28 Mar 2010
Waking up offworld is always a confusing time. But it's worse when you don't remember how you got there in the first place.
Updated: 22 Dec 2008; Published: 22 Dec 2008
Wow. I personally wouldn't have climbed OFF Sheppard quite so quickly. Pretty sure I would have milked it for a while. Now I want to see the NEXT TIME that Teyla promised.
John Sheppard's puddle jumper crashes on an alien planet with one passenger on board - Colonel Steven Caldwell. The two men have to depend on one another if they're going to survive.
Characters: Carson Beckett
, John Sheppard
, Major Lorne
, Original Character
, Rodney McKay
, Ronon Dex
, Samantha Carter
, Steven Caldwell
, Teyla Emmagan
, Hurt Comfort
Chapters: 14 [Table of Contents
Word count: 98158; Completed: Yes
Updated: 30 Mar 2010; Published: 11 Jul 2009
Thanks for checking on that final chapter!! It was just as great as the rest. Although I think Sheppard needs to hang up his Kirking ways to settle down with Teyla. What a great character study of both Sheppard and Caldwell to a degree. I hope you will continue to write more. You really have an amazing talent with words. I'll put in my request for more Teyla/John stuff. And whump is always great with the other team members there to show their concern. Like Ronan kissing Sheppard on the forehead. And Lorne's response was priceless! Thanks so much for getting this last chapter fixed up just for me. Waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thanks again KarieSue. I\'m glad you liked the finale. I too am a big John/Teyla fan but I know not everyone is and as I wanted this one to be a general adventure for everyone I decided to give him a love interest from another angle. I too like to see the team show concern and affection for one another; I hoped the part with Ronon kissing his forehead and Lorne\'s response would be a bit of light humor at the right time and I\'m glad it worked. Thanks so much for using your time to read my story; I\'m glad it wasn\'t wasted time for you :) I appreciate you taking the time to let me know your feelings on it too. Thanks! - John
Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Final!