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Penname: nevynslash [Contact]
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Disguised by oceania [NC-17]
[Reviews - 18]

Summary: Clueless!John finally uncovers the truth about his feelings for Rodney.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Jennifer Keller, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: First Time, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 5022; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Jul 2010; Published: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
03 Sep 2011
forgot to add that i thought the lemon thing was so sweetly unconscious of John ^^
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Forging Bonds by Belvella [NC-17]
[Reviews - 76]

Summary: In a universe where shape shifters and rangers with super senses are a common occurrence. John finds out that there is someone that he truly wants and realise that he will do what ever it takes to get that one and keep him safe.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time
Warnings: None
Chapters: 19 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 56076; Completed: No
Updated: 15 Apr 2013; Published: 01 May 2010
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
05 Oct 2011
Yay you updated! Please keep writing. I really want to read more including McKay and Sheppard finally getting together. Thank you for another great chapter.
Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
19 Oct 2011
Yay, another chapter! i check frequently to see if this has been updated. I'm really enjoying this story. I shall eagerally await the next chapter. Keep writing!
Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
04 Sep 2011
Incredible story. Very unique and original.
From the beginning I was kind of hoping that there would be more dragons. like a whole city of them. but there wasn't and that is perfectly fine. and i was hoping that lorne and zelenka were together. ah well.
what was sheppard's team doing on a dangerous planet like that? especially willingly and knowing there was a wraith ship there. insane. probably gathering intel or just finished the mission so had only just found out. but they are still nuts for going in the first place.
dr. biro does't deserver her degree. >.< not willing to help immediately because of dragons. how spineless and ugh! its easy for me to judge since i'm not in her shoes, but ultimately she knows them. they aren't just random beasts. Grr.
sobol was terrible. how blind could a person be? rodney was so not dangerous. maybe she'll get better tempered with time but i'm not counting on it. and how could she seriously say that the people in this reality aren't faced with any danger? i'd say the wraith are a serious threat!
having the Satadan people still around is assume. and i like how you made the realities so different. but how come there aren't more sheppard? i'm imagining a lot of failed expeditions out there. great imagination you have. ^^
the above comments are not criticism btw. just observations. i just like to reflect on things i've read.
just a few things though that you may want to change or mention: 1. is no one worried about the problems if there happen to be two of the same person in the same reality? i thought entropic cascade failure was a major concern. 2. the section where the healing device is introduced right before the sheppard emergency doesn't flow right. and while i like the idea, it is never explained why charles can use the device. did the tok'ra give him a symbiote for a brief time? or did he survive the goa'uld possession? 3. i am such a romantic so it's no doubt just me but i really wanted sheppard to kiss mckay's forehand when hugging him after he was returned to normal. their relationship sims so clinical after a year and a half of not being being able to be truly affectionate towards each other. but again, i'm a highly affectionate person myself.
thank you so much for writing this and posting it for others to enjoy. i certainly did and stayed up til 330 am reading. X.x way past my bedtime.
i hope that you continue writing. you have a lot of talent!
Chapter 1: One of One

Summary: Over two thousand years have passed since Aloneru last saw Ariondu. Reborn on Earth and given the name John Sheppard, he's almost lost hope to find his mate before his current mortal lifespan is at an end. That is, until he sits down in a chair that feels like home and a familiar voice says, "Major, think about where we are in the solar system."

Together they are off to Atlantis where they must deal with human disbelief, hostile natives, and a terrible enemy no Reincarnate mated pair has ever successfully confronted: the Wraith.

Updated: 24 Jan 2011; Published: 24 Jan 2011
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
03 Sep 2011
This story is simply amazing. after reading it i couldn't help gushing about it to those that would listen. the idea is so stunning and original! i really like the race of super powerful beings you created. and you make several good points throughout the story in regards to human perception on power. i try to keep them in mind when i begin hating Elizabeth too much. but then, i never liked her anyway.
where did you come up with this idea? do you have any thoughts on changing some of the names, making it longer and publishing it? i would certainly buy a copy. but for now, i will simply have to read this over and over.
i do have one question though. the dream in the beginning, are Rodney and John a species resembling humans that live a very long time like elves? or is it a reincarnation thing? (its a few days later so i can't remember what they are called) Because if it is because of the power, would Rodney and John live to be four thousand years old too? that would be super cool!
and i was thinking, that maybe the reason the pair that is supposed to be protecting the Pegasus galaxy aren't doing their jobs is because the wraith keep eating them before they come into their powers.
and are John and Rodney ever going to get around to sending the message to others like them?
can you tell I want to read more? ;)
thank you so much for posting this for all to enjoy!

Author's Response: *squeeee* Thank you! Hm, where did we come up with the idea? Well, we usually throw around a few ideas and then it just ...develops. We took elements of a few tropes we liked and mixed them up, developed them and voila, Reincarnates were hatched. *grin* Both Cass and I love the idea of soulmates a lot and we definitely had to have something of the likes in it. Actually, the \"living a long time\" is a Reincarnates thing. They have the possibility - when bonded and not ... you know ... deadly wounded cause someone wanted to see them dead - to live a couple of thousand years together. What race or planet they were born into at that time does not matter at all. So yes, John and Rodney definitely could live 4000 years together if they don\'t get themselves killed before that by some stupid stunt. Because yes, if one of them dies, the other one will die within a couple of weeks. If one of them dies BEFORE they found each other (meaning they didn\'t bond) the other one has a few years still, but will be weakened considerably. As for the other pairs around the galaxies ... can\'t spoil you about that. =) Thanks for the praise!
Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Summary: A box with legs on comes through the gate. Rodney tries to figure out what it is. Discworld/SGA crossover.

Categories: Crossovers > General
Characters: John Sheppard, Other, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Challenges: A box with legs
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 3232; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Sep 2011; Published: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
07 Oct 2011
O.O a discworld cross over! you know how rare these are? and i love discworld and rincewind and the luggage especially.
thank you so much for writing a story with them in it! ^^
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John and Rodney meet a shape-shifter

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Original Character, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2054; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Sep 2011; Published: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
05 Oct 2011
i didn't really pick up a slash vibe here. i think it would be more accurate to label this as gen or pre-slash.
i love how rodney finally gets a kitty. maybe merroon can stay :D
thank you for writing this and posting it for others to read and enjoy. please keep writing more mcshep!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney gets kidnapped and John comes to the rescue, but when they're both back home on Atlantis, it seems that things are only just beginning...

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Action/Adventure, First Time, Romance, Team
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 15547; Completed: Yes
Updated: 26 Sep 2011; Published: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nevynslash (Signed)
05 Oct 2011
Aww!! ^^ so sweet at the end.
This story was very interesting and I liked the history and science lesson.
Thank you for posting this for people to enjoy and please keep writing more stories. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much - I\'m glad you enjoyed the science too! ;) cep xxx
Chapter 1: Chapter 1