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Penname: Bene Violent [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: 23 Jan 2010
Membership status: Member
I don't really write (not really creative enough), but I have a good eye for grammar and spelling, so I can Beta when I have time.
Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Bene Violent

Summary: Sheppard/OMC Connor Davids is a shy, quiet scientist who keeps to himself but over time finds he's lonely. John Sheppard is the man everyone wants and everyone wants to be except all he wants is quiet understanding. Can he get that from the new Dr. Davids? Can they both overcome gender to be with each other?

This story is now complete.

Updated: 29 Oct 2010; Published: 04 Mar 2009
Reviewer: Bene Violent (Signed)
04 Feb 2010
Found a little (non grammar/spelling) error: When Eric is looking for Connor after finishing his lab report, he says "Johns to Davids" twicwe and then "Davids to Control Room." Obviously it should be Johns and not Davids. I'll let you and your beta find any syntactical errors (unless you want help?) but I'll keep you informed of glaring errors like these :D.

As for rereading it: loving it just as much the second time around :).

Author's Response: Hey, thanks. We\'re being pretty thorough and should catch them, though. My beta is much better at it than I am (for a multitude of reasons) but I shall add this to the list. Cheers, Ace
Chapter 30: Alterations
Reviewer: Bene Violent (Signed)
01 Feb 2010
So I was going over, rereading BCD (Love it btw), and I confirmed something that was nagging at me a little when I first read this. It's a minor inconsistancy, In this chapter, Jim Smith suddenly changed to Jim Ramsey and Ben Ramsey became Ben Smith (I presume). I can't recall yet if this extends into future chapters, but I'm sure I'll mention it if it does.

Author's Response: Hey thanks, I will note that. Actually my beta and I are rewriting/reediting the first twenty or so chpaters, possibly more up until when I got a beta. I know there are a ton of small typos and things like that, inconsistencies, and that\'s what we\'re looking for. So thanks for helping out a bit. And gald you like it. =) Cheers, Ace
Chapter 26: Stopping

Summary: For skidmo_fic's challenge on LJ: 50 Ways to Leave Your Lover; #20 with flowers. Slash. Sheppard/?

John Sheppard brought him flowers.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Sheppard/Other
Characters: John Sheppard
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1301; Completed: Yes
Updated: 24 Apr 2010; Published: 24 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Bene Violent (Signed)
26 Apr 2010
I think you just broke me, but that's okay, it was a lovely breaking.

Author's Response: Oh no! I hope you\'re okay. =) Glad you liked it. Cheers, Ace
Chapter 1: With Flowers