other things done for a some other people. Unfortunately it had to be postponed to accommodate my return to college and the last two weeks were also not the best. I'm glad that you enjoy these chapters and Thirty-Six as well. They've very closed to the heart of me; it's definitely good to hear that they're remaining close to life. Yes, the last line was meant to be abstract, but it will be explained in the next chapter, I promise. As well as more about his ex and bit of a closer look at how he's recovering. The McShep will be slow coming, developing as things become... more appropriate. I definitely don't plan to stop writing this, though I may have some obstacles in the way. I hope to have the next chapters up with in the month. :)
Chapter 4: Carousel Revolution
Most days, Radek appreciates it, how he and Rodney can communicate in half sentences.
Updated: 26 Jun 2005; Published: 26 Jun 2005
I really enjoyed your story 'Of Two Hours.' Very good job with Zelenka's character. You did an excellent job at depicting the thought process of someone who's native language is not English. Very well done. Thanks for writing the story for all of us to read and please, keep writing.
Sometimes, the only way up is to find the end.
Updated: 26 Jun 2005; Published: 26 Jun 2005
Brave of you to write a death fic like this. There aren't many of them and usually there ends up being a way to reverse it. It was sad, but that was what you were aiming for. Poor John... Please, keep writing. And thank you for posting this for us to read.
Author's Response: Thank you. I know. I wanted one fic out there where the character (much as it broke my head) remained dead. I hope to maybe do a second chapter for this more of the aftermath, maybe a rebound relationship. And thank you again.
Rodney learns a lesson.
Updated: 11 Apr 2011; Published: 31 Jul 2005
Very nice. I really liked it. It is too bad that there is not another part to this. It seems as if it would be possible for Rodney to make the box that he thinks will save him only to have John come to him with a confession. But that really doesn't fit the feel of this story.
I hope that you continue writing and thanks for posting this online for all to read and enjoy.
Author's Response: This was a one chapter story. I'd had a bad day and decided to take Rodney along for the ugly ride. Thanks for the response!
He'll always remember the phone call.
Updated: 25 Aug 2005; Published: 01 Aug 2005
DEPRESSING! Seriously, that was really sad. Why do you have to be such a good author? I’m almost crying here and it’s your entire fault!
Okay, so what happened to Ford? Why was Rodney alone w/ him on the planet? How were Teyla and John able to find him if they were captured? Did Ford disappear in an episode I never saw? There are a few I didn't see but I didn't think they would write Ford out. So did Ford go ballistic and tie him up in the tree? Or did something else happen? Am I even supposed to know what happens or is that part of the mystery of the story? And I am thinking that McKay committed suicide and I have decided that I hate Landry. Argh!
Okay, I'm done know. Sorry. Just confused on some parts but still really enjoyed it. Now I need to read something that's a bit happier. *brightens* I don't suppose there is something like that in you other stories is there? *runs off to check*
Author's Response: LOL! Well, I'll take that as a compliment. *hands tissues* Aww, no tears. All the questions... erm, I won't say what happened with Ford for the sake of mantaining my sanity during finals (the boy wants an interlude in this fic); Ford, whom was poisoned by Wraith Enzyme, got Rodney up in the tree and well, he wasn't very nice to Rodney. As for the suicide, that's your decision to make. Landry was a man caught up in his world only to find he'd destroyed someone elses, so I pity the fool more than hate though I know how you feel. Perhaps one day I will end the story in the fashion I really wanted, but it will only be a glimpse of happiness. And yes, I have happy stuff. Just gonna poke around since Angst is my crack of choice, lol. Again, thank you, nevynslash. I'm happy you liked it.
Strange things keep happening to Rodney's reality, and not all of them are called John Sheppard.
Updated: 02 Aug 2005; Published: 02 Aug 2005
Wow! This is such an original and creative idea. I really hope that you can manage to write a second part to this. I can't wait! Thanks for posting this. It was a pleasure to read. And hopefully everything ill work out so tht they aren't all mad at John anymore. Afterall, it was partly Rodney's fault... :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I've been having some trouble with the sequel, but finally it does seem to all be falling into place :)
'It has been two days since your friends deserted you, Dr. McKay,' Atter tutted softly. 'No one is coming for you.'
Updated: 05 Aug 2005; Published: 02 Aug 2005
O.O Cool!!!! Wow, I hope you are planing a sequel to this. I would really love to keep reading this story. Very great, please, keep wrting and posting your stories for others to enjoy.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) A sequel is indeed in the works.
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Updated: 31 Dec 1969; Published: 31 Dec 1969
'It's not what you think.' *coughs and grins* Ah, I think we can safely say that it is. :D Like the idea on how they get together here. Hopefully they can saay that way. Keep writing and posting for others to read and enjoy.
It's been one year since you left me.
Updated: 17 Aug 2005; Published: 07 Aug 2005
o.O Oh, that is exactly what I would like to think would happen. One of them dies and the other kills themself or one of them leaves the other and because they should ever be apart the ohter kills himself in his misery. Sad, but seems to work. And suprising how hardly anyone ever goes this route when writing fiction. Good job. Nice and sad. :( Thanks for writing and posting this for all to enjoy. ;)
Author's Response: thanks, it means a lot to me as it is my first fiction and in english.
Episode tag for "Runner."
Updated: 09 Aug 2005; Published: 09 Aug 2005
It's a good thing that Rodney said no to the Vanilla flavor. *makes a face* That flavor really reeks. Can’t comment about the Aqua Velva seeming as I have never smelled that and seeming as John likes Vanilla, I don't think I would like Aqua Velva either. Have you ever noticed that in fanfiction, Rodney seems to have better taste than John? Especially when it comes to names? Or maybe that's just me thinking that. :D
Author's Response: Aqua Velva is definitely a low end cologne, so, yeah, on the smell, although I'm rather fond of vanilla myself, just not as lube. /g/ Thank you for the comments.
The coffin was some of the best workmanship any had seen since their arrival.
Updated: 18 Aug 2005; Published: 18 Aug 2005
So much for me finding a happy story. I think I need to take a break from fiction and go and cry somewhere. *goes off to find a hanky*
Author's Response: Aww. *hands tissues* Thank you.
In the end, it was just him.
Updated: 19 Aug 2005; Published: 19 Aug 2005
Okay, that was sad. And what I don't understand is how they can't survive outside the city. They have friends and surely it can't be from lack of food. How horrible to think that technology would end up making us so incapable of surviving on our own. But nicely written. Thank you. ^^
Author's Response: The way I thought of it when writing the story was this - Atlantis had everyone on it. When she was destroyed, the few survivors found themselves on the mainland, including Carson, but sadly he was without supplies and so they all fell. Thank you for reading. :)
Lives are changed by the toss of a coin.
Updated: 08 Sep 2005; Published: 27 Aug 2005
yep, pure mckay, sheppard neddeling. very nicely done. i hope that you have plans for finishing this. it's simply too much fun to read.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm definitely finishing it even though John won't let me get as angsty with it as I had planned ;) thanks very much!
What if Elizabeth wasn't the only one to survive in the first timeline? This chapter gen.
Updated: 28 Oct 2007; Published: 29 Aug 2005
interesting idea! i like how it is going to be the original team that will be the ones to save Atlantis like that. So cool. Course, there is the whole what happened in the past has already happened and so there is actually no way that the plan will work becasue something will prevent it, but it is still a very cool idea and i hope that you continue writing for all of us to enjoy.
Author's Response: Well, it's no more unlikely than Elizabeth being in a stasis chamber. This timeline replaces that one, so I can pretty much guarantee an interesting arrival for the team the second time around. ;)
There was an entire pantheon of things Rodney was willing to concede could exist, even though he'd never personally witnessed evidence thereof. Time travel, for starters. Space aliens. The perfect man. But he absolutely, positively could not accept that he'd been dreaming of a guy he'd never seen before in his life, who turned out to be real.
Updated: 02 Nov 2009; Published: 02 Nov 2009
DAMN, this story was amazing! Holy cow. There is nothing I can say that can convey how much I loved this.
I was starting to think John was ascended but the end - Wow! I am totally favoring this and will definitely read it again. It's sad but written so well! Thank you so much for not only writing this, but for sharing it for others to enjoy as well.
... Its more than a little sad. I'm starting to cry. Seriously.
Amazing. Simply an amazing story.
Clueless!John finally uncovers the truth about his feelings for Rodney.
Updated: 18 Jul 2010; Published: 29 Apr 2010
I couldn't stop laughing! a costume party. perfect! and the feelings from McShep as they saw each other for the first time was set up to be taken as something else until it was revealed about the dress for the occasion. great job!! and here i was thinking Rodney was dreaming because of all the compliments he was getting in the beginning. not to say he isn't attractive or wouldn't deserve them. off to read next part.
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked it so far. I wrote this to challenge a friend of mine who said clowns cannot be sexy. :) And yes, Rodney is totally adorable and sexy but um...most people are kind of put off by his demeanor which of course is all bluster to cover his adorable sweetness. Which of course is totally obvious when someone dresses like a clown because he wants to be \"scary\". I have a thing for firemen myself. RAWR! Hope you like the smex that\'s in the rest ofi t.
I'm with you. i love firemen also. wanted to join the company at one point but the test was brutal and i never passed.
well, john's dislike of clowns is gone now right. can't think of better therapy than this.
i love the detail you provided for each article of clothing. and i shouldn't have been worried in the slightest that you would forget about the face paint.
brilliantly written and i hope you continue to write and post for all to enjoy.