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Penname: not_so_fast [Contact]
Real name: Alex Member Since: 16 Apr 2010
Membership status: Member
Russian, addicted to reading, amateur slash-writer.
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Reviews by not_so_fast
Any Liability by lavvyan [NC-17]
[Reviews - 18]

Summary: Not to brag, but he'd never fit in there.

First time sex.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2084; Completed: Yes
Updated: 13 Feb 2008; Published: 13 Feb 2008
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
04 Jun 2010
I've always thought that the first time should be absolutely like this, not all those "and he was bursting into him crying with pleasure" and "their sweat mixed as they thrusted into each other" and "oh my God, it was the best thing I've ever had". Yoy're awesome as usual, thanks a lot!
Chapter 1: 1/1

Summary: Ten things John has learned from being with Evan Lorne throughout their relationship.

Updated: 10 Oct 2009; Published: 09 Oct 2009
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
31 May 2010
You know how to make people smile through tears. The guys are so alive, and I suddenly understood that happy ends - especially so extremely happy as this one - were the only ends I waited from fanfiction. Brilliant work, thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you too. And don\'t cry, this is life. But it\'s lucky that we have people who we love and loves us back to help us through. :D
Chapter 1: Ten Things John Has Learned From Being With Evan Lorne
Just As Good by Ayama_chi [PG-13]
[Reviews - 4]

Summary: After being banished from Atlanis, a very frusterated John is about to lose his mind working for the SGC. That is, until he discovers that he doesn't know his ex-XO nearly as well as he thought.

Categories: Slash Pairings > Lorne/Sheppard
Characters: Cameron Mitchell, Carson Beckett, Elizabeth Weir, Jack O'Neill, John Sheppard, Major Lorne, Other, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drama, Episode Related, Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 18111; Completed: Yes
Updated: 07 Nov 2009; Published: 06 Nov 2009
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
13 Jun 2010
It seems to me that I'm betraying my OTP but while reading your stories I believe that John and Rodney are just best friends and the only one John needs in the matter of the heart is Evan. I love the way John is open and eager to discover Lorne and isn't afraid of showing that he cares about Evan, oh, I love your Sheppard in general. Thank you so much!
*hopefully* You've mentioned McKay/Zelenka, aren't you going to write something in that direction, please? It's just because you create a wonderful image of my favourite Canadian as well and I adore your solid and clear language.

Author's Response: Thank you, for the wonderful review. It boasted my self esteem and I\'m happy to know that I can convert more people to see the beauty that is John and Evan. It\'s really quite underrated but it\'s so much more complex and so much more intense than John/Rodney. I\'m happy that you liked my story, and I can only hope that you will continue enjoying the others as well.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney's ticked at John. John does his best to make it better. Tag for The Ark. My first attempt, however pitiful and short, at smut, so reviews with constructive tips would be most appreciated.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Episode Related
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 1576; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2010; Published: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
28 Apr 2010
Your first attempt is a definite success. I adore this kind of shy and tender relationships between these guys most of all. It won't be an exaggeration to say that it's one of the best high-rated McShep stories I've ever read.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John and Rodney find a way to say what they mean without saying a word. Fluffy Valentine's McShep.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 926; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2010; Published: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
30 Apr 2010
You've moved me to tears again, thanks.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: A very old off-color joke tuned to McShep.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 346; Completed: Yes
Updated: 20 Feb 2010; Published: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
28 Apr 2010
I wonder what Rodney's face could be like after reading the letter. Making up continuations gave me ten minutes of unstoppable laughter, thank you very much.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Ford watches Teyla and does some thinking. One-sided Teyla/Ford, for Valentine's Day even though it's more depressing than romantic.

Categories: Ship Pairings > Ford/Teyla Emmagan
Characters: Aiden Ford, Teyla Emmagan
Genres: Vignette
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 864; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Feb 2010; Published: 23 Feb 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
28 Apr 2010
It's strange but I've never thought of this pairing to exist. Nevertheless I loved it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: Rodney's found a weird way to cope after the events of 'Trinity'...

This is half a tag for 'Trinity', half a songfic for Lady Gaga's 'Telephone', and half crack. Oh well.

Categories: General
Characters: John Sheppard, Radek Zelenka, Rodney McKay
Genres: Friendship, Humour
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 2031; Completed: Yes
Updated: 04 Mar 2010; Published: 02 Mar 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
28 Apr 2010
It's so nice to discover new talents in good old guys. And DJ Kavanagh - yeah, that's how I like it!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: How high a price are you willing to pay to get your hands on everything Atlantis could have ever hoped for? A slip of a tongue during an off world visit and some help from Rodney and John and his second in command are about to find out.

Updated: 24 Jul 2010; Published: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
07 Jun 2010
You were right, I liked this chapter even more, and thanks again. I've got such a strange and curious feeling because sometimes it looks like Lorne detests the whole situation, and the other moment I start to think that Lorne's mysterious beloved is John. I'm itching to see how it's going to end! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. You\'ve just reassured me in return, even if I can\'t tell you what exactly about. Until the next time :)
Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
26 May 2010
It's wonderful, so wonderful! *jumping* Oh that skilful Keller ^^
I've been melting throughout the chapter 8 and smiling widely at the boys' shock and tension as well :b God, I really need to know what exactly Lorne thinks about it all, especially about that sudden "Evan"!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I\'m happy you enjoyed the chapter. I have a feeling you\'ll like the next one even better. About what Lorne is thinking, though, only the gods of fanfiction would know because the entire fic is told from John\'s point of view. :)
Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
25 Jul 2010
Your Rodney himself is wonderful and when talking to a military person he's even better :)
I hope you'll achieve your aim and your muse won't leave you alone that easily ;)

Author's Response: Thanks :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
25 Jul 2010
And the story ended exactly how it should end. Thanks a lot, it was a great pleasure to read! Hope for some new stories!
Just one note: "'It's nice to know we're appreciated,' Evan told Rodney dryly" - I think it's Ronon, not Evan, right?
And have you entered the university, by the way? :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad to hear that you enjoyed the story.\r\nBut no, it *is* Lorne that says that, because if it was Ronon he\'d say something along the lines of \"nice to know we\'re appriciated\", without the \"it\'s\" before. And I like some Lorne/Rodney verbal sparring.\r\nAbout university - waiting for the results. Tough life. :))\r\nI don\'t know if I\'m going to write any more stories, but only time will tell. Maybe the muse will catch up on me again someday...
Chapter 13: Epilogue
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
27 Apr 2010
Amazing story, so detailed, and enormous thanks for charming Evan. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! :>
Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
29 Apr 2010
I've taken the chapter at one gulp and now I'm being torn by two wishes: to see faster rising of their feelings and to prolong the pleasure to follow your perfect narration.
And yes, "Because I'm me and you're you..." - that's the man I love ^_^

Author's Response: Oh, yes. That dialog between Rodney and Radek was a true masterpiece in my opinion... :)) Glad you like it. More to come next week
Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
19 May 2010
Thanks, it's getting more and more interesting! Never thought I would read a long none-McShep story with such a pleasant feeling :) That's exactly how I see Lorne, and John is so in character though just a little rough, imho, and painting Ronon is very nice.
And I've written some sentences down in order to remember them.

Author's Response: I\'m glad that you enjoyed it. I\'m not such a Sheppard/McKay fan because I firmly believe that McKay should be with Keller or Zelenka, and I\'m happy that more people are starting to see the beauty of Sheppard/Lorne. I hope that you would like the rest, and have no problems with you writing the sentences - just make a small note next to them with a reference :))
Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
29 Jun 2010
Oh, so many thoughts were running through my mind while reading: poor guys, and what's wrong with Noman, and I hate Shedim, and please, please, let it end without too many casualties, but the main idea is "owww, it's absolutely marvelous!". Both of them are so vulnerable in fact and it's making my heart fly.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I hope the next chapters answered your questions :))
Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
29 Jun 2010
This piece is really good and it's wonderful that something is left yet! Thanks for that and for the whole story and good luck!

Author's Response: Thank you, and now I\'m back. The epilogue is being validated even as we speak so wait for it :)
Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Summary: McKay catches Sheppard doing something he never thought he'd see.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Genres: Drabble, Pre-relationship, Pre-slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 662; Completed: Yes
Updated: 18 Apr 2010; Published: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
28 Apr 2010
Well, my jaw dropped at the very beginning as soon as I caught the idea of what he was going to do, and I didn't succeed in putting it back. Sorry for this waterfall of words but I'm shocked with delight. The songs fit John so much (especially the first, I think I've got one more favourite singer from now on), I could really see him in those trousers flying around his legs. Thanks A LOT!
Um... I'd like to translate this one too, would you mind? ^_^

Author's Response: Not at all, go right ahead! Thanks for such a lovely review!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Summary: John is a guest in Rodney's home, and has some "quality time" in Rodney's bedroom.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: AU - Alternate Universe, First Time, PWP - Plot, What Plot?
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 4052; Completed: Yes
Updated: 25 Apr 2010; Published: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
25 Apr 2010
OMG, what a wonderful conclusion! Thanks a lot!

Author's Response: You\'re welcome! And thanks for the review! :-)
Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Consequences by Kimber [NC-17]
[Reviews - 15]

Summary: AU version of post Trinity. Rodney gets sent back to Earth, and can no longer working for SGC and can't work in the Science field per contract constraints. Someone close to Rodney will pay the price when he refuses to work under the radar. John is giving Elizabeth and Jack only a few months to get Rodney back.

Categories: Slash Pairings > McKay/Sheppard
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, AU - Alternate Universe
Warnings: Character death
Chapters: 16 [Table of Contents]
Series: None

Word count: 52499; Completed: No
Updated: 01 May 2012; Published: 25 Apr 2010
Reviewer: not_so_fast (Signed)
27 Apr 2010
"Little Rodney", omg, it's lovely! Thanks!

Author's Response: LOL, yep little Rodney, and thanks so much for the review. More coming soon.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1